Dear sir,
I am a junior student from Changzhou Xinhua School. I'd like to become one of your guides.
I've learned English for 6 years. I spend a lot of my free time listening to English news and watching English movies, so I'm good at English. That is to say, it's not difficult for me to talk with people in English.
I have been interested in science since I was a child. My favourite books are on science. Some new ideas often come out of my mind, which have encouraged me a lot. With these ideas, I have made some small inventions to make my life more comfortable.
Besides, I feel like making friends with different people, no matter where they come from. I'm sure that I will get along well with them.
I would be most thankful if you could give me the chance.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Ran
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词组/短语/句式积累:
① spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事
② be good at 擅长
③ that is to say 那就是说
④ be interested in 对……感兴趣
⑤ come out of my mind 从我的脑海里出现
⑥ make small inventions 制作小发明
⑦ feel like doing 想要做某事
⑧ make friends with 和……交朋友
⑨ get along well with 和某人相处融洽
⑩ look forward to sth. 盼望/期盼某事
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正文第一段 写明写信的来意;
正文第二段 介绍了自己的英语水平;
正文第三段 介绍了自己对科学的热爱以及自己制作了小发明;
正文第四段 介绍了自己的人际交往能力;
正文第五段和第六段 表示如果自己能被录取会非常感谢,期盼对方的回信。
总的来看,文章条理清晰、意思连贯,语句通顺,用了许多地道的短语和句型。