Dear Jim,
I'm very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Changzhou.
I'm Li Hua, a student from Xinxing Middle School.
I'm good at Chinese, Geography and History. When it comes to travelling in China, Changzhou is a popular place to travel around. Changzhou is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself quite well. Besides, people in Changzhou are friendly and willing to help others in need. Also, you can take a chance to experience different cultures and enjoy all kinds of delicious food in Changzhou.
By the way, I'd like to serve as your guide if you come. I do hope that you will have a good time in China. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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短语/词组/句式积累：
① pay a visit to 游览
② when it comes to 当谈到
③ travel around 四处游览
④ not only…but also… 不仅……而且……
⑤ places of interest 名胜古迹
⑥ be willing to do sth. 愿意做某事
⑦ take a chance to do sth. 抓住机会做某事
⑧ serve as 充当、担任
⑨ have a good time 玩得开心
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本文是一封回信，信中先进行了自我介绍，接着介绍了推荐Jim来常州旅行的理由。文章条理清晰、意思连贯，语句通顺。结尾处作者主动提出给Jim当导游，体现了常州人民的热心。
