[典型例题]
假如你是李华，下周末你们班将举行一次聚会。在聚会上，大家想自己动手做一些喜欢吃的东西。许多同学都爱吃水果沙拉。你会做吗？请你以“How to Make a Fruit Salad”为题，写出制作水果沙拉的过程。
要求:80词左右。
[思路点拨]
高分模板
开头:点明主题,引出下文
主体:介绍水果沙拉的具体制作方法
结尾:鼓励自己动手尝试,总结全文
How to Make a Fruit Salad
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①Do you like a fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? ②Let me tell you.
③First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange. Next, cut them up. Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it. Finally, mix them together. Now you can have it.
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④Do you understand? Try it yourself.
名师点评
①同时使用两个一般疑问句,彰显写作功底。
②祈使句的使用是加分项。
③使用了 first, next, then 和 finally,思路清晰。
④结尾很有吸引力,让人产生尝试的欲望。
假如你是李华，下周末你们班将举行一次聚会。在聚会上，大家想自己动手做一些喜欢吃的东西。许多同学都爱吃水果沙拉。你会做吗？请你以“How to Make a Fruit Salad”为题，写出制作水果沙拉的过程。
要求:80词左右。
[思路点拨]
高分模板
开头:点明主题,引出下文
主体:介绍水果沙拉的具体制作方法
结尾:鼓励自己动手尝试,总结全文
How to Make a Fruit Salad
{
①Do you like a fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? ②Let me tell you.
③First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange. Next, cut them up. Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it. Finally, mix them together. Now you can have it.
{
④Do you understand? Try it yourself.
名师点评
①同时使用两个一般疑问句,彰显写作功底。
②祈使句的使用是加分项。
③使用了 first, next, then 和 finally,思路清晰。
④结尾很有吸引力,让人产生尝试的欲望。
答案：How to Make a Fruit Salad
Do you like fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? Let me tell you.
First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange. Next, cut them up. Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it. Finally, mix them together. Now the delicious fruit salad is ready.
Do you understand? Try it yourself!
Do you like fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? Let me tell you.
First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange. Next, cut them up. Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it. Finally, mix them together. Now the delicious fruit salad is ready.
Do you understand? Try it yourself!
解析：
【分析】本题要求以“How to Make a Fruit Salad”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，需遵循“引出话题—详细描述制作过程—总结鼓励”的结构。写作时要结合思维导图的步骤，用first、next、then、finally等序数词清晰呈现制作流程，开头用疑问句引出主题，结尾鼓励动手尝试，确保语言简洁，符合字数要求。
【解析】按照题目要求，先引出话题：用两个疑问句点明主题，引出下文；接着按制作顺序，依次写出需要的材料、削皮、切碎、放入碗中加酸奶、搅拌的步骤，用first、next、then、finally使逻辑清晰；最后总结并鼓励尝试，完成短文。
【答案】How to Make a Fruit Salad
Do you like fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? Let me tell you.
First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange. Next, cut them up. Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it. Finally, mix them together. Now the delicious fruit salad is ready.
Do you understand? Try it yourself!
【知识点】英语应用文写作；过程描述写作；序数词运用
【点评】本文结构清晰，严格遵循“引出话题—详细过程—总结鼓励”的框架，使用序数词使制作步骤逻辑分明，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，很好完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照题目要求，先引出话题：用两个疑问句点明主题，引出下文；接着按制作顺序，依次写出需要的材料、削皮、切碎、放入碗中加酸奶、搅拌的步骤，用first、next、then、finally使逻辑清晰；最后总结并鼓励尝试，完成短文。
【答案】How to Make a Fruit Salad
Do you like fruit salad? Do you know how to make it? Let me tell you.
First, you need an apple, a banana, an orange and some yogurt. You should peel the apple, the banana and the orange. Next, cut them up. Then, put them into a bowl, and pour the yogurt into it. Finally, mix them together. Now the delicious fruit salad is ready.
Do you understand? Try it yourself!
【知识点】英语应用文写作；过程描述写作；序数词运用
【点评】本文结构清晰，严格遵循“引出话题—详细过程—总结鼓励”的框架，使用序数词使制作步骤逻辑分明，语言简洁流畅，符合字数要求，很好完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6