写作实战 答案(含基础版范文和进阶版范文)D19
「2026湖北荆楚联盟期中」
假设你刚刚学习了制作奶酪三明治的方法,请你写一篇短文向同学们介绍其做法。
食材:黄油、两片面包、奶酪、一个西红柿、一个洋葱、一些生菜。
过程:
1.准备好食材并把西红柿和洋葱切成小块;
2.放一勺黄油在一片面包上面;
3.将切碎的西红柿和洋葱放在黄油上面;
4.放一些奶酪在上面,再放生菜在上面;
5.最后再放一片面包在顶部。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数90左右。
「2026湖北荆楚联盟期中」
假设你刚刚学习了制作奶酪三明治的方法,请你写一篇短文向同学们介绍其做法。
食材:黄油、两片面包、奶酪、一个西红柿、一个洋葱、一些生菜。
过程:
1.准备好食材并把西红柿和洋葱切成小块;
2.放一勺黄油在一片面包上面;
3.将切碎的西红柿和洋葱放在黄油上面;
4.放一些奶酪在上面,再放生菜在上面;
5.最后再放一片面包在顶部。
写作要求:
1.文中须包含所给的要点提示,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数90左右。
答案:主题写作专项
> 基础版范文
Do you want to learn to make a cheese sandwich? It's quite simple. Here is the recipe.
For a cheese sandwich, we need some butter, two slices of bread, some cheese, a tomato, an onion and some lettuce. First, cut the tomato and onion into small pieces. Next, put one spoon of butter on a slice of bread and add the cut-up tomato and onion. Then, put some cheese on them. After that, put some lettuce on the cheese. Finally, put another slice of bread on top.
The cheese sandwich is ready. Let's enjoy it!
> 进阶版范文
Let me tell you how to make a cheese sandwich.
To make a tasty cheese sandwich, we need these ingredients: some butter, two slices of bread, some cheese, a tomato, an onion and some fresh lettuce. First, cut the tomato and onion into small pieces. Next, put one spoon of butter on a slice of bread and add the cut-up tomato and onion. Then, put some cheese on them. After that, place some lettuce on the cheese. Finally, put another slice of bread on top.
Now it's time to enjoy your delicious sandwich. You can cut it in half and share it with your family.
> 基础版范文
Do you want to learn to make a cheese sandwich? It's quite simple. Here is the recipe.
For a cheese sandwich, we need some butter, two slices of bread, some cheese, a tomato, an onion and some lettuce. First, cut the tomato and onion into small pieces. Next, put one spoon of butter on a slice of bread and add the cut-up tomato and onion. Then, put some cheese on them. After that, put some lettuce on the cheese. Finally, put another slice of bread on top.
The cheese sandwich is ready. Let's enjoy it!
> 进阶版范文
Let me tell you how to make a cheese sandwich.
To make a tasty cheese sandwich, we need these ingredients: some butter, two slices of bread, some cheese, a tomato, an onion and some fresh lettuce. First, cut the tomato and onion into small pieces. Next, put one spoon of butter on a slice of bread and add the cut-up tomato and onion. Then, put some cheese on them. After that, place some lettuce on the cheese. Finally, put another slice of bread on top.
Now it's time to enjoy your delicious sandwich. You can cut it in half and share it with your family.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语实用写作题,要求介绍奶酪三明治的制作方法,需涵盖给定食材、制作步骤,词数90左右,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 确定文章为说明文,结构分为开头引出主题、中间分步骤说明制作过程、结尾收尾;2. 对应给定食材和步骤,用first、next等连接词串联,保证逻辑清晰;3. 适当发挥(如结尾提享用),控制词数符合要求,避免真实信息。
【解析】写作时按以下要点完成:①开头点明要介绍奶酪三明治的做法;②列出所需食材(黄油、两片面包、奶酪、西红柿、洋葱、生菜);③按顺序描述步骤:切西红柿和洋葱→一片面包放黄油→加切碎的西红柿和洋葱→放奶酪→放生菜→盖另一片面包,用first、next等连接词使流程连贯;④结尾说明成品完成可享用。注意词数控制在90左右,不出现真实姓名、学校。
【答案】Do you want to learn to make a cheese sandwich? It's quite simple. Here is the recipe.
For a cheese sandwich, we need some butter, two slices of bread, some cheese, a tomato, an onion and some lettuce. First, cut the tomato and onion into small pieces. Next, put one spoon of butter on a slice of bread and add the cut-up tomato and onion. Then, put some cheese on them. After that, put some lettuce on the cheese. Finally, put another slice of bread on top.
The cheese sandwich is ready. Let's enjoy it!
【知识点】英语说明文写作、步骤类表达、食材类词汇
【点评】本题考查实用型英语写作能力,贴近生活,要求清晰说明制作流程,逻辑连贯,能锻炼学生的信息整合与书面表达能力,符合初中英语写作考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时按以下要点完成:①开头点明要介绍奶酪三明治的做法;②列出所需食材(黄油、两片面包、奶酪、西红柿、洋葱、生菜);③按顺序描述步骤:切西红柿和洋葱→一片面包放黄油→加切碎的西红柿和洋葱→放奶酪→放生菜→盖另一片面包,用first、next等连接词使流程连贯;④结尾说明成品完成可享用。注意词数控制在90左右,不出现真实姓名、学校。
【答案】Do you want to learn to make a cheese sandwich? It's quite simple. Here is the recipe.
For a cheese sandwich, we need some butter, two slices of bread, some cheese, a tomato, an onion and some lettuce. First, cut the tomato and onion into small pieces. Next, put one spoon of butter on a slice of bread and add the cut-up tomato and onion. Then, put some cheese on them. After that, put some lettuce on the cheese. Finally, put another slice of bread on top.
The cheese sandwich is ready. Let's enjoy it!
【知识点】英语说明文写作、步骤类表达、食材类词汇
【点评】本题考查实用型英语写作能力,贴近生活,要求清晰说明制作流程,逻辑连贯,能锻炼学生的信息整合与书面表达能力,符合初中英语写作考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5