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My 1,000-yuan plan
A Linda won 1,000 yuan in a painting contest. She is writing about how to manage the money. Read her article and learn how to write a money management plan.
My prize money plan
Clearly state the reason for writing the article.
I won 1,000 yuan in a painting contest! I am excited about winning this money. I want to manage it well. This is my plan for the money.
Use adverbs of sequence to make your plan clear.
First, I am going to save 200 yuan by putting it in the bank. It is smart to save money for later.
Use specific amounts of money to show a clear plan of spending.
Next, art is important to me and I want to share the joy of art. Instead of just giving money, I plan to use 200 yuan to buy some paints and brushes for the local children’s centre.
Use "since" to give reasons.
Since I love art,
think I should learn more about it. There is an online art course next month. It costs about 500 yuan. I can sign up for that. With my last 100 yuan, I can buy some new paints and brushes. Maybe they will help me win more contests in the future!
◆ Structure of the article ◆
Where I got the money: In a painting contest
My plan for the money
Put 200 yuan in the bank
Use 200 yuan
buy things for the local children’s centre
Spend 500 yuan on an online art course
Use 100 yuan to buy some new paints and brushes
◆ Language bank ◆
I won ... yuan in ...
I want/am going/plan to ...
It costs about ...
This is my plan for ...
I
smart to ...
Maybe they will help me ... in the future!
B Imagine you just won 1,000 yuan. How will you manage the money? Write an article about it.
My 1,000-yuan plan
A Linda won 1,000 yuan in a painting contest. She is writing about how to manage the money. Read her article and learn how to write a money management plan.
My prize money plan
Clearly state the reason for writing the article.
I won 1,000 yuan in a painting contest! I am excited about winning this money. I want to manage it well. This is my plan for the money.
Use adverbs of sequence to make your plan clear.
First, I am going to save 200 yuan by putting it in the bank. It is smart to save money for later.
Use specific amounts of money to show a clear plan of spending.
Next, art is important to me and I want to share the joy of art. Instead of just giving money, I plan to use 200 yuan to buy some paints and brushes for the local children’s centre.
Use "since" to give reasons.
Since I love art,
◆ Structure of the article ◆
Where I got the money: In a painting contest
My plan for the money
Put 200 yuan in the bank
Use 200 yuan
Spend 500 yuan on an online art course
Use 100 yuan to buy some new paints and brushes
◆ Language bank ◆
I won ... yuan in ...
I want/am going/plan to ...
It costs about ...
This is my plan for ...
I
Maybe they will help me ... in the future!
B Imagine you just won 1,000 yuan. How will you manage the money? Write an article about it.
答案:# My 1,000-yuan plan
I won 1,000 yuan in the school English speech contest! I am very excited about this prize. I want to manage it well. This is my plan for the money.
First, I am going to save 300 yuan by putting it in the bank. It is smart to save money for my future study.
Next, reading is my favourite hobby. I plan to use 200 yuan to buy some new story books for the after-school reading club of our class. More classmates can have fun reading then.
Since I love painting, I think I should take lessons to improve my skills. There is a weekend painting course. It costs about 400 yuan. I can sign up for it. With my last 100 yuan, I can buy some new crayons and drawing notebooks. Maybe they will help me win more painting contests in the future!
I won 1,000 yuan in the school English speech contest! I am very excited about this prize. I want to manage it well. This is my plan for the money.
First, I am going to save 300 yuan by putting it in the bank. It is smart to save money for my future study.
Next, reading is my favourite hobby. I plan to use 200 yuan to buy some new story books for the after-school reading club of our class. More classmates can have fun reading then.
Since I love painting, I think I should take lessons to improve my skills. There is a weekend painting course. It costs about 400 yuan. I can sign up for it. With my last 100 yuan, I can buy some new crayons and drawing notebooks. Maybe they will help me win more painting contests in the future!
解析:
【分析】首先明确写作主题是“1000元奖金计划”,需模仿范文结构:开头点明获奖来源与写计划的目的;接着用顺序副词(First、Next、Since)组织内容,每部分设置具体金额,总金额为1000元;每笔支出需说明合理理由,运用范文中的句式(如I won...、I plan to...、It costs...等),确保逻辑清晰、内容具体。
【解析】1. 开头段:说明获奖情况(如学校英语演讲比赛),表达对奖金的期待,引出计划;2. First部分:安排300元存入银行,理由是为未来学习储蓄;3. Next部分:用200元为班级课后阅读俱乐部购买故事书,体现爱好与分享;4. Since部分:说明因热爱绘画,用400元报周末绘画课提升技能,剩余100元购买绘画工具,最后表达对未来的期待,确保总金额为1000元。
【答案】# My 1,000-yuan plan
I won 1,000 yuan in the school English speech contest! I am very excited about this prize. I want to manage it well. This is my plan for the money.
First, I am going to save 300 yuan by putting it in the bank. It is smart to save money for my future study.
Next, reading is my favourite hobby. I plan to use 200 yuan to buy some new story books for the after-school reading club of our class. More classmates can have fun reading then.
Since I love painting, I think I should take lessons to improve my skills. There is a weekend painting course. It costs about 400 yuan. I can sign up for it. With my last 100 yuan, I can buy some new crayons and drawing notebooks. Maybe they will help me win more painting contests in the future!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、顺序副词运用、原因状语从句(since)
【点评】本题为英语写作题,要求学生模仿范文结构合理规划1000元奖金,贴近学生生活实际,考查逻辑组织与语言运用能力,有明确的句式参考,降低了写作难度。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头段:说明获奖情况(如学校英语演讲比赛),表达对奖金的期待,引出计划;2. First部分:安排300元存入银行,理由是为未来学习储蓄;3. Next部分:用200元为班级课后阅读俱乐部购买故事书,体现爱好与分享;4. Since部分:说明因热爱绘画,用400元报周末绘画课提升技能,剩余100元购买绘画工具,最后表达对未来的期待,确保总金额为1000元。
【答案】# My 1,000-yuan plan
I won 1,000 yuan in the school English speech contest! I am very excited about this prize. I want to manage it well. This is my plan for the money.
First, I am going to save 300 yuan by putting it in the bank. It is smart to save money for my future study.
Next, reading is my favourite hobby. I plan to use 200 yuan to buy some new story books for the after-school reading club of our class. More classmates can have fun reading then.
Since I love painting, I think I should take lessons to improve my skills. There is a weekend painting course. It costs about 400 yuan. I can sign up for it. With my last 100 yuan, I can buy some new crayons and drawing notebooks. Maybe they will help me win more painting contests in the future!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、顺序副词运用、原因状语从句(since)
【点评】本题为英语写作题,要求学生模仿范文结构合理规划1000元奖金,贴近学生生活实际,考查逻辑组织与语言运用能力,有明确的句式参考,降低了写作难度。
【难度系数】0.5