实战演练
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Mary 听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
【提示问题】1. Which places of interest should I visit?
2. When can I go there?
3. What's it famous for?
【要求】1. 内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥。
2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯。
3. 100 词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary，
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
Huangguoshu Waterfall is a natural wonder and a treat for your eyes. I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours，
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Mary 听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
【提示问题】1. Which places of interest should I visit?
2. When can I go there?
3. What's it famous for?
【要求】1. 内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥。
2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯。
3. 100 词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary，
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
Huangguoshu Waterfall is a natural wonder and a treat for your eyes. I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案：One possible version
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Huangguoshu Waterfall is one of China's most amazing natural wonders.
It is in Anshun, Guizhou Province. It is 77.8 metres high and 101 metres wide, and it's the largest waterfall in Asia. The waterfall got its name from a kind of local plant—the Yellow Fruit Tree. Huangguoshu Waterfall is very beautiful and people can hear its sound from far away. Visitors can enjoy the fantastic view of it from different places. You can come here at any time, but the best time to visit Huangguoshu Waterfall is from June to September.
Huangguoshu Waterfall is a natural wonder and a treat for your eyes. I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Huangguoshu Waterfall is one of China's most amazing natural wonders.
It is in Anshun, Guizhou Province. It is 77.8 metres high and 101 metres wide, and it's the largest waterfall in Asia. The waterfall got its name from a kind of local plant—the Yellow Fruit Tree. Huangguoshu Waterfall is very beautiful and people can hear its sound from far away. Visitors can enjoy the fantastic view of it from different places. You can come here at any time, but the best time to visit Huangguoshu Waterfall is from June to September.
Huangguoshu Waterfall is a natural wonder and a treat for your eyes. I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道题，先明确核心任务是给要来中国旅游的笔友写回复邮件，且题目已经给出了开头和结尾的固定句，我们只需要填充中间内容，同时覆盖三个提示问题：1. 推荐游览的景点 2. 合适的出行时间 3. 景点的知名之处。首先结合结尾给出的Huangguoshu Waterfall相关表述，直接确定推荐景点为黄果树瀑布，先介绍它的基本位置、规模、特色来回应“景点以什么闻名”的问题，再说明游览的合适时间，点明最佳时段刚好契合对方的暑假安排，最后自然衔接题目给出的收尾句，适当补充细节让内容连贯，控制总词数在100左右即可。
【解析】
步骤1：承接题目给出的开头句，直接点明推荐的核心景点：黄果树瀑布，点明它是中国最令人惊叹的自然奇观之一，开门见山回应第一个提示问题。
步骤2：补充景点的基础信息：位于贵州安顺，高度77.8米、宽度101米，是亚洲最大的瀑布，介绍它的名字由来、远可闻水声、多视角可观赏不同美景的特色，完整回应第三个提示问题“景点以什么闻名”。
步骤3：介绍出行时间，说明全年都可前往，最佳游览时段是6-9月，刚好匹配对方的暑假假期，完整回应第二个提示问题。
步骤4：调整语句衔接，保证语意通顺连贯，自然过渡到题目给定的结尾句，检查要点无遗漏，词数符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Huangguoshu Waterfall is one of China's most amazing natural wonders.
It is in Anshun, Guizhou Province. It is 77.8 metres high and 101 metres wide, and it's the largest waterfall in Asia. The waterfall got its name from a kind of local plant—the Yellow Fruit Tree. Huangguoshu Waterfall is very beautiful and people can hear its sound from far away. Visitors can enjoy the fantastic view of it from different places. You can come here at any time, but the best time to visit Huangguoshu Waterfall is from June to September.
Huangguoshu Waterfall is a natural wonder and a treat for your eyes. I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
名胜介绍表达
提纲类英语写作
【点评】
本题属于半开放的提纲类应用文写作，已经给出了邮件的首尾内容，降低了搭建全文框架的难度，只需要学生覆盖指定的三个提示要点即可完成写作，场景贴近学生日常的英语写作练习，只要积累基础的描述景点的相关词汇，理顺行文逻辑，避免中式英语，就可以写出符合要求的作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题，先明确核心任务是给要来中国旅游的笔友写回复邮件，且题目已经给出了开头和结尾的固定句，我们只需要填充中间内容，同时覆盖三个提示问题：1. 推荐游览的景点 2. 合适的出行时间 3. 景点的知名之处。首先结合结尾给出的Huangguoshu Waterfall相关表述，直接确定推荐景点为黄果树瀑布，先介绍它的基本位置、规模、特色来回应“景点以什么闻名”的问题，再说明游览的合适时间，点明最佳时段刚好契合对方的暑假安排，最后自然衔接题目给出的收尾句，适当补充细节让内容连贯，控制总词数在100左右即可。
【解析】
步骤1：承接题目给出的开头句，直接点明推荐的核心景点：黄果树瀑布，点明它是中国最令人惊叹的自然奇观之一，开门见山回应第一个提示问题。
步骤2：补充景点的基础信息：位于贵州安顺，高度77.8米、宽度101米，是亚洲最大的瀑布，介绍它的名字由来、远可闻水声、多视角可观赏不同美景的特色，完整回应第三个提示问题“景点以什么闻名”。
步骤3：介绍出行时间，说明全年都可前往，最佳游览时段是6-9月，刚好匹配对方的暑假假期，完整回应第二个提示问题。
步骤4：调整语句衔接，保证语意通顺连贯，自然过渡到题目给定的结尾句，检查要点无遗漏，词数符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Mary,
I'm happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. Huangguoshu Waterfall is one of China's most amazing natural wonders.
It is in Anshun, Guizhou Province. It is 77.8 metres high and 101 metres wide, and it's the largest waterfall in Asia. The waterfall got its name from a kind of local plant—the Yellow Fruit Tree. Huangguoshu Waterfall is very beautiful and people can hear its sound from far away. Visitors can enjoy the fantastic view of it from different places. You can come here at any time, but the best time to visit Huangguoshu Waterfall is from June to September.
Huangguoshu Waterfall is a natural wonder and a treat for your eyes. I'm sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
名胜介绍表达
提纲类英语写作
【点评】
本题属于半开放的提纲类应用文写作，已经给出了邮件的首尾内容，降低了搭建全文框架的难度，只需要学生覆盖指定的三个提示要点即可完成写作，场景贴近学生日常的英语写作练习，只要积累基础的描述景点的相关词汇，理顺行文逻辑，避免中式英语，就可以写出符合要求的作文。
【难度系数】
0.7