实战演练
假设你将参加校报举行的 *Alice in Wonderland* 的续写比赛，请根据所给信息，适当发挥想象，写一篇记叙文。
【提示】1. Where will she go next?
2. What will she hear and see?
3. What will happen next?
4....（发挥想象，自己再编写 1 - 2 句话）
【写作要求】1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当拓展。
2. 词数 100 左右。要求表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
假设你将参加校报举行的 *Alice in Wonderland* 的续写比赛，请根据所给信息，适当发挥想象，写一篇记叙文。
【提示】1. Where will she go next?
2. What will she hear and see?
3. What will happen next?
4....（发挥想象，自己再编写 1 - 2 句话）
【写作要求】1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当拓展。
2. 词数 100 左右。要求表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
答案：One possible version
After eating the cake, Alice finally got the key and got out of the garden. Alice went through the forest and swam across a river.
Finally, she arrived at a castle on fire. She saw some thick smoke from the windows and heard someone shouting for help. Suddenly she heard a whisper behind the bushes. Alice thought it was a ghost. But to her surprise, it was the rabbit she met before. He hurt his leg badly and couldn't move. Alice helped him out and decided to take care of him.
After eating the cake, Alice finally got the key and got out of the garden. Alice went through the forest and swam across a river.
Finally, she arrived at a castle on fire. She saw some thick smoke from the windows and heard someone shouting for help. Suddenly she heard a whisper behind the bushes. Alice thought it was a ghost. But to her surprise, it was the rabbit she met before. He hurt his leg badly and couldn't move. Alice helped him out and decided to take care of him.
解析：
【分析】
这是限定主题的故事续写类记叙文写作，解题思路非常清晰：首先锚定核心要求，必须覆盖题干给出的3个核心提示要点，额外补充1-2个符合原作风格的原创情节，词数控制在100左右，贴合《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的奇幻叙事调性，全程使用叙事类常用的一般过去时。第一步先承接原作爱丽丝此前拿钥匙出花园的经典情节，明确她后续的去向，回答第一个提示问题；第二步设定抵达新场景后的视觉、听觉内容，对应“所见所闻”的要求；第三步设计小冲突推进剧情，对应后续事件的要求，最后补充救助白兔的原创收尾情节，全程避开真实人名校名，保证逻辑连贯过渡自然。
【解析】
写作可按4个步骤完成：
1. 开篇承接原作前置情节，交代爱丽丝拿到钥匙离开花园后的行程，直接回应第一个要点“接下来去哪里”：穿过森林、渡河最终抵达一处着火的城堡。
2. 描写抵达城堡后的场景，对应第二个要点“所见所闻”：看见窗户冒出滚滚浓烟，听到有人呼救的声音。
3. 推进剧情发展，回应第三个要点“接下来发生什么”：听到灌木丛后方传来异响，原本以为是幽灵，结果发现是之前偶遇的那只兔子。
4. 补充原创情节：兔子腿受了重伤无法移动，爱丽丝出手救助它，还决定留下来照料它，完成叙事收尾。全文使用一般过去时，衔接流畅，词数符合要求，没有出现任何真实隐私信息。
【答案】
One possible version
After eating the cake, Alice finally got the key and got out of the garden. Alice went through the forest and swam across a river.
Finally, she arrived at a castle on fire. She saw some thick smoke from the windows and heard someone shouting for help. Suddenly she heard a whisper behind the bushes. Alice thought it was a ghost. But to her surprise, it was the rabbit she met before. He hurt his leg badly and couldn't move. Alice helped him out and decided to take care of him.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般过去时应用，故事续写逻辑
【点评】
本篇续写紧扣《爱丽丝梦游仙境》原作的奇幻设定，所有题干要求的要点全部完整覆盖，新增的偶遇受伤白兔的情节和原作经典角色高度呼应，情节设计合理有新意，叙事流畅衔接自然，词数完全符合要求，没有出现违规的真实隐私信息，符合续写比赛的记叙文创作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是限定主题的故事续写类记叙文写作，解题思路非常清晰：首先锚定核心要求，必须覆盖题干给出的3个核心提示要点，额外补充1-2个符合原作风格的原创情节，词数控制在100左右，贴合《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的奇幻叙事调性，全程使用叙事类常用的一般过去时。第一步先承接原作爱丽丝此前拿钥匙出花园的经典情节，明确她后续的去向，回答第一个提示问题；第二步设定抵达新场景后的视觉、听觉内容，对应“所见所闻”的要求；第三步设计小冲突推进剧情，对应后续事件的要求，最后补充救助白兔的原创收尾情节，全程避开真实人名校名，保证逻辑连贯过渡自然。
【解析】
写作可按4个步骤完成：
1. 开篇承接原作前置情节，交代爱丽丝拿到钥匙离开花园后的行程，直接回应第一个要点“接下来去哪里”：穿过森林、渡河最终抵达一处着火的城堡。
2. 描写抵达城堡后的场景，对应第二个要点“所见所闻”：看见窗户冒出滚滚浓烟，听到有人呼救的声音。
3. 推进剧情发展，回应第三个要点“接下来发生什么”：听到灌木丛后方传来异响，原本以为是幽灵，结果发现是之前偶遇的那只兔子。
4. 补充原创情节：兔子腿受了重伤无法移动，爱丽丝出手救助它，还决定留下来照料它，完成叙事收尾。全文使用一般过去时，衔接流畅，词数符合要求，没有出现任何真实隐私信息。
【答案】
One possible version
After eating the cake, Alice finally got the key and got out of the garden. Alice went through the forest and swam across a river.
Finally, she arrived at a castle on fire. She saw some thick smoke from the windows and heard someone shouting for help. Suddenly she heard a whisper behind the bushes. Alice thought it was a ghost. But to her surprise, it was the rabbit she met before. He hurt his leg badly and couldn't move. Alice helped him out and decided to take care of him.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般过去时应用，故事续写逻辑
【点评】
本篇续写紧扣《爱丽丝梦游仙境》原作的奇幻设定，所有题干要求的要点全部完整覆盖，新增的偶遇受伤白兔的情节和原作经典角色高度呼应，情节设计合理有新意，叙事流畅衔接自然，词数完全符合要求，没有出现违规的真实隐私信息，符合续写比赛的记叙文创作要求。
【难度系数】
0.6