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七、阅读短文,回答问题(10分)
The writing task was posted on the blackboard for my ninth-grade students: “What is the perfect age in your heart, and why would you like to be that age?” I hoped this writing task would help them think about their life goals. I could tell by their expressions that maybe this would work. After I collected their papers, the children also waited excitedly for me to read their thoughts.
Hilda wished to reach my age. She said she would like to be a ninth-grade teacher and share warm happy moments, have fun with her students just like I do every day. I was glad my daily work with the kids impressed her so much.
Most students dreamed of being 25 to 28. They believed people could achieve great success at this stage. Some of them hoped to be football players, play for well-known clubs and compete around the world. Jorge planned to earn money to buy his mom a new house with a bedroom for each member of the family. That would be eight bedrooms!
But I always remember Victoria’s story. Quiet and full of ideas, she spent ten minutes thinking carefully before writing lines that I still keep in mind. She held the view that all ages are perfect. Life arranges different stages for us to taste unique experiences: the first day in kindergarten, life-long friendships, college graduation, a satisfying job, raising kids and travelling after retirement (退休). Every period of life carries its own value.
1. Why did the writer give the writing task?

2. What did most teenagers expect to be 25 to 28?

3. According to Jorge, what did he want to do with his money?

4. Which idea from Victoria stays in the writer’s mind?

5. What is the perfect age in your heart? Why do you think so?
答案:1. To help students think about their life goals.
2. Because they believed people could achieve great success at this stage.
3. Buy a house for his mom.
4. All ages are perfect./Every period of life carries its own value.
5. I think 18 is a perfect age for me. Because I will go to university and explore a bigger world.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语阅读理解题,解题思路如下:1. 先通读短文,掌握文章主旨大意;2. 针对每个问题,在短文中定位对应段落的关键信息;3. 前4题是细节理解题,直接提取原文对应内容整理成答案;4. 第5题是开放性试题,结合自身实际情况,围绕“完美年龄及原因”合理表达即可。
【解析】
1. 问题1询问作者布置写作任务的原因,定位到短文第一段第三句“I hoped this writing task would help them think about their life goals.”,直接提取该句内容作为答案。
2. 问题2询问大多数青少年期望25-28岁的原因,定位到短文第三段前两句“Most students dreamed of being 25 to 28. They believed people could achieve great success at this stage.”,提取原因部分作为答案。
3. 问题3询问Jorge想用他的钱做什么,定位到短文第三段“Jorge planned to earn money to buy his mom a new house with a bedroom for each member of the family.”,提取核心内容作为答案。
4. 问题4询问Victoria的哪个想法留在作者脑海里,定位到短文第四段“She held the view that all ages are perfect. ... Every period of life carries its own value.”,提取该观点作为答案。
5. 问题5为开放性试题,结合自身实际,选择一个年龄并说明合理原因即可,示例答案围绕“18岁上大学探索世界”展开,符合要求。
【答案】
1. To help students think about their life goals.
2. Because they believed people could achieve great success at this stage.
3. Buy a house for his mom.
4. All ages are perfect./Every period of life carries its own value.
5. I think 18 is a perfect age for me. Because I will go to university and explore a bigger world.
【知识点】
英语阅读理解、细节理解题、开放性表达
【点评】
本题是常规英语阅读理解题型,前4题侧重考查原文细节定位能力,第5题考查语言表达能力,整体难度适中,适合巩固阅读理解技巧。
【难度系数】
0.7
八、书面表达(30分)
假如你班将开展“我推荐大家向×××学习”的讨论。请撰写一篇100词左右的英语演讲稿,推荐你心中的英雄,介绍其事迹并说明推荐理由。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I recommend that all of us learn from
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答案:I recommend that all of us learn from Zhang Guimei.
Some people spend their whole lives doing important things, and Zhang Guimei is such a person. When she saw many mountain girls drop out of school, she decided to take action to help them. She even started a free high school for girls in Yunnan and has fought for girls' education for years.
Zhang Guimei once said people should do something while they're alive, and she truly did that—not for money or praise. From her, I learn that a meaningful life is more about giving than receiving. We should follow her example and try our best to help others.
解析:
【分析】首先明确题目要求:撰写100词左右的英语演讲稿,需推荐一位英雄,介绍其事迹并说明推荐理由,开头已给出。第一步选择合适的推荐人物(如张桂梅,事迹明确且具有正能量);第二步围绕人物核心事迹(创办免费女子高中,助力山区女孩教育)展开叙述;第三步提炼推荐理由(体现奉献精神,传递“人生意义在于给予”的价值观);第四步注意语言简洁,符合演讲稿的口语化特点,控制总字数在要求范围内。
【解析】根据分析思路,先补全开头,再介绍人物事迹,最后说明推荐理由,确保内容紧扣主题,逻辑清晰,语言准确。具体内容如下:I recommend that all of us learn from Zhang Guimei. Some people spend their whole lives doing important things, and Zhang Guimei is such a person. When she saw many mountain girls drop out of school, she decided to take action to help them. She even started a free high school for girls in Yunnan and has fought for girls' education for years. Zhang Guimei once said people should do something while they're alive, and she truly did that—not for money or praise. From her, I learn that a meaningful life is more about giving than receiving. We should follow her example and try our best to help others.
【答案】I recommend that all of us learn from Zhang Guimei. Some people spend their whole lives doing important things, and Zhang Guimei is such a person. When she saw many mountain girls drop out of school, she decided to take action to help them. She even started a free high school for girls in Yunnan and has fought for girls' education for years. Zhang Guimei once said people should do something while they're alive, and she truly did that—not for money or praise. From her, I learn that a meaningful life is more about giving than receiving. We should follow her example and try our best to help others.
【知识点】英语书面表达、演讲稿写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求,主题鲜明,围绕张桂梅的核心事迹展开,理由充分,语言流畅自然,符合演讲稿的体裁特点,字数控制得当,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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