[经典例题]
中国素有“礼仪之邦”之称。假如你是赵辉，你的外国朋友 Eric 将作为交流学生来中国学习，想要了解一些中国礼仪。请你根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍中国的一些日常礼仪。
注意：1. 要点齐全，省略号部分适当补充；
2. 词数不少于 90，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
中国素有“礼仪之邦”之称。假如你是赵辉，你的外国朋友 Eric 将作为交流学生来中国学习，想要了解一些中国礼仪。请你根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍中国的一些日常礼仪。
注意：1. 要点齐全，省略号部分适当补充；
2. 词数不少于 90，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
答案：[高分范文]
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.
When greeting people, shaking hands is a common practice. When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation. There are many manners at the dinner table, such as using the correct things and not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice. Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders and always saying "thank you" when necessary. These are just a few examples. I'm sure that you'll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture.
I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Zhao Hui
[名师点评]
①短文开篇点题，介绍中国的礼仪；
②短文使用了 when、such as 等词，使得短文层次分明，逻辑性强；
③短文中使用了 that 引导宾语从句和 as 引导时间状语从句，彰显了作者扎实的语法知识；
④使用短语 be helpful to 和 look forward to 表达了作者的期待。
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.
When greeting people, shaking hands is a common practice. When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation. There are many manners at the dinner table, such as using the correct things and not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice. Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders and always saying "thank you" when necessary. These are just a few examples. I'm sure that you'll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture.
I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Zhao Hui
[名师点评]
①短文开篇点题，介绍中国的礼仪；
②短文使用了 when、such as 等词，使得短文层次分明，逻辑性强；
③短文中使用了 that 引导宾语从句和 as 引导时间状语从句，彰显了作者扎实的语法知识；
④使用短语 be helpful to 和 look forward to 表达了作者的期待。
[小试身手]
目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你根据下列提示，以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题用英语写一封 80 词左右的倡议书，已给出部分不计入总词数。
要点提示：1. 保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾；2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，在图书馆保持安静；3. 遵守交通规则，有序排队；4. 举止有礼，互帮互助；5. ……
[思路点拨]
本文是一封关于“创建文明校园”的倡议书。写作时要按“场景分类”展开（如环境维护、公共行为、互助礼仪），每个类别搭配 1～2 个具体行为（如“不随地扔垃圾”“图书馆保持安静”）。本文时态应该用一般现在时，人称为第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is trying to be a better place for all. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something together.
The Students' Union
October 15th, 2025
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你根据下列提示，以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题用英语写一封 80 词左右的倡议书，已给出部分不计入总词数。
要点提示：1. 保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾；2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，在图书馆保持安静；3. 遵守交通规则，有序排队；4. 举止有礼，互帮互助；5. ……
[思路点拨]
本文是一封关于“创建文明校园”的倡议书。写作时要按“场景分类”展开（如环境维护、公共行为、互助礼仪），每个类别搭配 1～2 个具体行为（如“不随地扔垃圾”“图书馆保持安静”）。本文时态应该用一般现在时，人称为第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is trying to be a better place for all. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something together.
In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere. And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places. When we are in the library, we must keep quiet. It's also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything. We should always behave politely and help each other. Good manners make our school better.
Let's start from ourselves!
The Students' Union
October 15th, 2025
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
答案：One possible version:
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is trying to be a better place for all. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something together.
In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere. And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places. When we are in the library, we must keep quiet. It's also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything. We should always behave politely and help each other. Good manners make our school better.
Let's start from ourselves!
The Students' Union
October 15th, 2025
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is trying to be a better place for all. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something together.
In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere. And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places. When we are in the library, we must keep quiet. It's also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything. We should always behave politely and help each other. Good manners make our school better.
Let's start from ourselves!
The Students' Union
October 15th, 2025
解析：
翻译:
亲爱的同学们：
我们的学校正努力成为一个对所有人来说都更美好的地方。我们知道良好的礼仪真的很重要。而且我们可以一起做些事情。
为了让我们的学校更美丽，我们应该每天保持教室整洁。记住不要到处乱扔垃圾。而且我们应该记住下课后不要在公共场所大声说笑。当我们在图书馆时，我们必须保持安静。无论在哪里遵守交通规则以及做任何事都排队也很重要。我们应该始终举止有礼、互帮互助。良好的礼仪会让我们的学校变得更好。
让我们从自身做起！
学生会
2025年10月15日
亲爱的同学们：
我们的学校正努力成为一个对所有人来说都更美好的地方。我们知道良好的礼仪真的很重要。而且我们可以一起做些事情。
为了让我们的学校更美丽，我们应该每天保持教室整洁。记住不要到处乱扔垃圾。而且我们应该记住下课后不要在公共场所大声说笑。当我们在图书馆时，我们必须保持安静。无论在哪里遵守交通规则以及做任何事都排队也很重要。我们应该始终举止有礼、互帮互助。良好的礼仪会让我们的学校变得更好。
让我们从自身做起！
学生会
2025年10月15日