[经典例题]
中国素有“礼仪之邦”之称。假如你是赵辉，你的外国朋友 Eric 将作为交流学生来中国学习，想要了解一些中国礼仪。请你根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍中国的一些日常礼仪。
注意：1. 要点齐全，省略号部分适当补充；
2. 词数不少于 90，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
[高分范文]
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.
When greeting people, shaking hands is a common practice. When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation. There are many manners at the dinner table, such as using the correct things and not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice. Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders and always saying "thank you" when necessary. These are just a few examples. I'm sure that you'll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture.
I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Zhao Hui
[名师点评]
①短文开篇点题，介绍中国的礼仪；
②短文使用了 when、such as 等词，使得短文层次分明，逻辑性强；
③短文中使用了 that 引导宾语从句和 as 引导时间状语从句，彰显了作者扎实的语法知识；
④使用短语 be helpful to 和 look forward to 表达了作者的期待。
中国素有“礼仪之邦”之称。假如你是赵辉，你的外国朋友 Eric 将作为交流学生来中国学习，想要了解一些中国礼仪。请你根据下面导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍中国的一些日常礼仪。
注意：1. 要点齐全，省略号部分适当补充；
2. 词数不少于 90，已给出部分（画直线部分）不计入总词数。
[高分范文]
Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.
When greeting people, shaking hands is a common practice. When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time and maintain a pleasant conversation. There are many manners at the dinner table, such as using the correct things and not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice. Other ways to demonstrate politeness include respecting elders and always saying "thank you" when necessary. These are just a few examples. I'm sure that you'll learn more as you immerse yourself in our culture.
I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Zhao Hui
[名师点评]
①短文开篇点题，介绍中国的礼仪；
②短文使用了 when、such as 等词，使得短文层次分明，逻辑性强；
③短文中使用了 that 引导宾语从句和 as 引导时间状语从句，彰显了作者扎实的语法知识；
④使用短语 be helpful to 和 look forward to 表达了作者的期待。
答案：Dear Eric,
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.
When greeting people, shaking hands is a common and polite practice, especially when we meet for the first time. When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. It's also polite to bring a small gift like a box of chocolate or some flowers for the host. There are many special manners at the dinner table, such as waiting for the elders to start eating first, not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice, and not pointing at others with your chopsticks. Other polite manners in China include giving your seat to the elderly on the bus, and always saying "thank you" when you get help from others.
I'm sure that you'll learn more about these manners as you stay in China. I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Zhao Hui
I'm glad to hear you are coming to China as an exchange student. I'd like to tell you something about manners in China.
When greeting people, shaking hands is a common and polite practice, especially when we meet for the first time. When going to a party, it's important to arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. It's also polite to bring a small gift like a box of chocolate or some flowers for the host. There are many special manners at the dinner table, such as waiting for the elders to start eating first, not sticking your chopsticks upright in your rice, and not pointing at others with your chopsticks. Other polite manners in China include giving your seat to the elderly on the bus, and always saying "thank you" when you get help from others.
I'm sure that you'll learn more about these manners as you stay in China. I hope these tips will be helpful to you. I'm looking forward to meeting you in China.
Zhao Hui
解析：
本题是译林版八年级下册的书信类写作题，要求以赵辉的身份向即将来中国的外国交流生Eric介绍中国的日常礼仪。写作需满足以下要求：1. 要点全覆盖：依次介绍问候礼仪（正式场合常用握手问候）、赴宴礼仪（准时到场，可补充不要过早或过晚抵达、可准备小伴手礼的细节）、餐桌礼仪（补充等长辈先动筷、不能将筷子竖直插在米饭中、不要用筷子敲碗等符合中国文化的内容），再补充其他日常礼仪细节，比如主动给老人让座、收到他人帮助及时道谢等。2. 行文逻辑清晰，使用本单元所学的礼仪相关表达、时间状语从句等语法内容，词数不少于90，符合八年级的英语表达水平，避免超纲内容。
[小试身手]
目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你根据下列提示，以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题用英语写一封 80 词左右的倡议书，已给出部分不计入总词数。
要点提示：1. 保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾；2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，在图书馆保持安静；3. 遵守交通规则，有序排队；4. 举止有礼，互帮互助；5. ……
[思路点拨]
本文是一封关于“创建文明校园”的倡议书。写作时要按“场景分类”展开（如环境维护、公共行为、互助礼仪），每个类别搭配 1～2 个具体行为（如“不随地扔垃圾”“图书馆保持安静”）。本文时态应该用一般现在时，人称为第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is trying to be a better place for all. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something together.
