素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. There are many natural disasters around the world.
（引出话题）
2. Have you ever thought about how to stay safe in natural disasters and emergencies?
（提出问题）
3. I'll tell you what to do when an earthquake happens.
（明确写作目的）
[中间句]
1. To keep safe, we can follow these tips.
（承上启下）
2. If it's serious, you should go and see a doctor right away.
3. We ran up the hill as fast as possible.
（介绍逃生细节）
[结尾句]
1. Safety is very important. （总结观点，下同）
2. Safety comes first.
3. All of us were happy that we were safe.
（表达感受，下同）
4. Next time I should be more careful!
[名言警句]
1. In the face of disasters, humanity is at its best when it comes together.
灾难面前，人类团结时方能展现最伟大的一面。
2. Floods come and go, but courage remains.
洪水来了又退去，但勇气长存。
写作演练＞＞
昨天的英语课上，你们班同学就“安全”话题展开了讨论。请你根据提示，写一篇90词左右的发言总结稿并给你校英语报编辑部投稿。
[思路点拨]
① 人称：以第一人称为主；② 时态：一般现在时、一般过去时；③ 写作时要注意顺序，先点明英语课上就安全话题展开讨论，再详述讨论结果，并介绍相关观点，最后谈谈自己对于安全的看法。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. There are many natural disasters around the world.
（引出话题）
2. Have you ever thought about how to stay safe in natural disasters and emergencies?
（提出问题）
3. I'll tell you what to do when an earthquake happens.
（明确写作目的）
[中间句]
1. To keep safe, we can follow these tips.
（承上启下）
2. If it's serious, you should go and see a doctor right away.
3. We ran up the hill as fast as possible.
（介绍逃生细节）
[结尾句]
1. Safety is very important. （总结观点，下同）
2. Safety comes first.
3. All of us were happy that we were safe.
（表达感受，下同）
4. Next time I should be more careful!
[名言警句]
1. In the face of disasters, humanity is at its best when it comes together.
灾难面前，人类团结时方能展现最伟大的一面。
2. Floods come and go, but courage remains.
洪水来了又退去，但勇气长存。
写作演练＞＞
昨天的英语课上，你们班同学就“安全”话题展开了讨论。请你根据提示，写一篇90词左右的发言总结稿并给你校英语报编辑部投稿。
[思路点拨]
① 人称：以第一人称为主；② 时态：一般现在时、一般过去时；③ 写作时要注意顺序，先点明英语课上就安全话题展开讨论，再详述讨论结果，并介绍相关观点，最后谈谈自己对于安全的看法。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案：One possible version:
In the English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe yesterday. Here is the result.
First, we should obey traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go out together in the evening. Never go out alone. You should go home as soon as possible. Finally, learn how to protect yourself from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important.
In the English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe yesterday. Here is the result.
First, we should obey traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go out together in the evening. Never go out alone. You should go home as soon as possible. Finally, learn how to protect yourself from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important.
解析：
【分析】
首先审题明确写作要求：需写一篇90词左右的英语发言总结稿投稿校英语报，内容要包含三点：①点明昨天英语课围绕“安全”展开讨论；②详述讨论得出的安全建议；③表达自己对安全的看法。接着确定写作要素：人称以第一人称为主，时态上，描述讨论的事用一般过去时，表达观点用一般现在时。最后规划结构：开头点题引出讨论结果，中间分点列举安全建议，结尾表达个人看法，确保语言简洁、逻辑清晰，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：点明时间、事件，引出讨论结果：In the English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe yesterday. Here is the result.
2. 中间分点列举讨论的安全建议：First, we should obey traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. Fourth, we should go out together in the evening and go home as soon as possible. Finally, learn how to protect ourselves from natural disasters.
3. 结尾：表达个人对安全的看法：I think students' safety is important.
整体符合词数要求，时态正确，结构清晰，紧扣主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
In the English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe yesterday. Here is the result.
First, we should obey traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go out together in the evening. Never go out alone. You should go home as soon as possible. Finally, learn how to protect yourself from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、安全话题英语表达、时态运用
【点评】
该范文严格贴合题目要求，结构完整，逻辑清晰，开头点明讨论主题，中间分点明确阐述安全建议，结尾表达个人观点，时态准确，语言简洁，词数符合要求，适合作为投稿给校英语报的发言总结稿。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先审题明确写作要求：需写一篇90词左右的英语发言总结稿投稿校英语报，内容要包含三点：①点明昨天英语课围绕“安全”展开讨论；②详述讨论得出的安全建议；③表达自己对安全的看法。接着确定写作要素：人称以第一人称为主，时态上，描述讨论的事用一般过去时，表达观点用一般现在时。最后规划结构：开头点题引出讨论结果，中间分点列举安全建议，结尾表达个人看法，确保语言简洁、逻辑清晰，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：点明时间、事件，引出讨论结果：In the English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe yesterday. Here is the result.
2. 中间分点列举讨论的安全建议：First, we should obey traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. Fourth, we should go out together in the evening and go home as soon as possible. Finally, learn how to protect ourselves from natural disasters.
3. 结尾：表达个人对安全的看法：I think students' safety is important.
整体符合词数要求，时态正确，结构清晰，紧扣主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
In the English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe yesterday. Here is the result.
First, we should obey traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go out together in the evening. Never go out alone. You should go home as soon as possible. Finally, learn how to protect yourself from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、安全话题英语表达、时态运用
【点评】
该范文严格贴合题目要求，结构完整，逻辑清晰，开头点明讨论主题，中间分点明确阐述安全建议，结尾表达个人观点，时态准确，语言简洁，词数符合要求，适合作为投稿给校英语报的发言总结稿。
【难度系数】
0.3