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（2025·江苏宿迁经济技术开发区第一实验学校调研）动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛，请根据下列提示，写一篇短文参赛。
【提示】1. What is your favourite animal?
2. What does your favourite animal look like?
3. What is your favourite animal’s lifestyle?
4. ...
【要求】1. 要点齐全，句子通顺，不得逐字翻译。
2. 不要出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 80 词左右.
My favourite animal
（2025·江苏宿迁经济技术开发区第一实验学校调研）动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛，请根据下列提示，写一篇短文参赛。
【提示】1. What is your favourite animal?
2. What does your favourite animal look like?
3. What is your favourite animal’s lifestyle?
4. ...
【要求】1. 要点齐全，句子通顺，不得逐字翻译。
2. 不要出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 80 词左右.
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. This is a corgi. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old. It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing
答案：One possible version
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. This is a corgi. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me laugh. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog!
I love my dog and it loves me too!
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. This is a corgi. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me laugh. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog!
I love my dog and it loves me too!
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先先明确写作要求：主题是“My favourite animal”，需要覆盖题干给出的4个提示要点，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实人名校名。首先第一步先选定你要写的动物，选自己熟悉的小动物比如宠物狗就很容易展开内容；第二步先开篇点题，直接说明你最喜欢的动物是什么；第三步按照提示顺序依次介绍它的外形特征、日常的饮食和活动习惯等生活方式，最后可以补充一点你和它的日常相处细节，说明你喜欢它的原因，把内容连贯起来，不要生硬逐句翻译提示问题，保证语句通顺自然就可以。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点题：直接点明自己最喜欢的动物是自家养的柯基犬，给它取名叫Leo，交代它的年龄，开门见山回应第一个要点。
2. 描述外形：介绍它的毛色是棕黑相间，腿很短，外形软萌可爱，回应第二个外貌相关的要点。
3. 介绍生活习性：说明它爱吃鸡肉和牛肉，平时喜欢玩小球，饭后会出门散步，覆盖第三个生活方式的要点。
4. 收尾补充：简单说明它性格温顺，是自己的好朋友，补充情感相关的内容，让短文更完整，整体词数控制在80左右，没有出现真实人名校名，符合所有写作要求。
完整参考范文：
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. This is a corgi. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with small balls, and I always walk it after school. It is gentle and never barks at people. It is my best little friend, and I love it so much.
【答案】
参考范文：
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. This is a corgi. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with small balls, and I always walk it after school. It is gentle and never barks at people. It is my best little friend, and I love it so much.
【知识点】
英语话题写作，一般现在时运用，动物类表达
【点评】
本题是初中低年级的基础写作题，题干给出的提示要点非常清晰，学生只需要按照提示顺序填充对应内容，注意语句衔接自然，控制词数，规避真实个人信息即可完成，能够有效锻炼学生用英语描述事物特征的基础写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先先明确写作要求：主题是“My favourite animal”，需要覆盖题干给出的4个提示要点，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实人名校名。首先第一步先选定你要写的动物，选自己熟悉的小动物比如宠物狗就很容易展开内容；第二步先开篇点题，直接说明你最喜欢的动物是什么；第三步按照提示顺序依次介绍它的外形特征、日常的饮食和活动习惯等生活方式，最后可以补充一点你和它的日常相处细节，说明你喜欢它的原因，把内容连贯起来，不要生硬逐句翻译提示问题，保证语句通顺自然就可以。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点题：直接点明自己最喜欢的动物是自家养的柯基犬，给它取名叫Leo，交代它的年龄，开门见山回应第一个要点。
2. 描述外形：介绍它的毛色是棕黑相间，腿很短，外形软萌可爱，回应第二个外貌相关的要点。
3. 介绍生活习性：说明它爱吃鸡肉和牛肉，平时喜欢玩小球，饭后会出门散步，覆盖第三个生活方式的要点。
4. 收尾补充：简单说明它性格温顺，是自己的好朋友，补充情感相关的内容，让短文更完整，整体词数控制在80左右，没有出现真实人名校名，符合所有写作要求。
完整参考范文：
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. This is a corgi. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with small balls, and I always walk it after school. It is gentle and never barks at people. It is my best little friend, and I love it so much.
【答案】
参考范文：
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. This is a corgi. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with small balls, and I always walk it after school. It is gentle and never barks at people. It is my best little friend, and I love it so much.
【知识点】
英语话题写作，一般现在时运用，动物类表达
【点评】
本题是初中低年级的基础写作题，题干给出的提示要点非常清晰，学生只需要按照提示顺序填充对应内容，注意语句衔接自然，控制词数，规避真实个人信息即可完成，能够有效锻炼学生用英语描述事物特征的基础写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7