主题分析
本单元写作情境属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群，涉及子主题“季节的特征与变化，季节与生活”。常见的写作任务是介绍最喜爱的季节，描写季节的气候特征、自然景色、人们的活动以及自己的感想。体裁多为说明文。
素材积累
常用短语
1. warm and windy 温暖多风
2. go swimming 去游泳
3. eat ice cream 吃冰激凌
4. turn brown 变成棕色
5. be busy doing sth 忙于做某事
6. harvest crops 收割庄稼
7. below zero 零度以下
8. make snowmen 堆雪人
9. have snowball fights 打雪仗
10. throw snowballs at each other 互相扔雪球
开头句
1. Of all the seasons, I like summer best.
在所有的季节中，我最喜欢夏天。
2. There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter.
一年有四个季节。它们是春天、夏天、秋天和冬天。
中间句
1. When spring comes, the weather gets warm and everything begins to grow.
当春天来临，天气转暖，万物开始生长。
2. The flowers begin to come out and the trees begin to turn green.
花儿开始绽放，树木开始变绿。
3. You can see bees and butterflies flying around the flowers.
你可以看到蜜蜂和蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞。
4. The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily.
气温通常较高，有时下大雨。
5. Autumn is a great season for kids to play outside. 秋天是孩子们外出玩耍的好季节。
6. I like winter best because I can have snowball fights and make snowmen.
我最喜欢冬天，因为我可以打雪仗和堆雪人。
结尾句
1. Summer is really great! 夏天真的很棒！
2. I like autumn. What about you?
我喜欢秋天。你呢？
3. A whole year's plan starts with spring. Let's take action in spring!
一年之计在于春。让我们在春天行动起来！
思路妙解
[典型例题]
请你以“My Favourite Season”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的季节。
要求：
1. 书写工整、规范，意思连贯，符合逻辑；
2. 80词左右。
My Favourite Season
[思路点拨]
高分模板
开头：概述最喜爱的季节
主体：介绍该季节的气候、景色、人们的活动
结尾：表达喜爱之情
My Favourite Season
①My favourite season is summer. Some people think the weather in summer is too hot, but I enjoy the summer in my hometown.
The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily. You can see bright flowers and green trees everywhere. The sea is blue and it looks beautiful at sunset.
I love swimming in the sea. It is really relaxing. My friends and I also like ②lying in the sun and eating ice cream on the beach. I love diving deep into the sea ③because I can see colourful fish there.
Summer is exciting and I can have many fun activities. I love summer!
名师点评
①开篇点题，表明自己最喜欢的季节；前面先列出一些人对夏天的看法，再用but连接的转折句表明自己的观点，使文章更加出彩。
②并列短语的使用丰富了文章内容。
③使用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的可读性。
本单元写作情境属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群，涉及子主题“季节的特征与变化，季节与生活”。常见的写作任务是介绍最喜爱的季节，描写季节的气候特征、自然景色、人们的活动以及自己的感想。体裁多为说明文。
素材积累
常用短语
1. warm and windy 温暖多风
2. go swimming 去游泳
3. eat ice cream 吃冰激凌
4. turn brown 变成棕色
5. be busy doing sth 忙于做某事
6. harvest crops 收割庄稼
7. below zero 零度以下
8. make snowmen 堆雪人
9. have snowball fights 打雪仗
10. throw snowballs at each other 互相扔雪球
开头句
1. Of all the seasons, I like summer best.
在所有的季节中，我最喜欢夏天。
2. There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter.
一年有四个季节。它们是春天、夏天、秋天和冬天。
中间句
1. When spring comes, the weather gets warm and everything begins to grow.
当春天来临，天气转暖，万物开始生长。
2. The flowers begin to come out and the trees begin to turn green.
花儿开始绽放，树木开始变绿。
3. You can see bees and butterflies flying around the flowers.
你可以看到蜜蜂和蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞。
4. The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily.
气温通常较高，有时下大雨。
5. Autumn is a great season for kids to play outside. 秋天是孩子们外出玩耍的好季节。
6. I like winter best because I can have snowball fights and make snowmen.
我最喜欢冬天，因为我可以打雪仗和堆雪人。
结尾句
1. Summer is really great! 夏天真的很棒！
2. I like autumn. What about you?
我喜欢秋天。你呢？
3. A whole year's plan starts with spring. Let's take action in spring!
一年之计在于春。让我们在春天行动起来！
思路妙解
[典型例题]
请你以“My Favourite Season”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的季节。
要求：
1. 书写工整、规范，意思连贯，符合逻辑；
2. 80词左右。
My Favourite Season
[思路点拨]
高分模板
开头：概述最喜爱的季节
主体：介绍该季节的气候、景色、人们的活动
结尾：表达喜爱之情
My Favourite Season
①My favourite season is summer. Some people think the weather in summer is too hot, but I enjoy the summer in my hometown.
The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily. You can see bright flowers and green trees everywhere. The sea is blue and it looks beautiful at sunset.
