话题分析
本单元的话题是“动物朋友”，通过阳光中学的宠物周了解了不同类型的宠物以及宠物的故事，要求学生运用所学习的知识描写最喜爱的宠物，要写出它的外貌（appearance）、性格（personality）和生活方式（lifestyle）等，表达对宠物的喜爱之情。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. I have a pet named Teddy.
2. This is my little cat. I like it very much.
◆中间句
1. He is always happy to see me.
2. My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.
3. About three minutes later, it brought me the mouse.
◆结尾句
1. I think it is the best pet in the world.
2. We have so much fun together.
名言积累
1. Kill two birds with one stone.
一箭双雕.
2. A gloved cat catches no mice.
不愿吃苦的人成不了大事业。
经典例题
假如你是 Bob，你最喜爱的动物是猫。请你写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文来帮他介绍一下他的猫。短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
【提示】1. What does your cat look like?
2. What is it’s lifestyle?
3. ...
My favourite cat—Do Re Mi
Hello! I’m Bob. This is my little cat. I like it very much.
Do you like my cat? Tell me, please.
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
3. 根据提示内容介绍自己的猫，适当增加细节。
写作模板
开篇点题 → This is my little cat. I like it very much...
详细介绍 → My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot...
About three minutes later...
收篇结尾 → Do you like my cat? ...
遣词造句
1. 它有黑色的耳朵，圆眼睛，黑色的鼻子和一个小嘴。（round eyes）
2. 一天，我看到它在起居室追老鼠。（run after）
3. 它上下跳，然后逃跑了。（run away）
高分范文
Hello! I’m Bob. This is my little cat. I like it very much. Its name is Do Re Mi. It’s very beautiful. ① It’s a grey cat. It has black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot. ② It’s very fat. It’s cute. ③ One day, it was running after a mouse in the sitting room when I saw it. About three minutes later, it brought me the mouse. “Well done, Do Re Mi,” I said happily. ④ Then it jumped around and ran away.
Hello! I’m Bob. This is my little cat. I like it very much. Its name is Do Re Mi. It’s very beautiful. ① It’s a grey cat with black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
↳用 with 升格
My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot. ② It’s very fat but it’s cute.
↳用 but 升格
③ One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
↳用 see sb doing sth 升格
About three minutes later, it brought me the mouse. “Well done, Do Re Mi,” I said happily. ④ Then it jumped up and down and ran away.
↳用 up and down 升格
本单元的话题是“动物朋友”，通过阳光中学的宠物周了解了不同类型的宠物以及宠物的故事，要求学生运用所学习的知识描写最喜爱的宠物，要写出它的外貌（appearance）、性格（personality）和生活方式（lifestyle）等，表达对宠物的喜爱之情。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. I have a pet named Teddy.
2. This is my little cat. I like it very much.
◆中间句
1. He is always happy to see me.
2. My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.
3. About three minutes later, it brought me the mouse.
◆结尾句
1. I think it is the best pet in the world.
2. We have so much fun together.
名言积累
1. Kill two birds with one stone.
一箭双雕.
2. A gloved cat catches no mice.
不愿吃苦的人成不了大事业。
经典例题
假如你是 Bob，你最喜爱的动物是猫。请你写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文来帮他介绍一下他的猫。短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
【提示】1. What does your cat look like?
2. What is it’s lifestyle?
3. ...
My favourite cat—Do Re Mi
Hello! I’m Bob. This is my little cat. I like it very much.
Do you like my cat? Tell me, please.
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
3. 根据提示内容介绍自己的猫，适当增加细节。
写作模板
开篇点题 → This is my little cat. I like it very much...
详细介绍 → My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot...
About three minutes later...
收篇结尾 → Do you like my cat? ...
遣词造句
1. 它有黑色的耳朵，圆眼睛，黑色的鼻子和一个小嘴。（round eyes）
It has black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
2. 一天，我看到它在起居室追老鼠。（run after）
One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
3. 它上下跳，然后逃跑了。（run away）
It jumped up and down and ran away.
