十五、书面表达。（5 分）
假如你是 Lucy，请根据表格信息，以“How do we come to school?”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你和朋友们的住址、上学方式以及选择该方式的原因。不少于 50 词。
| Who | Lucy | Jack and John | Mike | Lily |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| Where | Moon Street | Baiyun Road | Sunshine Town | Park Street |
| How | | | | |
| Why | not far from school | near school | cheap and green | fast |
How do we come to school?
假如你是 Lucy，请根据表格信息，以“How do we come to school?”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你和朋友们的住址、上学方式以及选择该方式的原因。不少于 50 词。
| Who | Lucy | Jack and John | Mike | Lily |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| Where | Moon Street | Baiyun Road | Sunshine Town | Park Street |
| How | | | | |
| Why | not far from school | near school | cheap and green | fast |
How do we come to school?
Hello, I'm Lucy. I live on Moon Street. It's not far from school. I come to school by bike. Jack and John live on Baiyun Road. Their home is near school, so they walk to school. Mike lives in Sunshine Town. He comes to school by bus. It is cheap and green. Lily lives on Park Street. She comes to school by metro because it is fast.
答案：示例：
How do we come to school?
Hello, I'm Lucy. I live on Moon Street. It's not far from school. I come to school by bike. Jack and John live on Baiyun Road. Their home is near school，so they walk to school. Mike lives in Sunshine Town. He comes to school by bus. It is cheap and green. Lily lives on Park Street. She comes to school by metro because it is fast.
How do we come to school?
Hello, I'm Lucy. I live on Moon Street. It's not far from school. I come to school by bike. Jack and John live on Baiyun Road. Their home is near school，so they walk to school. Mike lives in Sunshine Town. He comes to school by bus. It is cheap and green. Lily lives on Park Street. She comes to school by metro because it is fast.
解析：
【分析】
这道题属于提示类英语书面表达，首先要明确写作要求：身份设定为Lucy，主题是介绍自己和朋友们的上学相关信息，需要完整覆盖表格给出的所有信息点：每个人的住址、上学的交通方式、选择该方式的原因。解题时首先梳理所有信息的对应关系，避免把不同人物的信息搞混：1. 先从自身Lucy的信息入手：住址是Moon Street，离学校不远，上学方式是骑自行车；2. 接下来是Jack和John：住址是Baiyun Road，家离学校很近，所以步行上学；3. 然后是Mike：住在Sunshine Town，坐公交上学，公交的特点是便宜又环保；4. 最后是Lily：住在Park Street，坐地铁上学，因为地铁速度很快。之后把这些信息用通顺的简单英语句式串联起来，保证字数达标、语法正确即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇先做自我介绍，引出自身的相关信息：先说明Hello, I'm Lucy. 接着介绍住址I live on Moon Street. 再说明距离情况It's not far from school. 最后引出自己的上学方式I come to school by bike.
2. 接下来介绍Jack和John的信息：Jack and John live on Baiyun Road. 接着用so衔接因果逻辑，说明原因Their home is near school，so they walk to school，语句更自然。
3. 之后介绍Mike的相关内容：Mike lives in Sunshine Town. 说明出行方式He comes to school by bus. 补充原因It is cheap and green.
4. 最后介绍Lily的信息：Lily lives on Park Street. 用because引导原因状语从句说明逻辑：She comes to school by metro because it is fast。所有信息点全部覆盖，语句连贯符合写作要求。
【答案】
Hello, I'm Lucy. I live on Moon Street. It's not far from school. I come to school by bike. Jack and John live on Baiyun Road. Their home is near school，so they walk to school. Mike lives in Sunshine Town. He comes to school by bus. It is cheap and green. Lily lives on Park Street. She comes to school by metro because it is fast.
【知识点】
出行方式表达，地点介词使用，原因状语从句
【点评】
本题是基础的图表提示类写作，所有写作要素都已经在表格中明确给出，不需要额外拓展内容，学生只需要准确对应每个人物的住址、出行方式和原因，用正确的基础句式串联即可，难度较低，主要考察学生对日常出行相关英语表达的掌握能力，注意不要混淆不同人物的对应信息点即可拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.8
这道题属于提示类英语书面表达，首先要明确写作要求：身份设定为Lucy，主题是介绍自己和朋友们的上学相关信息，需要完整覆盖表格给出的所有信息点：每个人的住址、上学的交通方式、选择该方式的原因。解题时首先梳理所有信息的对应关系，避免把不同人物的信息搞混：1. 先从自身Lucy的信息入手：住址是Moon Street，离学校不远，上学方式是骑自行车；2. 接下来是Jack和John：住址是Baiyun Road，家离学校很近，所以步行上学；3. 然后是Mike：住在Sunshine Town，坐公交上学，公交的特点是便宜又环保；4. 最后是Lily：住在Park Street，坐地铁上学，因为地铁速度很快。之后把这些信息用通顺的简单英语句式串联起来，保证字数达标、语法正确即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇先做自我介绍，引出自身的相关信息：先说明Hello, I'm Lucy. 接着介绍住址I live on Moon Street. 再说明距离情况It's not far from school. 最后引出自己的上学方式I come to school by bike.
2. 接下来介绍Jack和John的信息：Jack and John live on Baiyun Road. 接着用so衔接因果逻辑，说明原因Their home is near school，so they walk to school，语句更自然。
3. 之后介绍Mike的相关内容：Mike lives in Sunshine Town. 说明出行方式He comes to school by bus. 补充原因It is cheap and green.
4. 最后介绍Lily的信息：Lily lives on Park Street. 用because引导原因状语从句说明逻辑：She comes to school by metro because it is fast。所有信息点全部覆盖，语句连贯符合写作要求。
【答案】
Hello, I'm Lucy. I live on Moon Street. It's not far from school. I come to school by bike. Jack and John live on Baiyun Road. Their home is near school，so they walk to school. Mike lives in Sunshine Town. He comes to school by bus. It is cheap and green. Lily lives on Park Street. She comes to school by metro because it is fast.
【知识点】
出行方式表达，地点介词使用，原因状语从句
【点评】
本题是基础的图表提示类写作，所有写作要素都已经在表格中明确给出，不需要额外拓展内容，学生只需要准确对应每个人物的住址、出行方式和原因，用正确的基础句式串联即可，难度较低，主要考察学生对日常出行相关英语表达的掌握能力，注意不要混淆不同人物的对应信息点即可拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.8