话题分析
本单元的话题是“家”,属于“人与社会”主题,让学生了解世界各地多样化的住宅类型和家庭生活,要求学生结合所学家的词汇与表达,并发挥想象力,介绍个人梦想之家。写作时首先要想象梦想家园的轮廓,然后收集相关信息、组织词句,要充分发挥自己的想象,可以先画出来,再进行描述。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. My dream home is a house with two floors.
2. My dream house is very big. It has a nice garden.
◆中间句
1. On the ground floor,there is a big kitchen and a dining room.
2. On the first floor,there is a computer room.
3. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living room.
◆结尾句
1. This is my dream home. I like it.
2. I hope you can come to visit my house one day.
谚语积累
1. The family is one of nature's masterpieces.
家庭是大自然创造的杰作之一。
2. East or west,home is best.
金窝银窝,不如自家的草窝。
经典例题
根据所给要点提示以“My dream house”为题,写一篇短文。80词左右。
【要点】1. What is your dream house like?
2. What can you do in it?
3. ...
My dream house
写作指导
1. 用第一人称来写。
2. 时态为“一般现在时”。
3. 要写出理想的房子的布局是什么,加以适当发挥。
写作模板

开篇点题→My dream house is very big...
↓
详细介绍→On the ground floor,there is...
On the first floor,there is...
↓
收篇结尾→I hope...
遣词造句
1. 花园里满是花,看起来很漂亮。(be full of)
2. 我能邀请二十多位朋友来吃饭。(invite sb to do sth)
3. 我有一个属于我自己的卧室。(of one's own)
高分范文

My dream house is very big. It has three floors with a garden and a swimming pool. ①The garden is full of flowers. It looks very beautiful.
On the ground floor,there is a big kitchen and a dining room. ②Over twenty friends can have dinner together. On the first floor,there is a computer room and a big living room. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living room. ③I have my bedroom. It is big and clean.
④I hope to live in my dream house one day.|My dream house
My dream house is very big. It has three floors with a garden and a swimming pool. ①The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
└─用 and 升格
On the ground floor,there is a big kitchen and a dining room. ②I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner.
└─用 invite sb to do sth 升格
On the first floor,there is a computer room and a big living room. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living room. ③I have a bedroom of my own.
└─用 of my own 升格
It is big and clean.
④I hope I can live in my dream house one day.
本单元的话题是“家”,属于“人与社会”主题,让学生了解世界各地多样化的住宅类型和家庭生活,要求学生结合所学家的词汇与表达,并发挥想象力,介绍个人梦想之家。写作时首先要想象梦想家园的轮廓,然后收集相关信息、组织词句,要充分发挥自己的想象,可以先画出来,再进行描述。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. My dream home is a house with two floors.
2. My dream house is very big. It has a nice garden.
◆中间句
1. On the ground floor,there is a big kitchen and a dining room.
2. On the first floor,there is a computer room.
3. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living room.
◆结尾句
1. This is my dream home. I like it.
2. I hope you can come to visit my house one day.
谚语积累
1. The family is one of nature's masterpieces.
家庭是大自然创造的杰作之一。
2. East or west,home is best.
金窝银窝,不如自家的草窝。
经典例题
根据所给要点提示以“My dream house”为题,写一篇短文。80词左右。
【要点】1. What is your dream house like?
2. What can you do in it?
3. ...
My dream house
写作指导
1. 用第一人称来写。
2. 时态为“一般现在时”。
3. 要写出理想的房子的布局是什么,加以适当发挥。
写作模板
开篇点题→My dream house is very big...
↓
详细介绍→On the ground floor,there is...
On the first floor,there is...
↓
收篇结尾→I hope...
遣词造句
1. 花园里满是花,看起来很漂亮。(be full of)
The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
2. 我能邀请二十多位朋友来吃饭。(invite sb to do sth)
I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner.
3. 我有一个属于我自己的卧室。(of one's own)
I have a bedroom of my own.
高分范文
My dream house is very big. It has three floors with a garden and a swimming pool. ①The garden is full of flowers. It looks very beautiful.
On the ground floor,there is a big kitchen and a dining room. ②Over twenty friends can have dinner together. On the first floor,there is a computer room and a big living room. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living room. ③I have my bedroom. It is big and clean.
