书面表达。(10 分)
不同的国家有着不同的生日习俗。严霖和 Bella 是来自不同国家的学生。请根据所给的思维导图,写一篇英语小短文介绍一下他们的生日。要求:不少于 40 词,已给出的内容不计入总词数。

Birthdays are important for everyone. And different countries have different birthday traditions.
Yan Lin is from China. His birthday is on
Bella is from
不同的国家有着不同的生日习俗。严霖和 Bella 是来自不同国家的学生。请根据所给的思维导图,写一篇英语小短文介绍一下他们的生日。要求:不少于 40 词,已给出的内容不计入总词数。
Birthdays are important for everyone. And different countries have different birthday traditions.
Yan Lin is from China. His birthday is on
the eleventh of March. He usually has a big dinner with his family. He eats longevity noodles too. He feels great!
Bella is from
the UK. Her birthday is on the second of August. She always has a party at home. Her friends come to her party and they eat the birthday cake together. They also play some games. They all enjoy themselves.
答案:示例:
Birthdays are important for everyone. And different countries have different birthday traditions.
Yan Lin is from China. His birthday is on the eleventh of March. He usually has a big dinner with his family. He eats longevity noodles too. He feels great!
Bella is from the UK. Her birthday is on the second of August. She always has a party at home. Her friends come to her party and they eat the birthday cake together. They also play some games. They all enjoy themselves.
Birthdays are important for everyone. And different countries have different birthday traditions.
Yan Lin is from China. His birthday is on the eleventh of March. He usually has a big dinner with his family. He eats longevity noodles too. He feels great!
Bella is from the UK. Her birthday is on the second of August. She always has a party at home. Her friends come to her party and they eat the birthday cake together. They also play some games. They all enjoy themselves.
解析:
【分析】
这是一道图表提示类英语书面表达题,解题时首先要梳理思维导图给出的全部信息点,拆分两个主人公的对应属性:第一步先整理严霖的相关信息:国籍为中国,生日日期是3月11日,生日活动是和家人聚餐、吃长寿面,整体感受十分愉悦;第二步整理Bella的相关信息:对应的标志性建筑是大本钟,国籍为英国,生日日期是8月2日,生日活动是和好友举办派对、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏,所有人都玩得很开心。之后把这些信息用通顺的基础英语句式串联起来,保证字数达标、逻辑连贯即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 填充严霖板块内容:首先根据思维导图标注的Mar.11th,写出对应的日期表达the eleventh of March,接着描述他的生日活动:他通常会和全家人享用丰盛的晚餐,还会吃寓意长寿的生日面,最后说明他的生日感受十分幸福。
2. 填充Bella板块内容:首先根据大本钟这一英国标志性建筑,填写对应的国籍the UK,接着根据思维导图标注的Aug.2nd写出她的生日是the second of August,再描述她的生日活动:她会在家举办生日派对,朋友们来参加派对,大家一起吃生日蛋糕、玩小游戏,所有人都玩得很尽兴。
3. 最后通读全文,检查语法错误,确认所有信息点都覆盖,满足不少于40词的字数要求即可。
【答案】
Birthdays are important for everyone. And different countries have different birthday traditions.
Yan Lin is from China. His birthday is on the eleventh of March. He usually has a big dinner with his family. He eats longevity noodles too. He feels great!
Bella is from the UK. Her birthday is on the second of August. She always has a party at home. Her friends come to her party and they eat the birthday cake together. They also play some games. They all enjoy themselves.
【知识点】
英语日期表达,中西方文化差异,英语写作
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类写作,不需要学生进行过多的自由创作,只需要准确提取思维导图给出的全部信息,对应好两个人物的不同属性,用简单正确的英语句式串联即可得分,同时也能让学生了解中、英两个国家不同的生日习俗,兼具知识性和趣味性。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一道图表提示类英语书面表达题,解题时首先要梳理思维导图给出的全部信息点,拆分两个主人公的对应属性:第一步先整理严霖的相关信息:国籍为中国,生日日期是3月11日,生日活动是和家人聚餐、吃长寿面,整体感受十分愉悦;第二步整理Bella的相关信息:对应的标志性建筑是大本钟,国籍为英国,生日日期是8月2日,生日活动是和好友举办派对、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏,所有人都玩得很开心。之后把这些信息用通顺的基础英语句式串联起来,保证字数达标、逻辑连贯即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 填充严霖板块内容:首先根据思维导图标注的Mar.11th,写出对应的日期表达the eleventh of March,接着描述他的生日活动:他通常会和全家人享用丰盛的晚餐,还会吃寓意长寿的生日面,最后说明他的生日感受十分幸福。
2. 填充Bella板块内容:首先根据大本钟这一英国标志性建筑,填写对应的国籍the UK,接着根据思维导图标注的Aug.2nd写出她的生日是the second of August,再描述她的生日活动:她会在家举办生日派对,朋友们来参加派对,大家一起吃生日蛋糕、玩小游戏,所有人都玩得很尽兴。
3. 最后通读全文,检查语法错误,确认所有信息点都覆盖,满足不少于40词的字数要求即可。
【答案】
Birthdays are important for everyone. And different countries have different birthday traditions.
Yan Lin is from China. His birthday is on the eleventh of March. He usually has a big dinner with his family. He eats longevity noodles too. He feels great!
Bella is from the UK. Her birthday is on the second of August. She always has a party at home. Her friends come to her party and they eat the birthday cake together. They also play some games. They all enjoy themselves.
【知识点】
英语日期表达,中西方文化差异,英语写作
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类写作,不需要学生进行过多的自由创作,只需要准确提取思维导图给出的全部信息,对应好两个人物的不同属性,用简单正确的英语句式串联即可得分,同时也能让学生了解中、英两个国家不同的生日习俗,兼具知识性和趣味性。
【难度系数】
0.7