一、例题
和谐互助的邻里关系如同温情纽带，将人们紧紧相连。内涵丰富的社区文化更是邻里关系的调和剂。请以“My Golden Neighbourhood”为题，描述你所在美好社区的环境之美，人之美，文化之美。
写作要求：1. 文章需要涵盖所给表格中的要点；
2. 表达清楚，详略突出；语法正确，上下文连贯；
3. 词数不少于 90。
二、写作策略
本文围绕“我的黄金社区”展开，内容要涵盖表格中的内容，即社区环境、文化活动以及学生对这些的感受。除此之外，学生应当注意描写题目中的“人之美”，“人之美”可以理解为友好的邻里关系。学生在表达感受时，要强调社区不仅是居住的地方，更是充满爱与欢乐的家。
三、范文
My neighbourhood is a lively and friendly place. In the centre of the neighbourhood, there is a beautiful park. Everyone greets each other with warm smiles every day.
第一段开篇点题，点明环境之美和人之美。
I love my neighbourhood because it is warm and fun. Neighbours often chat in the parks or try to help each other in their free time. Some interesting cultural activities in my neighbourhood make it special. Every autumn, we hold a Folk Art Festival. People gather to make traditional crafts like paper - cuts or lanterns. These activities teach us teamwork and keep our traditions alive.
第二段详写人之美，融合文化之美。
During these events, I always feel happy and proud. Our golden neighbourhood isn't just a place to live—it's a home filled with love and joy.
第三段抒发情感，总结三种美的核心价值。
和谐互助的邻里关系如同温情纽带，将人们紧紧相连。内涵丰富的社区文化更是邻里关系的调和剂。请以“My Golden Neighbourhood”为题，描述你所在美好社区的环境之美，人之美，文化之美。
写作要求：1. 文章需要涵盖所给表格中的要点；
2. 表达清楚，详略突出；语法正确，上下文连贯；
3. 词数不少于 90。
二、写作策略
本文围绕“我的黄金社区”展开，内容要涵盖表格中的内容，即社区环境、文化活动以及学生对这些的感受。除此之外，学生应当注意描写题目中的“人之美”，“人之美”可以理解为友好的邻里关系。学生在表达感受时，要强调社区不仅是居住的地方，更是充满爱与欢乐的家。
三、范文
My neighbourhood is a lively and friendly place. In the centre of the neighbourhood, there is a beautiful park. Everyone greets each other with warm smiles every day.
第一段开篇点题，点明环境之美和人之美。
I love my neighbourhood because it is warm and fun. Neighbours often chat in the parks or try to help each other in their free time. Some interesting cultural activities in my neighbourhood make it special. Every autumn, we hold a Folk Art Festival. People gather to make traditional crafts like paper - cuts or lanterns. These activities teach us teamwork and keep our traditions alive.
第二段详写人之美，融合文化之美。
During these events, I always feel happy and proud. Our golden neighbourhood isn't just a place to live—it's a home filled with love and joy.
第三段抒发情感，总结三种美的核心价值。
答案：# My Golden Neighbourhood
My neighbourhood is a lively and comfortable place to live. There is a beautiful park with green trees and colourful flowers in the centre of the neighbourhood. The air is always fresh, and people can enjoy the warm sunshine when walking in the park. All the neighbours are kind to each other, and everyone greets others with big warm smiles every day. I think my neighbourhood is far more than a living place, it is a warm little world full of kindness.
I love my neighbourhood so much. Neighbours often chat with each other in the park, and they always try their best to help people in need if someone meets trouble. We also have many interesting cultural activities here. Every autumn, our neighbourhood will hold a Folk Art Festival. All the people in the neighbourhood gather in the park to make traditional Chinese crafts, like red paper-cuts and different kinds of lanterns. We can also learn to make traditional Chinese snacks together at the festival.
During these fun activities, I always feel really happy and very proud of our traditional culture. Our golden neighbourhood is not just a place to live, it is a sweet home that is full of love and joy for all of us.
My neighbourhood is a lively and comfortable place to live. There is a beautiful park with green trees and colourful flowers in the centre of the neighbourhood. The air is always fresh, and people can enjoy the warm sunshine when walking in the park. All the neighbours are kind to each other, and everyone greets others with big warm smiles every day. I think my neighbourhood is far more than a living place, it is a warm little world full of kindness.
I love my neighbourhood so much. Neighbours often chat with each other in the park, and they always try their best to help people in need if someone meets trouble. We also have many interesting cultural activities here. Every autumn, our neighbourhood will hold a Folk Art Festival. All the people in the neighbourhood gather in the park to make traditional Chinese crafts, like red paper-cuts and different kinds of lanterns. We can also learn to make traditional Chinese snacks together at the festival.
During these fun activities, I always feel really happy and very proud of our traditional culture. Our golden neighbourhood is not just a place to live, it is a sweet home that is full of love and joy for all of us.