I love swimming in the sea. It is really relaxing. My friends and I also like ②lying in the sun and eating ice cream on the beach. I love diving deep into the sea ③because I can see colourful fish there.
Summer is exciting and I can have many fun activities. I love summer!
名师点评
①开篇点题，表明自己最喜欢的季节；前面先列出一些人对夏天的看法，再用but连接的转折句表明自己的观点，使文章更加出彩。
②并列短语的使用丰富了文章内容。
③使用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的可读性。
答案：My Favourite Season
My favourite season is summer. Some people think the weather in summer is too hot, but I enjoy the summer in my hometown.
The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily. You can see bright flowers and green trees everywhere. The sea is blue and it looks beautiful at sunset.
I love swimming in the sea. It is really relaxing. My friends and I also like lying in the sun and eating ice cream on the beach. I love diving deep into the sea because I can see colourful fish there.
Summer is exciting and I can have many fun activities. I love summer!
My favourite season is summer. Some people think the weather in summer is too hot, but I enjoy the summer in my hometown.
The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily. You can see bright flowers and green trees everywhere. The sea is blue and it looks beautiful at sunset.
I love swimming in the sea. It is really relaxing. My friends and I also like lying in the sun and eating ice cream on the beach. I love diving deep into the sea because I can see colourful fish there.
Summer is exciting and I can have many fun activities. I love summer!
解析：
【分析】
本题是英语写作题，要求以“My Favourite Season”为题写一篇介绍最喜欢季节的短文，属于“人与自然”主题下的季节类写作。解题思路为：1. 开篇点题：用转折句式引出自己最喜欢的季节，让开头更出彩；2. 主体展开：从季节的自然景色（花、树、海）和个人活动（游泳、沙滩休闲、潜水）两方面具体描写，运用并列短语和原因状语从句丰富内容；3. 结尾总结：呼应开头，表达对该季节的喜爱，确保文章连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点题，用“Some people think the weather in summer is too hot, but I enjoy the summer in my hometown.”的转折句式，既点明最喜欢的季节是夏天，又突出个人观点，使开篇更生动；
2. 主体：先介绍夏天的气候（温度高，有时大雨），再描写自然景色（到处是花和绿树，海很美），接着列举个人活动（游泳、和朋友在沙滩躺太阳吃冰淇淋、潜水看鱼），用并列短语“lying in the sun and eating ice cream”和原因状语从句“because I can see colourful fish there”丰富内容；
3. 结尾：总结夏天充满乐趣，表达对夏天的喜爱，呼应开头，使文章结构完整。
【答案】
My Favourite Season
My favourite season is summer. Some people think the weather in summer is too hot, but I enjoy the summer in my hometown.
The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily. You can see bright flowers and green trees everywhere. The sea is blue and it looks beautiful at sunset.
I love swimming in the sea. It is really relaxing. My friends and I also like lying in the sun and eating ice cream on the beach. I love diving deep into the sea because I can see colourful fish there.
Summer is exciting and I can have many fun activities. I love summer!
【知识点】
英语季节写作、英语短语运用、英语从句运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，开篇用转折句点明观点，主体从景色和个人活动展开，内容具体充实，运用了并列短语和原因状语从句提升语言丰富度，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语写作题，要求以“My Favourite Season”为题写一篇介绍最喜欢季节的短文，属于“人与自然”主题下的季节类写作。解题思路为：1. 开篇点题：用转折句式引出自己最喜欢的季节，让开头更出彩；2. 主体展开：从季节的自然景色（花、树、海）和个人活动（游泳、沙滩休闲、潜水）两方面具体描写，运用并列短语和原因状语从句丰富内容；3. 结尾总结：呼应开头，表达对该季节的喜爱，确保文章连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点题，用“Some people think the weather in summer is too hot, but I enjoy the summer in my hometown.”的转折句式，既点明最喜欢的季节是夏天，又突出个人观点，使开篇更生动；
2. 主体：先介绍夏天的气候（温度高，有时大雨），再描写自然景色（到处是花和绿树，海很美），接着列举个人活动（游泳、和朋友在沙滩躺太阳吃冰淇淋、潜水看鱼），用并列短语“lying in the sun and eating ice cream”和原因状语从句“because I can see colourful fish there”丰富内容；
3. 结尾：总结夏天充满乐趣，表达对夏天的喜爱，呼应开头，使文章结构完整。
【答案】
My Favourite Season
My favourite season is summer. Some people think the weather in summer is too hot, but I enjoy the summer in my hometown.
The temperature is usually high and sometimes it rains heavily. You can see bright flowers and green trees everywhere. The sea is blue and it looks beautiful at sunset.
I love swimming in the sea. It is really relaxing. My friends and I also like lying in the sun and eating ice cream on the beach. I love diving deep into the sea because I can see colourful fish there.
Summer is exciting and I can have many fun activities. I love summer!
【知识点】
英语季节写作、英语短语运用、英语从句运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，开篇用转折句点明观点，主体从景色和个人活动展开，内容具体充实，运用了并列短语和原因状语从句提升语言丰富度，符合写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3