经典例题
你的学校将举办时装设计比赛，请根据表格提供的信息，以“My fashion design”为题，写一篇短文。词数70左右。
My fashion design
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语义连贯。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 这是我设计的一件女式衬衫。(design for)
2. 一件红色的女士衬衫与一条黑色的短裙是相配的。(go well with)
3. 它们是用皮革做成的。(be made of)
高分范文
My fashion design
Here's my design for a blouse, a skirt and a pair of boots.
The blouse is red. It's made of cotton. I think red looks smart. And a red blouse goes well with a black skirt. The skirt is made of wool. I think it looks clean and feels comfortable. It's very popular with young girls.
There is a pair of boots. They are grey. They're made of leather. The boots are light and cool.
All the girls like them. I hope you love them.
实战演练
请你根据提示，以“At the fashion show”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
【提示】1. Simon是阳光中学七年级(4)班的一名学生。
2. 他和他的同学正在为希望工程(Project Hope)举行一场时装表演。
3. 他上身穿……
4. 下身穿着一双黑色的皮鞋和一条白色的裤子……
5. ……
At the fashion show
你的学校将举办时装设计比赛，请根据表格提供的信息，以“My fashion design”为题，写一篇短文。词数70左右。
My fashion design
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语义连贯。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 这是我设计的一件女式衬衫。(design for)
2. 一件红色的女士衬衫与一条黑色的短裙是相配的。(go well with)
3. 它们是用皮革做成的。(be made of)
高分范文
My fashion design
Here's my design for a blouse, a skirt and a pair of boots.
The blouse is red. It's made of cotton. I think red looks smart. And a red blouse goes well with a black skirt. The skirt is made of wool. I think it looks clean and feels comfortable. It's very popular with young girls.
There is a pair of boots. They are grey. They're made of leather. The boots are light and cool.
All the girls like them. I hope you love them.
实战演练
请你根据提示，以“At the fashion show”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
【提示】1. Simon是阳光中学七年级(4)班的一名学生。
2. 他和他的同学正在为希望工程(Project Hope)举行一场时装表演。
3. 他上身穿……
4. 下身穿着一双黑色的皮鞋和一条白色的裤子……
5. ……
At the fashion show
答案：[遣词造句]
1. Here's my design for a blouse.
2. A red blouse goes well with a black skirt.
3. They're made of leather.
实战演练
One possible version
At the fashion show
Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates.
He is wearing a yellow shirt. It's made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. He looks cool and modern.
They hope they can raise a lot of money for Project Hope.
1. Here's my design for a blouse.
2. A red blouse goes well with a black skirt.
3. They're made of leather.
实战演练
One possible version
At the fashion show
Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates.
He is wearing a yellow shirt. It's made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. He looks cool and modern.
They hope they can raise a lot of money for Project Hope.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语材料写作题，要求以“At the fashion show”为题，根据给定提示完成70词左右的短文。解题思路：1. 明确时态为一般现在时；2. 开篇介绍人物Simon的身份、所在学校班级，以及时装秀的目的（为希望工程）；3. 描述Simon的穿着（上衣、裤子、鞋子），可结合常用短语丰富内容；4. 收尾点明活动的意义，确保语义连贯、语法正确，符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑分步完成：① 开篇介绍人物与活动：Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates. ② 描述穿着细节：He is wearing a yellow shirt. It's made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. ③ 收尾升华：He looks cool and modern. They hope they can raise a lot of money for Project Hope. 全程使用一般现在时，语言简洁，符合要求。
【答案】
At the fashion show
Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates.
He is wearing a yellow shirt. It's made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. He looks cool and modern.
They hope they can raise a lot of money for Project Hope.
【知识点】
英语材料作文、一般现在时、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题考查初中学生的英语写作能力，要求学生结合提示信息完成短文，需准确运用时态、短语，保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯，是常见的英语写作考查题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语材料写作题，要求以“At the fashion show”为题，根据给定提示完成70词左右的短文。解题思路：1. 明确时态为一般现在时；2. 开篇介绍人物Simon的身份、所在学校班级，以及时装秀的目的（为希望工程）；3. 描述Simon的穿着（上衣、裤子、鞋子），可结合常用短语丰富内容；4. 收尾点明活动的意义，确保语义连贯、语法正确，符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑分步完成：① 开篇介绍人物与活动：Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates. ② 描述穿着细节：He is wearing a yellow shirt. It's made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. ③ 收尾升华：He looks cool and modern. They hope they can raise a lot of money for Project Hope. 全程使用一般现在时，语言简洁，符合要求。
【答案】
At the fashion show
Simon is a student in Class Four, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. He is having a fashion show for Project Hope with his classmates.
He is wearing a yellow shirt. It's made of cotton. He is wearing a pair of black leather shoes and a pair of white trousers. They match his shirt very well and white matches any other colour. He looks cool and modern.
They hope they can raise a lot of money for Project Hope.
【知识点】
英语材料作文、一般现在时、常用短语运用
【点评】
本题考查初中学生的英语写作能力，要求学生结合提示信息完成短文，需准确运用时态、短语，保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯，是常见的英语写作考查题型。
【难度系数】
0.6