解析：
本题为译林版七年级下册英语命题写作题，解题步骤如下：
1. 审题：确定文体为生活介绍类记叙文，整体以一般现在时为主要时态，要求词数不少于90，必须覆盖全部给定要点：①描述社区环境特征、表达对社区的整体印象；②介绍社区特色文化活动、写出参与活动的真实感受，同时补充体现邻里友善的"人之美"相关内容。
2. 谋篇布局：采用三段式结构：第一段开篇点题，直接点明社区的环境优势和整体友好的氛围；第二段详写邻里互助的日常相处细节，同时具体介绍社区的特色文化活动内容；第三段抒发个人情感，升华主题，点明社区是充满爱与欢乐的专属家园。
3. 遣词造句：选用七年级已学的核心词汇和基础句式，避免超纲表达，保证上下文衔接流畅，详略安排合理。
1. 审题：确定文体为生活介绍类记叙文，整体以一般现在时为主要时态，要求词数不少于90，必须覆盖全部给定要点：①描述社区环境特征、表达对社区的整体印象；②介绍社区特色文化活动、写出参与活动的真实感受，同时补充体现邻里友善的"人之美"相关内容。
2. 谋篇布局：采用三段式结构：第一段开篇点题，直接点明社区的环境优势和整体友好的氛围；第二段详写邻里互助的日常相处细节，同时具体介绍社区的特色文化活动内容；第三段抒发个人情感，升华主题，点明社区是充满爱与欢乐的专属家园。
3. 遣词造句：选用七年级已学的核心词汇和基础句式，避免超纲表达，保证上下文衔接流畅，详略安排合理。
一、话题词汇
1. 帮助某人做某事
2. 有需要的人
3. 为某事筹集资金
4. 回馈我们的社区
1. 帮助某人做某事
help sb with sth
2. 有需要的人
people in need
3. 为某事筹集资金
raise money for sth
4. 回馈我们的社区
give back to our community
答案：1. help sb with sth 2. people in need
3. raise money for sth 4. give back to our community
3. raise money for sth 4. give back to our community
解析：
【解析】
本题考查汉译英的常用固定短语，对照对应语义逐一匹配标准英文表达即可：
1. 表示“帮助某人做某事”的常用固定短语为help sb with sth；
2. 表示“有需要的人”的常用固定短语为people in need；
3. 表示“为某事筹集资金”的常用固定短语为raise money for sth；
4. 表示“回馈我们的社区”的常用固定短语为give back to our community。
【答案】
1. help sb with sth
2. people in need
3. raise money for sth
4. give back to our community
【知识点】
常用英语固定短语；汉译英词汇匹配
【点评】
本题属于基础的短语识记类题目，考察的都是志愿服务类话题的高频核心短语，学生只要平时做好相关话题词汇的背诵积累，就可以顺利完成作答。
【难度系数】
0.9
本题考查汉译英的常用固定短语，对照对应语义逐一匹配标准英文表达即可：
1. 表示“帮助某人做某事”的常用固定短语为help sb with sth；
2. 表示“有需要的人”的常用固定短语为people in need；
3. 表示“为某事筹集资金”的常用固定短语为raise money for sth；
4. 表示“回馈我们的社区”的常用固定短语为give back to our community。
【答案】
1. help sb with sth
2. people in need
3. raise money for sth
4. give back to our community
【知识点】
常用英语固定短语；汉译英词汇匹配
【点评】
本题属于基础的短语识记类题目，考察的都是志愿服务类话题的高频核心短语，学生只要平时做好相关话题词汇的背诵积累，就可以顺利完成作答。
【难度系数】
0.9
二、佳句翻译
1. 我们的工程师会在这里帮助您解决这些问题！
2. 我们很幸运能生活在这样一个美丽的社区里。
3. 让我们携手努力，让我们的社区变得更美好。
1. 我们的工程师会在这里帮助您解决这些问题！
Our engineers are here to help you deal with these problems!
2. 我们很幸运能生活在这样一个美丽的社区里。
We're lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
3. 让我们携手努力，让我们的社区变得更美好。
Let's work together to make our community a better place.
答案：1. Our engineers are here to help you deal with these problems!
2. We're lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
3. Let's work together to make our community a better place.
2. We're lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
3. Let's work together to make our community a better place.
解析：
【解析】
1. 本句使用固定结构be here to do sth表示“来这里做某事”，搭配核心短语help sb deal with problems表示“帮助某人解决问题”，符合英文表达习惯。
2. 本句使用经典固定句型be lucky to do sth表示“很幸运做某事”，搭配such+a+形容词+可数名词单数的结构表示“这样一个……的……”，准确对应原句含义。
3. 本句使用祈使句结构Let's do sth表示“让我们做某事”，搭配make sth+名词/形容词的宾补结构，表达“让某物变得……”的含义，语句通顺自然。
【答案】
1. Our engineers are here to help you deal with these problems!
2. We're lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
3. Let's work together to make our community a better place.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，常用英语句型，汉译英基础表达
【点评】
本题考查基础的汉译英能力，均为初中阶段常见的固定句型和核心短语，重点考察学生对常用表达的掌握程度，难度较低，只要熟记课本相关短语和句型即可顺利完成翻译。
【难度系数】
0.8
1. 本句使用固定结构be here to do sth表示“来这里做某事”，搭配核心短语help sb deal with problems表示“帮助某人解决问题”，符合英文表达习惯。
2. 本句使用经典固定句型be lucky to do sth表示“很幸运做某事”，搭配such+a+形容词+可数名词单数的结构表示“这样一个……的……”，准确对应原句含义。
3. 本句使用祈使句结构Let's do sth表示“让我们做某事”，搭配make sth+名词/形容词的宾补结构，表达“让某物变得……”的含义，语句通顺自然。
【答案】
1. Our engineers are here to help you deal with these problems!
2. We're lucky to live in such a lovely neighbourhood.
3. Let's work together to make our community a better place.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，常用英语句型，汉译英基础表达
【点评】
本题考查基础的汉译英能力，均为初中阶段常见的固定句型和核心短语，重点考察学生对常用表达的掌握程度，难度较低，只要熟记课本相关短语和句型即可顺利完成翻译。
【难度系数】
0.8