Dear Jim,
If we can develop a good TV viewing habit, we can have a different life. I will try to help you solve your problems.
First of all, you think it's a waste of time to watch some boring TV programmes. Why not ask your parents to recommend a list of good programmes, so that you can make a good choice?
What's more, some students keep talking about TV programmes at school. It may drive you mad and have a bad influence on study. You should remind them to pay attention to schoolwork and keep a balance between school and TV programmes.
At last, some students stay up late to watch TV. Getting enough sleep is of great importance to teenagers. It is a good idea to manage time well and go to bed earlier.
I hope my suggestions can be of help to you.
Yours,
Lily
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词组/短语/句式积累:
① develop a good TV viewing habit 养成一个好的看电视的习惯
② solve one's problem 解决某人的问题
③ a waste of time 浪费时间
④ ask sb. to do sth. 让某人做某事
⑤ make a good choice 做出好的选择
⑥ keep doing sth. 一直做某事
⑦ have a bad influence on 对……有坏的影响
⑧ pay attention to 注意……
⑨ keep a balance between A and B 在A和B之间保持平衡
⑩ stay up late 熬夜到很晚
⑪ be of great importance 很重要
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