三、书面表达
音乐是从耳朵直击心灵的艺术。学校英文报正在开展以“What does music bring to me?”为题的讨论。请你根据以下提示，并结合自身感悟，写一篇英语短文投稿。文章须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥。90词左右。
What does music bring to me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
音乐是从耳朵直击心灵的艺术。学校英文报正在开展以“What does music bring to me?”为题的讨论。请你根据以下提示，并结合自身感悟，写一篇英语短文投稿。文章须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥。90词左右。
What does music bring to me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
答案：One possible version:
What does music bring to me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
Music gives me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build good relationships with others. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to overcome my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding of the world. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It reminds me of the love and care my teachers and friends have given me.
Generally speaking, music enriches my life, making me feel relaxed and happy. I hope all of us will value music and make it part of our lives.
What does music bring to me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
Music gives me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build good relationships with others. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to overcome my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding of the world. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It reminds me of the love and care my teachers and friends have given me.
Generally speaking, music enriches my life, making me feel relaxed and happy. I hope all of us will value music and make it part of our lives.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达，主题是“What does music bring to me?”。解题思路：首先明确写作要求，需包含提示的三个核心要点（给希望和力量、建立良好关系、开阔眼界），结合自身感悟，词数控制在90左右；开头用比喻引出音乐的作用，接着分点对应提示内容，适当补充个人经历让内容更真实，最后总结音乐的意义，升华主题。
【解析】
1. 开头呼应题目，用比喻句引出音乐的作用：“Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.”；
2. 对应提示“give me hope and strength”，描述音乐在困境中给予力量；
3. 对应提示“build a good relationship”，补充个人经历（学吉他交朋友）让内容具体；
4. 对应提示“open my eyes”，说明音乐拓宽视野；
5. 适当补充音乐带来的回忆，最后总结音乐丰富生活，呼吁大家重视音乐。
【答案】
What does music bring to me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
Music gives me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build good relationships with others. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to overcome my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding of the world. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It reminds me of the love and care my teachers and friends have given me.
Generally speaking, music enriches my life, making me feel relaxed and happy. I hope all of us will value music and make it part of our lives.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结合个人经历使内容真实具体，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题书面表达，主题是“What does music bring to me?”。解题思路：首先明确写作要求，需包含提示的三个核心要点（给希望和力量、建立良好关系、开阔眼界），结合自身感悟，词数控制在90左右；开头用比喻引出音乐的作用，接着分点对应提示内容，适当补充个人经历让内容更真实，最后总结音乐的意义，升华主题。
【解析】
1. 开头呼应题目，用比喻句引出音乐的作用：“Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.”；
2. 对应提示“give me hope and strength”，描述音乐在困境中给予力量；
3. 对应提示“build a good relationship”，补充个人经历（学吉他交朋友）让内容具体；
4. 对应提示“open my eyes”，说明音乐拓宽视野；
5. 适当补充音乐带来的回忆，最后总结音乐丰富生活，呼吁大家重视音乐。
【答案】
What does music bring to me?
Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me.
Music gives me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life's challenges. Music helps me build good relationships with others. When I was young, I used to be shy. As I took up playing the guitar to overcome my shyness, I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, sharpen my mind, and deepen my understanding of the world. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. It reminds me of the love and care my teachers and friends have given me.
Generally speaking, music enriches my life, making me feel relaxed and happy. I hope all of us will value music and make it part of our lives.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结合个人经历使内容真实具体，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6