七、书面表达
为提高学生对突发灾难的应急处理能力，校报英语专栏正在开展以 “Stay away from danger and protect ourselves” 为主题的征文活动。请根据下面的提示和要求写一篇文章，须包含所有要点，80词左右。
I would like to share something about
为提高学生对突发灾难的应急处理能力，校报英语专栏正在开展以 “Stay away from danger and protect ourselves” 为主题的征文活动。请根据下面的提示和要求写一篇文章，须包含所有要点，80词左右。
I would like to share something about
答案：One possible version:
I would like to share something about earthquakes with you.
Earthquakes are a horrible kind of natural disaster. They can cause great harm. For people, earthquakes may cause injuries or even loss of life. They can also cause buildings to fall down, leaving many people homeless.
During an earthquake, if you are indoors, hide under something firm, like a desk, and stay away from windows. If you are outside, quickly move to an open area, away from buildings, trees and power lines. After an earthquake, check yourself for injuries first. If you are fine, help those in need and follow the instructions of doctors.
I would like to share something about earthquakes with you.
Earthquakes are a horrible kind of natural disaster. They can cause great harm. For people, earthquakes may cause injuries or even loss of life. They can also cause buildings to fall down, leaving many people homeless.
During an earthquake, if you are indoors, hide under something firm, like a desk, and stay away from windows. If you are outside, quickly move to an open area, away from buildings, trees and power lines. After an earthquake, check yourself for injuries first. If you are fine, help those in need and follow the instructions of doctors.
解析：
【分析】首先，结合征文主题“Stay away from danger and protect ourselves”和表格提示，确定写作对象为地震。第一步，开头点明要分享的内容是地震；第二步，阐述地震带来的危害，分别从对人的影响（受伤、失去生命）和对建筑的影响（倒塌，导致人们无家可归）展开；第三步，分点说明地震中及地震后的应对措施，确保覆盖所有提示要点，同时控制词数在80左右，语言简洁通顺。
【解析】按照以下结构写作：1. 开头：明确要分享的内容是地震；2. 介绍地震的危害：说明地震是可怕的自然灾害，分别阐述对人、对建筑的危害；3. 说明应对措施：分地震中、地震后两部分写具体做法，调整语句使流畅自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
I would like to share something about earthquakes with you.
Earthquakes are a horrible kind of natural disaster. They can cause great harm. For people, earthquakes may cause injuries or even loss of life. They can also cause buildings to fall down, leaving many people homeless.
During an earthquake, if you are indoors, hide under something firm, like a desk, and stay away from windows. If you are outside, quickly move to an open area, away from buildings, trees and power lines. After an earthquake, check yourself for injuries first. If you are fine, help those in need and follow the instructions of doctors.
【知识点】英语书面表达、灾难话题英语
【点评】范文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁准确，符合80词左右的要求，符合征文活动的要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照以下结构写作：1. 开头：明确要分享的内容是地震；2. 介绍地震的危害：说明地震是可怕的自然灾害，分别阐述对人、对建筑的危害；3. 说明应对措施：分地震中、地震后两部分写具体做法，调整语句使流畅自然，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
I would like to share something about earthquakes with you.
Earthquakes are a horrible kind of natural disaster. They can cause great harm. For people, earthquakes may cause injuries or even loss of life. They can also cause buildings to fall down, leaving many people homeless.
During an earthquake, if you are indoors, hide under something firm, like a desk, and stay away from windows. If you are outside, quickly move to an open area, away from buildings, trees and power lines. After an earthquake, check yourself for injuries first. If you are fine, help those in need and follow the instructions of doctors.
【知识点】英语书面表达、灾难话题英语
【点评】范文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁准确，符合80词左右的要求，符合征文活动的要求。
【难度系数】0.5