九、短文写作。
仔细观察图片,并阅读故事梗概,写一写孙超知错能改的故事,不少于9句。

• Sun Chao’s mother found a new pen on his desk.
She knew it was not his pen.
• It was his deskmate (同桌) Liu Yao’s. Sun Chao liked the pen very much
He took it when she was not in the classroom.
• The next morning, Sun Chao gave the pen back to Liu Yao and said sorry.
One evening, Sun Chao’s mother found a new pen on his desk.
The next morning, Sun Chao got to the classroom. Liu Yao was already at her desk.
From the story, we can learn an important lesson.
仔细观察图片,并阅读故事梗概,写一写孙超知错能改的故事,不少于9句。
• Sun Chao’s mother found a new pen on his desk.
She knew it was not his pen.
• It was his deskmate (同桌) Liu Yao’s. Sun Chao liked the pen very much
• The next morning, Sun Chao gave the pen back to Liu Yao and said sorry.
One evening, Sun Chao’s mother found a new pen on his desk.
She knew it was not his pen. “Whose pen is it?” she asked. Sun Chao’s face turned red. He said, “I’m sorry, Mum. It’s my deskmate Liu Yao’s pen. It looks so nice. I like it very much. This morning, I took it when she was not in the classroom.” Mother sat down next to him and said softly, “Chaochao, you did the wrong thing. You should be honest. Honesty is important.” Sun Chao said, “Now I understand, Mum. I’ll never do that again.”
The next morning, Sun Chao got to the classroom. Liu Yao was already at her desk.
He gave her the pen back and said, “I’m sorry, Liu Yao. I took your pen yesterday.” Liu Yao smiled and said, “It’s OK, Sun Chao. Let’s use the pen together.”
From the story, we can learn an important lesson.
We should always be honest.
答案:示例: One evening, Sun Chao’s mother found a new pen on his desk. She knew it was not his pen. “Whose pen is it?” she asked. Sun Chao’s face turned red. He said, “I’m sorry, Mum. It’s my deskmate Liu Yao’s pen. It looks so nice. I like it very much. This morning, I took it when she was not in the classroom.” Mother sat down next to him and said softly, “Chaochao, you did the wrong thing. You should be honest. Honesty is important.” Sun Chao said, “Now I understand, Mum. I’ll never do that again.”
The next morning, Sun Chao got to the classroom. Liu Yao was already at her desk. He gave her the pen back and said, “I’m sorry, Liu Yao. I took your pen yesterday.” Liu Yao smiled and said, “It’s OK, Sun Chao. Let’s use the pen together.”
From the story, we can learn an important lesson. We should always be honest.
The next morning, Sun Chao got to the classroom. Liu Yao was already at her desk. He gave her the pen back and said, “I’m sorry, Liu Yao. I took your pen yesterday.” Liu Yao smiled and said, “It’s OK, Sun Chao. Let’s use the pen together.”
From the story, we can learn an important lesson. We should always be honest.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语短文续写写作题,解题思路如下:首先衔接题干给出的开头,补充孙超妈妈发现钢笔后与孙超的对话,体现孙超拿了同桌钢笔的错误行为及愧疚;接着续写第二天孙超归还钢笔的情节,突出他知错能改的表现;最后点明故事传递的道理,确保内容不少于9句,语言逻辑连贯,符合英语表达规范。
【解析】按照题干给定的故事脉络,先补充妈妈发现钢笔后的对话,展现孙超的错误与认错过程;再续写归还钢笔的场景,体现其知错能改;最后升华主题,传递诚实的重要性,完成符合要求的短文写作。
【答案】One evening, Sun Chao’s mother found a new pen on his desk. She knew it was not his pen. “Whose pen is it?” she asked. Sun Chao’s face turned red. He said, “I’m sorry, Mum. It’s my deskmate Liu Yao’s pen. It looks so nice. I like it very much. This morning, I took it when she was not in the classroom.” Mother sat down next to him and said softly, “Chaochao, you did the wrong thing. You should be honest. Honesty is important.” Sun Chao said, “Now I understand, Mum. I’ll never do that again.”
The next morning, Sun Chao got to the classroom. Liu Yao was already at her desk. He gave her the pen back and said, “I’m sorry, Liu Yao. I took your pen yesterday.” Liu Yao smiled and said, “It’s OK, Sun Chao. Let’s use the pen together.”
From the story, we can learn an important lesson. We should always be honest.
【知识点】英语短文写作、故事续写
【点评】本题结合图片与故事梗概,考查学生的英语写作能力,引导学生树立诚实的价值观,要求情节合理、语言连贯,符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照题干给定的故事脉络,先补充妈妈发现钢笔后的对话,展现孙超的错误与认错过程;再续写归还钢笔的场景,体现其知错能改;最后升华主题,传递诚实的重要性,完成符合要求的短文写作。
【答案】One evening, Sun Chao’s mother found a new pen on his desk. She knew it was not his pen. “Whose pen is it?” she asked. Sun Chao’s face turned red. He said, “I’m sorry, Mum. It’s my deskmate Liu Yao’s pen. It looks so nice. I like it very much. This morning, I took it when she was not in the classroom.” Mother sat down next to him and said softly, “Chaochao, you did the wrong thing. You should be honest. Honesty is important.” Sun Chao said, “Now I understand, Mum. I’ll never do that again.”
The next morning, Sun Chao got to the classroom. Liu Yao was already at her desk. He gave her the pen back and said, “I’m sorry, Liu Yao. I took your pen yesterday.” Liu Yao smiled and said, “It’s OK, Sun Chao. Let’s use the pen together.”
From the story, we can learn an important lesson. We should always be honest.
【知识点】英语短文写作、故事续写
【点评】本题结合图片与故事梗概,考查学生的英语写作能力,引导学生树立诚实的价值观,要求情节合理、语言连贯,符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.6