实战演练
(2025·江苏泰州靖江八校联盟调研)China Daily 报社正在举行题为“My dream home”的征文活动,请根据下面的思维导图描述你的梦想家园。

【要求】1. 表达清楚,书写工整,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括所有要点提示,并适当发挥。
3. 词数不少于 80。
4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
My dream home
(2025·江苏泰州靖江八校联盟调研)China Daily 报社正在举行题为“My dream home”的征文活动,请根据下面的思维导图描述你的梦想家园。
【要求】1. 表达清楚,书写工整,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括所有要点提示,并适当发挥。
3. 词数不少于 80。
4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
My dream home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. It is far from the city centre so people can take a bus or drive there.
There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a house cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six rooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend.
I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful. They often help me with my problems.
This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life.
答案:实战演练
One possible version
My dream home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. It is far from the city centre so people can take a bus or drive there.
There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a house cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six rooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend. I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful. They often help me with my problems.
This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life.
One possible version
My dream home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. It is far from the city centre so people can take a bus or drive there.
There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a house cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six rooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend. I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful. They often help me with my problems.
This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life.
解析:
翻译:
### 我的梦想家园
我的梦想家园是山脚下的一座大房子。它周围有许多树和花。每天,我都能闻到花香,听到鸟儿歌唱。它离市中心很远,所以人们可以乘公共汽车或开车去那里。
我的房子有两层。在一楼,有一个厨房和一个家庭影院。我可以同时吃饭和看电影。在二楼,有六个房间。我的朋友们可以在周末来和我一起住。
我有很多邻居,他们友好且乐于助人。他们经常帮助我解决问题。
这就是我的梦想家园。它是一个享受生活的好地方。
### 我的梦想家园
我的梦想家园是山脚下的一座大房子。它周围有许多树和花。每天,我都能闻到花香,听到鸟儿歌唱。它离市中心很远,所以人们可以乘公共汽车或开车去那里。
我的房子有两层。在一楼,有一个厨房和一个家庭影院。我可以同时吃饭和看电影。在二楼,有六个房间。我的朋友们可以在周末来和我一起住。
我有很多邻居,他们友好且乐于助人。他们经常帮助我解决问题。
这就是我的梦想家园。它是一个享受生活的好地方。