④I hope to live in my dream house one day.|My dream house
My dream house is very big. It has three floors with a garden and a swimming pool. ①The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
└─用 and 升格
On the ground floor,there is a big kitchen and a dining room. ②I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner.
└─用 invite sb to do sth 升格
On the first floor,there is a computer room and a big living room. My friends and I can chat and watch TV in the living room. ③I have a bedroom of my own.
└─用 of my own 升格
It is big and clean.
④I hope I can live in my dream house one day.
答案:[遣词造句]
1. The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
2. I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner.
3. I have a bedroom of my own.
1. The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
2. I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner.
3. I have a bedroom of my own.
解析:
【分析】
这三道遣词造句题是为后续介绍梦想之家的写作做基础铺垫,解题时首先要抓住题干给出的指定提示短语,再结合中文句意拆分句子成分,匹配对应的英文表达,同时结合本单元要求的一般现在时、第一人称的写作规则,将成分有序组合,注意语法的正确性,就能得到符合要求的正确句子。具体思考路径:1. 第一题先找主语“花园”,用指定短语be full of衔接“花”,再用并列连词and连接后半句“看起来很漂亮”的表达,保证句式连贯;2. 第二题直接套用指定结构invite sb to do sth,把“我”“二十多位朋友”“来吃饭”的内容对应填入结构的对应位置即可;3. 第三题用指定结构of one's own作后置定语,修饰“卧室”,调整one's为第一人称对应的my,组合出正确句子。
【解析】
1. 第一句:主语为The garden,是单数第三人称,be动词选用is,搭配指定短语be full of后接宾语flowers,用并列连词and连接并列谓语looks very beautiful,符合语法和句意要求。
2. 第二句:以第一人称I作主语,情态动词can后接指定结构invite sb to do sth,其中sb对应over twenty friends,动作部分to have dinner对应“来吃饭”,组合后语义通顺符合要求。
3. 第三句:主语为I,谓语用have,宾语为a bedroom,用指定短语of my own作后置定语修饰bedroom,完全贴合句意和短语使用规则。
【答案】
1. The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
2. I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner.
3. I have a bedroom of my own.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配;一般现在时;简单句构造
【点评】
本题紧扣本单元“介绍梦想之家”的写作目标,聚焦核心高分短语的应用练习,从单句搭建层面帮学生规避写作中短语误用、句式零散的问题,难度适中,能有效为后续完整短文写作夯实基础。
【难度系数】
0.8
这三道遣词造句题是为后续介绍梦想之家的写作做基础铺垫,解题时首先要抓住题干给出的指定提示短语,再结合中文句意拆分句子成分,匹配对应的英文表达,同时结合本单元要求的一般现在时、第一人称的写作规则,将成分有序组合,注意语法的正确性,就能得到符合要求的正确句子。具体思考路径:1. 第一题先找主语“花园”,用指定短语be full of衔接“花”,再用并列连词and连接后半句“看起来很漂亮”的表达,保证句式连贯;2. 第二题直接套用指定结构invite sb to do sth,把“我”“二十多位朋友”“来吃饭”的内容对应填入结构的对应位置即可;3. 第三题用指定结构of one's own作后置定语,修饰“卧室”,调整one's为第一人称对应的my,组合出正确句子。
【解析】
1. 第一句:主语为The garden,是单数第三人称,be动词选用is,搭配指定短语be full of后接宾语flowers,用并列连词and连接并列谓语looks very beautiful,符合语法和句意要求。
2. 第二句:以第一人称I作主语,情态动词can后接指定结构invite sb to do sth,其中sb对应over twenty friends,动作部分to have dinner对应“来吃饭”,组合后语义通顺符合要求。
3. 第三句:主语为I,谓语用have,宾语为a bedroom,用指定短语of my own作后置定语修饰bedroom,完全贴合句意和短语使用规则。
【答案】
1. The garden is full of flowers and looks very beautiful.
2. I can invite over twenty friends to have dinner.
3. I have a bedroom of my own.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配;一般现在时;简单句构造
【点评】
本题紧扣本单元“介绍梦想之家”的写作目标,聚焦核心高分短语的应用练习,从单句搭建层面帮学生规避写作中短语误用、句式零散的问题,难度适中,能有效为后续完整短文写作夯实基础。
【难度系数】
0.8