话题分析
本单元的话题是关于“斑斓多彩的地貌景观”,属于“人与自然”,帮助学生认识地球上丰富多彩的自然形态及其存在的意义,激发学生对自然的热爱和敬畏之情,运用所学语言从地理位置、主要特征等方面介绍一个美丽或者有趣的中国地貌。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. ...is in the south/north of...
2. I am writing to invite you to visit Mount Taishan.
◆中间句
1. It's a beautiful city with a long history.
2. From the top,you can enjoy the beautiful views.
3. It is famous for its beautiful views.
◆结尾句
1. When you come here,you can visit different gardens and museums.
2. People like to stay overnight...
谚语积累
1. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. 美丽存在于旁观者的眼中。
2. A thing of beauty is a joy forever. 美好的事物是永恒的喜悦。
经典例题
你校英语网站正在举办一次英文写作竞赛活动,主题是介绍我国的自然旅游胜地。请你根据以下要点提示,以“Mount Taishan:A cultural and natural gem”为题,写一篇介绍泰山的短文参赛。
【要点】1. Where is Mount Taishan?
2. What is it famous for?
3. What can visitors do there?
参考词汇:the Five Sacred Mountains 五岳 cliff 悬崖 Sunset Glow 晚霞夕照 historical site 历史遗迹
【要求】1. 短文包括所有要点提示,可适当发挥。
2. 词数 80 左右。
Mount Taishan:A cultural and natural gem
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 文章要点已经给出,按照话题展开阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
写作模板

开篇点题 → Mount Taishan lies in...
↓
详细介绍 → The mountain is famous for its beautiful views...
↓
收篇结尾 → Visitors can...
遣词造句
1. 它是中国五岳之一。(one of)
2. 泰山因它漂亮的风景而著名。(be famous for)
3. 他们可以沿着台阶和小路到达顶部。(walk up)
高分范文

Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province,China. ①It is about 1,545 metres. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
② Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views. There are high cliffs,ancient pine trees,and the sea of clouds. The "Sunrise from the East" and "Sunset Glow" are among the most famous views.
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province,China. ①It is about 1,545 metres high.
→用 high 升格
It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
② Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views,such as high cliffs,ancient pine trees,and the sea of clouds.
→用 such as 升格
The "Sunrise from the East" and "Sunset Glow" are among the most famous views.
Visitors can visit historical sites. ③ They can walk up steps and paths to the top or take a cable car up and down.
本单元的话题是关于“斑斓多彩的地貌景观”,属于“人与自然”,帮助学生认识地球上丰富多彩的自然形态及其存在的意义,激发学生对自然的热爱和敬畏之情,运用所学语言从地理位置、主要特征等方面介绍一个美丽或者有趣的中国地貌。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. ...is in the south/north of...
2. I am writing to invite you to visit Mount Taishan.
◆中间句
1. It's a beautiful city with a long history.
2. From the top,you can enjoy the beautiful views.
3. It is famous for its beautiful views.
◆结尾句
1. When you come here,you can visit different gardens and museums.
2. People like to stay overnight...
谚语积累
1. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. 美丽存在于旁观者的眼中。
2. A thing of beauty is a joy forever. 美好的事物是永恒的喜悦。
经典例题
你校英语网站正在举办一次英文写作竞赛活动,主题是介绍我国的自然旅游胜地。请你根据以下要点提示,以“Mount Taishan:A cultural and natural gem”为题,写一篇介绍泰山的短文参赛。
【要点】1. Where is Mount Taishan?
2. What is it famous for?
3. What can visitors do there?
参考词汇:the Five Sacred Mountains 五岳 cliff 悬崖 Sunset Glow 晚霞夕照 historical site 历史遗迹
【要求】1. 短文包括所有要点提示,可适当发挥。
2. 词数 80 左右。
Mount Taishan:A cultural and natural gem
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 文章要点已经给出,按照话题展开阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
写作模板
开篇点题 → Mount Taishan lies in...
↓
详细介绍 → The mountain is famous for its beautiful views...
↓
收篇结尾 → Visitors can...
遣词造句
1. 它是中国五岳之一。(one of)
It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
2. 泰山因它漂亮的风景而著名。(be famous for)
Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views.
3. 他们可以沿着台阶和小路到达顶部。(walk up)
They can walk up steps and paths to the top.
