四、书面表达
假如你想参加学校英语社团举办的“My school life”征文活动，请根据提示合理展开想象，写一篇征文稿。须包含所有要点，80词左右。
My school life
假如你想参加学校英语社团举办的“My school life”征文活动，请根据提示合理展开想象，写一篇征文稿。须包含所有要点，80词左右。
My school life
答案：One possible version:
My school life
My school is a nice place with many trees and flowers around. My school life starts at 7:30 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m. From Science to Art, we have different subjects to learn. Moreover, there are after-school activities like the Painting Club and the Basketball Club. There we can make many friends. The dining hall at our school is clean and tidy. There are many dishes for us to choose from. I like noodles, vegetables and beef.
I think my school life is wonderful. I can learn and grow happily here.
My school life
My school is a nice place with many trees and flowers around. My school life starts at 7:30 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m. From Science to Art, we have different subjects to learn. Moreover, there are after-school activities like the Painting Club and the Basketball Club. There we can make many friends. The dining hall at our school is clean and tidy. There are many dishes for us to choose from. I like noodles, vegetables and beef.
I think my school life is wonderful. I can learn and grow happily here.
解析：
【分析】本题要求以“My school life”为题写一篇80词左右的英语征文，需覆盖5个提示要点：学校的样貌、上下学时间、课程与课外活动、食堂情况及在校饮食、对学校生活的看法。解题思路为：先将每个提示转化为符合英语表达的句子，使用一般现在时描述日常情况，再将这些句子连贯成完整短文，注意语句通顺、用词准确，控制字数符合要求。
【解析】根据提示要点依次组织内容：1. 描述学校环境（有树和花）；2. 说明上学（7:30 a.m.）和放学（5 p.m.）时间；3. 列举课程（科学、美术等）和课外活动（绘画俱乐部、篮球俱乐部）；4. 介绍食堂（干净整洁，有多种菜品）及喜欢的食物（面条、蔬菜、牛肉）；5. 表达对学校生活的看法（精彩，能快乐学习成长），整合这些内容形成连贯短文，确保符合征文要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My school life
My school is a nice place with many trees and flowers around. My school life starts at 7:30 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m. From Science to Art, we have different subjects to learn. Moreover, there are after-school activities like the Painting Club and the Basketball Club. There we can make many friends. The dining hall at our school is clean and tidy. There are many dishes for us to choose from. I like noodles, vegetables and beef.
I think my school life is wonderful. I can learn and grow happily here.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、要点整合写作
【点评】范文全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言通顺自然，符合英语写作规范，字数控制恰当，出色完成了“My school life”的征文任务。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据提示要点依次组织内容：1. 描述学校环境（有树和花）；2. 说明上学（7:30 a.m.）和放学（5 p.m.）时间；3. 列举课程（科学、美术等）和课外活动（绘画俱乐部、篮球俱乐部）；4. 介绍食堂（干净整洁，有多种菜品）及喜欢的食物（面条、蔬菜、牛肉）；5. 表达对学校生活的看法（精彩，能快乐学习成长），整合这些内容形成连贯短文，确保符合征文要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My school life
My school is a nice place with many trees and flowers around. My school life starts at 7:30 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m. From Science to Art, we have different subjects to learn. Moreover, there are after-school activities like the Painting Club and the Basketball Club. There we can make many friends. The dining hall at our school is clean and tidy. There are many dishes for us to choose from. I like noodles, vegetables and beef.
I think my school life is wonderful. I can learn and grow happily here.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、要点整合写作
【点评】范文全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言通顺自然，符合英语写作规范，字数控制恰当，出色完成了“My school life”的征文任务。
【难度系数】0.6