高分范文
Hello! I’m Bob. This is my little cat. I like it very much. Its name is Do Re Mi. It’s very beautiful. ① It’s a grey cat. It has black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot. ② It’s very fat. It’s cute. ③ One day, it was running after a mouse in the sitting room when I saw it. About three minutes later, it brought me the mouse. “Well done, Do Re Mi,” I said happily. ④ Then it jumped around and ran away.
Hello! I’m Bob. This is my little cat. I like it very much. Its name is Do Re Mi. It’s very beautiful. ① It’s a grey cat with black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
↳用 with 升格
My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot. ② It’s very fat but it’s cute.
↳用 but 升格
③ One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
↳用 see sb doing sth 升格
About three minutes later, it brought me the mouse. “Well done, Do Re Mi,” I said happily. ④ Then it jumped up and down and ran away.
↳用 up and down 升格
答案：1. It has black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
2. One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
3. It jumped up and down and ran away.
2. One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
3. It jumped up and down and ran away.
解析：
【分析】
这是三道紧扣宠物主题写作的汉译英基础题，解题思路非常清晰：首先对应每道题给出的指定提示短语，再拆分中文句子的主谓成分，结合已学的基础句式、时态要求组合内容，注意名词前的冠词使用、动词的正确形式，就能得到符合要求的正确句子。第一题围绕外貌描述直接罗列并列的名词特征即可；第二题要用到固定结构see sb./sth. doing sth. 匹配提示短语run after；第三题注意动作是过去发生的，动词要变为过去式，用and连接两个并列动作。
【解析】
1. 指代小猫用主语It，“有”对应谓语has，将要求的外貌特征“黑色的耳朵、圆眼睛、黑色的鼻子、小嘴”用并列结构连接，注意单数可数名词前补充不定冠词a，得到完整句子。
2. 时间状语One day放句首，使用固定搭配see sth. doing sth. 表达“看见某物正在做某事”，将提示短语run after变为running after，补充地点状语in the sitting room，组合成句。
3. 动作是过去发生的，两个并列动作“上下跳”“逃跑”都用一般过去式，用and连接两个谓语，主语It放句首，得到完整句子。
【答案】
1. It has black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
2. One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
3. It jumped up and down and ran away.
【知识点】
汉译英基础表达，固定动词搭配，一般过去时
【点评】
本题是单元写作的前置基础训练，紧扣“动物朋友”主题的核心词汇和常用句式，既巩固了本单元的重点固定搭配，也帮学生搭建完整写作的基础语句框架，难度较低，只要牢记提示短语和基础语法规则就可以顺利完成。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是三道紧扣宠物主题写作的汉译英基础题，解题思路非常清晰：首先对应每道题给出的指定提示短语，再拆分中文句子的主谓成分，结合已学的基础句式、时态要求组合内容，注意名词前的冠词使用、动词的正确形式，就能得到符合要求的正确句子。第一题围绕外貌描述直接罗列并列的名词特征即可；第二题要用到固定结构see sb./sth. doing sth. 匹配提示短语run after；第三题注意动作是过去发生的，动词要变为过去式，用and连接两个并列动作。
【解析】
1. 指代小猫用主语It，“有”对应谓语has，将要求的外貌特征“黑色的耳朵、圆眼睛、黑色的鼻子、小嘴”用并列结构连接，注意单数可数名词前补充不定冠词a，得到完整句子。
2. 时间状语One day放句首，使用固定搭配see sth. doing sth. 表达“看见某物正在做某事”，将提示短语run after变为running after，补充地点状语in the sitting room，组合成句。
3. 动作是过去发生的，两个并列动作“上下跳”“逃跑”都用一般过去式，用and连接两个谓语，主语It放句首，得到完整句子。
【答案】
1. It has black ears, round eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.
2. One day, I saw it running after a mouse in the sitting room.
3. It jumped up and down and ran away.
【知识点】
汉译英基础表达，固定动词搭配，一般过去时
【点评】
本题是单元写作的前置基础训练，紧扣“动物朋友”主题的核心词汇和常用句式，既巩固了本单元的重点固定搭配，也帮学生搭建完整写作的基础语句框架，难度较低，只要牢记提示短语和基础语法规则就可以顺利完成。
【难度系数】
0.8