高分范文
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province,China. ①It is about 1,545 metres. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
② Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views. There are high cliffs,ancient pine trees,and the sea of clouds. The "Sunrise from the East" and "Sunset Glow" are among the most famous views.
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province,China. ①It is about 1,545 metres high.
→用 high 升格
It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
② Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views,such as high cliffs,ancient pine trees,and the sea of clouds.
→用 such as 升格
The "Sunrise from the East" and "Sunset Glow" are among the most famous views.
Visitors can visit historical sites. ③ They can walk up steps and paths to the top or take a cable car up and down.
答案:[遣词造句]
1. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
2. Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views.
3. They can walk up steps and paths to the top.
1. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
2. Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views.
3. They can walk up steps and paths to the top.
解析:
【分析】
这是英语写作板块的基础遣词造句题型,解题时首先要明确每道题给出的中文句意、指定使用的提示短语,结合本单元要求的一般现在时时态、第三人称表述规则,将已给出的参考词汇和提示结构进行组合:第1题抓住提示词one of的用法,后接可数名词复数的专有名词“五岳”的对应英文即可;第2题紧扣提示短语be famous for,搭配主语泰山和宾语“漂亮的风景”完成句子;第3题依托提示短语walk up,串联“台阶小路”和“到达顶部”的语义,就能得到完全符合要求的句子,不需要额外添加冗余内容,保证表达准确贴合句意即可。
【解析】
1. 第一句:用It指代前文提到的泰山,指定短语one of意为“……之一”,后接复数专有名词the Five Sacred Mountains of China(中国五岳),专有名词首字母大写,组合后得到句子,完全匹配中文含义。
2. 第二句:主语为Mount Taishan,时态为要求的一般现在时,第三人称单数作主语,be动词选用is,搭配指定短语be famous for,后接宾语its beautiful views,精准对应“泰山因它漂亮的风景而著名”的句意。
3. 第三句:主语They指代游客,使用指定短语walk up,后接动作的对象steps and paths(台阶和小路),最后补充目的状语to the top(到达顶部),组合后完全符合中文语义和提示要求。
【答案】
1. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
2. Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views.
3. They can walk up steps and paths to the top.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配;一般现在时;专有名词书写
【点评】
本题属于写作前置的基础语料训练,紧扣介绍中国地貌景观的写作主题,依托指定提示短语降低造句难度,帮助学生快速掌握介绍旅游胜地类短文的核心基础表达,为后续完成完整的语篇写作做好铺垫,训练针对性很强。
【难度系数】
0.9
这是英语写作板块的基础遣词造句题型,解题时首先要明确每道题给出的中文句意、指定使用的提示短语,结合本单元要求的一般现在时时态、第三人称表述规则,将已给出的参考词汇和提示结构进行组合:第1题抓住提示词one of的用法,后接可数名词复数的专有名词“五岳”的对应英文即可;第2题紧扣提示短语be famous for,搭配主语泰山和宾语“漂亮的风景”完成句子;第3题依托提示短语walk up,串联“台阶小路”和“到达顶部”的语义,就能得到完全符合要求的句子,不需要额外添加冗余内容,保证表达准确贴合句意即可。
【解析】
1. 第一句:用It指代前文提到的泰山,指定短语one of意为“……之一”,后接复数专有名词the Five Sacred Mountains of China(中国五岳),专有名词首字母大写,组合后得到句子,完全匹配中文含义。
2. 第二句:主语为Mount Taishan,时态为要求的一般现在时,第三人称单数作主语,be动词选用is,搭配指定短语be famous for,后接宾语its beautiful views,精准对应“泰山因它漂亮的风景而著名”的句意。
3. 第三句:主语They指代游客,使用指定短语walk up,后接动作的对象steps and paths(台阶和小路),最后补充目的状语to the top(到达顶部),组合后完全符合中文语义和提示要求。
【答案】
1. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
2. Mount Taishan is famous for its beautiful views.
3. They can walk up steps and paths to the top.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配;一般现在时;专有名词书写
【点评】
本题属于写作前置的基础语料训练,紧扣介绍中国地貌景观的写作主题,依托指定提示短语降低造句难度,帮助学生快速掌握介绍旅游胜地类短文的核心基础表达,为后续完成完整的语篇写作做好铺垫,训练针对性很强。
【难度系数】
0.9