【分析】
首先要明确本次书面表达的主题是“Kids and Learning”,需要围绕两个核心问题展开:一是如何看待擅长学习的孩子,二是孩子如何平衡学习和玩耍。解题思路如下:
1. 开篇承接题目给出的句子,自然引入话题,点明擅长学习并非易事;
2. 针对第一个问题,提出自己的观点:擅长学习的孩子善于管理时间,能兼顾学习与玩耍,且玩耍对学习有帮助;
3. 针对第二个问题,给出具体的平衡方法,比如遵循“该学就学,该玩就玩”的原则,还要做到快乐学习、充分放松;
4. 结尾总结,强调学习与玩耍平衡对孩子成长的益处,升华主题。
【解析】
1. 开头衔接:以“However, it's not easy.”承接题目中的“All kids want to be good at learning.”,自然引出下文对擅长学习的孩子的看法;
2. 阐述对擅长学习的孩子的观点:用“In my opinion”引出观点,说明这类孩子擅长时间管理,“not only...but also...”结构体现他们能兼顾学习和玩耍,同时点明玩耍对学习的促进作用;
3. 给出平衡学习与玩耍的方法:用“As to how kids balance learning and playing”过渡,提出核心原则“work while you work and play while you play”,再用“Moreover”补充其他要点,丰富内容;
4. 结尾总结:用“I'm sure...”强调平衡学习与玩耍对孩子成长的积极意义,收束全文。
【答案】
All kids want to be good at learning. However, it's not easy. In my opinion, those kids
who are good at learning are able to manage their time very well. They not only work hard
at their subjects but also enjoy playing games. Playing also helps them learn better.
As to how kids balance learning and playing, the most important thing is to follow the
rule—work while you work and play while you play. Moreover, kids should learn to work
happily and relax fully.
I'm sure a good balance between learning and playing is good for kids' growth.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、观点类写作、话题短文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰,紧扣主题,围绕题目中的两个核心问题展开论述,逻辑连贯。运用了“In my opinion”“As to”“Moreover”等衔接词,使文章层次分明;同时使用“not only...but also...”等句式,丰富了语言表达,符合书面表达的要求,能很好地传达观点。
【难度系数】
0.6