The Students' Union
October 15th, 2025
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你根据下列提示，以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题用英语写一封 80 词左右的倡议书，已给出部分不计入总词数。
要点提示：1. 保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾；2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，在图书馆保持安静；3. 遵守交通规则，有序排队；4. 举止有礼，互帮互助；5. ……
[思路点拨]
本文是一封关于“创建文明校园”的倡议书。写作时要按“场景分类”展开（如环境维护、公共行为、互助礼仪），每个类别搭配 1～2 个具体行为（如“不随地扔垃圾”“图书馆保持安静”）。本文时态应该用一般现在时，人称为第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear schoolmates,
Our school is trying to be a better place for all. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something together.
In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere.
And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places.
When we are in the library, we must keep quiet.
It's also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything.
We should always behave politely and help each other.
Good manners make our school better.
Let's start from ourselves!
The Students' Union
October 15th, 2025
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
答案：One possible version:
In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere. And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places. When we are in the library, we must keep quiet. It's also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything. We should always behave politely and help each other. Good manners make our school better.
Let's start from ourselves!
In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere. And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places. When we are in the library, we must keep quiet. It's also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything. We should always behave politely and help each other. Good manners make our school better.
Let's start from ourselves!
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇主题为创建文明校园的英语倡议书，解题时首先要理清行文逻辑：先承接题目给出的开篇内容，按照思维导图划分的两个场景依次展开：首先写教室场景的行为要求，对应“不乱扔垃圾、保持教室整洁”的要点；之后过渡到公共场所的相关要求，依次覆盖“不大声喧哗、图书馆保持安静，遵守交规有序排队，举止礼貌互帮互助”的剩余要点，最后补充简短的呼吁收尾。全程使用一般现在时，语气贴合倡议书的号召属性，控制总词数在80左右，保证所有提示要点无遗漏即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接开篇引入教室场景倡议：点明为了让校园更美好，我们要每日保持教室整洁，牢记不要随地乱扔垃圾，覆盖第一个写作要点。
2. 过渡到公共场所的言行要求：说明我们不能在课后的公共场所大声说笑，在图书馆时必须保持安静，覆盖第二个写作要点。
3. 补充公共秩序相关要求：点明遵守各处的交通规则、所有场合都自觉排队也十分重要，覆盖第三个写作要点。
4. 补充礼仪互助要求：说明我们要始终举止礼貌，同学之间互帮互助，覆盖第四个写作要点。
5. 收尾点出文明举止的意义，发出“从自身做起”的号召，呼应创建文明校园的主题，最后检查语句通顺度、时态一致性和总词数，符合题目要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere. And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places. When we are in the library, we must keep quiet. It's also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything. We should always behave politely and help each other. Good manners make our school better.
Let's start from ourselves!
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，一般现在时应用，情景应用文表达
【点评】
本题属于贴近校园生活的基础应用文写作，给定的提示要点清晰，学生只需要按照场景分类梳理行文逻辑，将零散的提示信息串联成连贯通顺的文段，注意倡议书的号召语气，控制词数符合要求，避免要点遗漏即可完成作答，能够有效锻炼学生的信息整合和基础英文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇主题为创建文明校园的英语倡议书，解题时首先要理清行文逻辑：先承接题目给出的开篇内容，按照思维导图划分的两个场景依次展开：首先写教室场景的行为要求，对应“不乱扔垃圾、保持教室整洁”的要点；之后过渡到公共场所的相关要求，依次覆盖“不大声喧哗、图书馆保持安静，遵守交规有序排队，举止礼貌互帮互助”的剩余要点，最后补充简短的呼吁收尾。全程使用一般现在时，语气贴合倡议书的号召属性，控制总词数在80左右，保证所有提示要点无遗漏即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接开篇引入教室场景倡议：点明为了让校园更美好，我们要每日保持教室整洁，牢记不要随地乱扔垃圾，覆盖第一个写作要点。
2. 过渡到公共场所的言行要求：说明我们不能在课后的公共场所大声说笑，在图书馆时必须保持安静，覆盖第二个写作要点。
3. 补充公共秩序相关要求：点明遵守各处的交通规则、所有场合都自觉排队也十分重要，覆盖第三个写作要点。
4. 补充礼仪互助要求：说明我们要始终举止礼貌，同学之间互帮互助，覆盖第四个写作要点。
5. 收尾点出文明举止的意义，发出“从自身做起”的号召，呼应创建文明校园的主题，最后检查语句通顺度、时态一致性和总词数，符合题目要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere. And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places. When we are in the library, we must keep quiet. It's also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything. We should always behave politely and help each other. Good manners make our school better.
Let's start from ourselves!
【知识点】
英语倡议书写作，一般现在时应用，情景应用文表达
【点评】
本题属于贴近校园生活的基础应用文写作，给定的提示要点清晰，学生只需要按照场景分类梳理行文逻辑，将零散的提示信息串联成连贯通顺的文段，注意倡议书的号召语气，控制词数符合要求，避免要点遗漏即可完成作答，能够有效锻炼学生的信息整合和基础英文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6