八、书面表达
假设你叫李明,你的一个英国朋友彼得在中国过年时收到了一些压岁钱,但是他不知道该如何处理,请用英语写一封信告诉他你的建议,并陈述建议的理由。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数70左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are having a great time in China.
Yours,
Li Ming
假设你叫李明,你的一个英国朋友彼得在中国过年时收到了一些压岁钱,但是他不知道该如何处理,请用英语写一封信告诉他你的建议,并陈述建议的理由。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数70左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are having a great time in China.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案：One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are having a great time in China. You got some lucky money during the Spring Festival, but you don't know how to use the money. Here is some advice for you.
First, you can buy school things with it, such as books, pens and rulers. These are things we need. Second, it is a good idea to use it to go travelling because travelling is your favourite activity. Also, you can put the money in the bank.
One day you may use it to help people in need or do something you want to do.
Anyway, try to use the lucky money in a meaningful way.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are having a great time in China. You got some lucky money during the Spring Festival, but you don't know how to use the money. Here is some advice for you.
First, you can buy school things with it, such as books, pens and rulers. These are things we need. Second, it is a good idea to use it to go travelling because travelling is your favourite activity. Also, you can put the money in the bank.
One day you may use it to help people in need or do something you want to do.
Anyway, try to use the lucky money in a meaningful way.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析：
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求写一封给英国朋友彼得的建议信，核心是告知其如何使用压岁钱，需覆盖三个给定方向（买学习用品、旅行、存银行）并补充理由，词数约70，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：首先承接开头点明彼得面临的压岁钱使用问题，接着分三点给出具体建议，每点搭配简单合理的理由，最后总结要合理使用压岁钱，确保所有要点都包含，语言符合英语书信的表达习惯，满足词数要求。
【解析】1. 承接开头：引出彼得收到压岁钱却不知如何使用的问题；2. 分点提建议：①买学习用品（理由：是学习所需）；②旅行（理由：符合彼得的爱好）；③存银行（理由：可用于未来想做的事）；3. 总结：强调合理使用压岁钱，完成书信写作。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are having a great time in China. You got some lucky money during the Spring Festival, but you don't know how to use the money. Here is some advice for you.
First, you can buy school things with it, such as books, pens and rulers. These are things we need. Second, it is a good idea to use it to go travelling because travelling is your favourite activity. Also, you can put the money in the bank.
One day you may use it to help people in need or do something you want to do.
Anyway, try to use the lucky money in a meaningful way.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议表达、话题词汇
【点评】本题是初中英语常见的应用文写作题，考查学生运用英语进行建议性写作的能力，结合生活实际的话题易于学生发挥，要求覆盖给定要点并补充理由，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 承接开头：引出彼得收到压岁钱却不知如何使用的问题；2. 分点提建议：①买学习用品（理由：是学习所需）；②旅行（理由：符合彼得的爱好）；③存银行（理由：可用于未来想做的事）；3. 总结：强调合理使用压岁钱，完成书信写作。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are having a great time in China. You got some lucky money during the Spring Festival, but you don't know how to use the money. Here is some advice for you.
First, you can buy school things with it, such as books, pens and rulers. These are things we need. Second, it is a good idea to use it to go travelling because travelling is your favourite activity. Also, you can put the money in the bank.
One day you may use it to help people in need or do something you want to do.
Anyway, try to use the lucky money in a meaningful way.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议表达、话题词汇
【点评】本题是初中英语常见的应用文写作题，考查学生运用英语进行建议性写作的能力，结合生活实际的话题易于学生发挥，要求覆盖给定要点并补充理由，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5