十六、书面表达。（5 分）
海伦生病了，请你根据所给的病历卡，描述她的病情并给出建议。
要求：语句通顺，书写工整，不少于 7 句话。
海伦生病了，请你根据所给的病历卡，描述她的病情并给出建议。
要求：语句通顺，书写工整，不少于 7 句话。
Helen is 12 years old. She doesn't feel well today. She feels cold and has a headache. That makes her sleep badly. She goes to the doctor. The doctor says she has a cold. Helen should take some medicine. The doctor also tells her to drink more water. And she can't eat ice cream. Ice cream will make her feel colder and worse.
答案：示例：
Helen is 12 years old. She doesn't feel well today. She feels cold and has a headache. That makes her sleep badly. She goes to the doctor. The doctor says she has a cold. Helen should take some medicine. The doctor also tells her to drink more water. And she can't eat ice cream. Ice cream will make her feel colder and worse.
Helen is 12 years old. She doesn't feel well today. She feels cold and has a headache. That makes her sleep badly. She goes to the doctor. The doctor says she has a cold. Helen should take some medicine. The doctor also tells her to drink more water. And she can't eat ice cream. Ice cream will make her feel colder and worse.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道题首先先梳理病历卡给出的全部信息：人物是12岁的Helen，症状是发冷、头疼，病因是感冒，医嘱有服药、补充饮品（合理补充为多喝热水即可）、不能吃冰淇淋。接下来按照写作逻辑排布内容：首先开篇介绍Helen的基本情况，点明她身体不适，接着描述她的具体症状，再交代她就诊后医生确诊她得了感冒，之后逐条输出医生给出的建议，还可以适当补充少量符合场景的细节，比如她睡不好、冰淇淋会加重症状这类内容，既可以让语句更通顺自然，也能轻松满足不少于7句话的要求，最后检查语法拼写，确保所有要点都覆盖到。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇引入人物：第一句先介绍Helen的年龄，交代人物基础信息。
2. 铺垫场景：说明Helen今天身体状态不好，引出后续病情描述。
3. 描述症状：对应病历内容写出她发冷、头疼的表现，可补充细节说明症状带来的影响，比如睡不好。
4. 推进情节：说明她前往看医生，医生给出诊断，点明她得了感冒，对应病历的病因项。
5. 输出医嘱建议：依次对应病历的建议项，先写她需要吃药，再补充说明医生让她多喝温水，接着写明她不能吃冰淇淋，最后补充解释不能吃冰淇淋的原因，让内容更饱满连贯。
6. 通读全文检查，确认句子数量超过7句，所有病历信息都没有遗漏，语句通顺无语法错误。
【答案】
Helen is 12 years old. She doesn't feel well today. She feels cold and has a headache. That makes her sleep badly. She goes to the doctor. The doctor says she has a cold. Helen should take some medicine. The doctor also tells her to drink more water. And she can't eat ice cream. Ice cream will make her feel colder and worse.
【知识点】
病情场景英语表达
提建议常用句型
图表类书面写作
【点评】
本题是基础的信息提示类英语写作题，所有核心要点都已经在病历卡中给出，不需要学生额外拓展复杂内容，只需要准确读取图表信息，用简单正确的英语语句串联内容，适当补充少量合理细节就可以满足字数要求，完成难度较低，主要考察学生信息提取能力和基础英语语句的组织运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先先梳理病历卡给出的全部信息：人物是12岁的Helen，症状是发冷、头疼，病因是感冒，医嘱有服药、补充饮品（合理补充为多喝热水即可）、不能吃冰淇淋。接下来按照写作逻辑排布内容：首先开篇介绍Helen的基本情况，点明她身体不适，接着描述她的具体症状，再交代她就诊后医生确诊她得了感冒，之后逐条输出医生给出的建议，还可以适当补充少量符合场景的细节，比如她睡不好、冰淇淋会加重症状这类内容，既可以让语句更通顺自然，也能轻松满足不少于7句话的要求，最后检查语法拼写，确保所有要点都覆盖到。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇引入人物：第一句先介绍Helen的年龄，交代人物基础信息。
2. 铺垫场景：说明Helen今天身体状态不好，引出后续病情描述。
3. 描述症状：对应病历内容写出她发冷、头疼的表现，可补充细节说明症状带来的影响，比如睡不好。
4. 推进情节：说明她前往看医生，医生给出诊断，点明她得了感冒，对应病历的病因项。
5. 输出医嘱建议：依次对应病历的建议项，先写她需要吃药，再补充说明医生让她多喝温水，接着写明她不能吃冰淇淋，最后补充解释不能吃冰淇淋的原因，让内容更饱满连贯。
6. 通读全文检查，确认句子数量超过7句，所有病历信息都没有遗漏，语句通顺无语法错误。
【答案】
Helen is 12 years old. She doesn't feel well today. She feels cold and has a headache. That makes her sleep badly. She goes to the doctor. The doctor says she has a cold. Helen should take some medicine. The doctor also tells her to drink more water. And she can't eat ice cream. Ice cream will make her feel colder and worse.
【知识点】
病情场景英语表达
提建议常用句型
图表类书面写作
【点评】
本题是基础的信息提示类英语写作题，所有核心要点都已经在病历卡中给出，不需要学生额外拓展复杂内容，只需要准确读取图表信息，用简单正确的英语语句串联内容，适当补充少量合理细节就可以满足字数要求，完成难度较低，主要考察学生信息提取能力和基础英语语句的组织运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7