零五网 全部参考答案 学习与评价答案 2026年学习与评价江苏凤凰教育出版社七年级英语上册译林版 第141页解析答案
五、书面表达
请根据思维导图中的要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍中秋节。要求:条理清晰,语句通顺,70词左右。










答案:One possible version:
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite testival. It is a time for families to have fun.
It is on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. On that day the moon is full and bright. Usually, people enjoy the moon in the evening. It is a tradition to eat mooncakes on that day. Family members get together and enjoy a big dinner. After dinner, people light lanterns and children play with them happily.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is very interesting and meaningful. I like it very much.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求依据思维导图的三个核心要点(时间、活动、看法),用英语写一篇70词左右介绍中秋节的短文。解题时需先明确思维导图的三个要素:时间是农历八月十五,活动包含赏月、吃月饼、家庭团聚等,看法可围绕节日的意义展开;接着按“引入节日→介绍时间与活动→表达看法”的结构组织语言,确保条理清晰、语句通顺,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】首先开篇点明中秋节是自己喜爱的节日;其次说明时间为农历八月十五,当天月亮又圆又亮,介绍当天的活动:赏月、吃月饼、家人团聚吃大餐,补充点灯笼的小细节;最后表达对节日的看法,说明其有趣且有意义,完成短文写作,注意控制词数在70左右。
【答案】One possible version:
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It is a time for families to have fun.
It is on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. On that day the moon is full and bright. Usually, people enjoy the moon in the evening. It is a tradition to eat mooncakes on that day. Family members get together and enjoy a big dinner. After dinner, people light lanterns and children play with them happily.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is very interesting and meaningful. I like it very much.
【知识点】英语书面表达、节日话题写作、要点式写作
【点评】本题是常见的节日话题书面表达题,以思维导图提示核心要点,考查学生对节日相关英语词汇、句型的运用能力及语言组织能力,属于基础写作题,难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
上一页 下一页