话题分析
本单元的话题是“奇幻文学”，重点学习了《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》中的部分故事。它叙述了一个名叫爱丽丝的女孩从兔子洞进入一处神奇国度，遇到许多会讲话的生物以及像人一样活动的纸牌，最后发现原来是一场梦的故事。学生应会运用所学的知识发挥想象编写一则小寓言故事。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
2. One day, a hare and a tortoise decided to have a race.
◆中间句
1. They lived happily with their mother in the forest.
2. They left home with some food.
3. They returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
◆结尾句
1. We should value our life and enjoy everything around us.
2. The story also tells me I shouldn't look down upon anyone else.
谚语积累
1. A good beginning makes a good ending.
善始才有善终。
2. Good things come to those who wait.
苍天不负有心人。
经典例题
请根据下面的故事梗概，发挥想象力，以“Two little pigs”为题写一则小故事。
【提示】1. How did the story begin?
2. What happened to the two little pigs?
3. What happened next?
4. How about the end of the story?
【要求】1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当拓展。
2. 词数 80 左右。要求表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
Two little pigs
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般过去时。
3. 故事梗概已给出，写作时应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
开篇点题→Once upon a time...
详细介绍→They lived happily with their mother in the forest. When they got to the city...
收篇结尾→So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
遣词造句
1. 从前，有两只小猪。(there be)
2. 当他们长大的时候，他们的妈妈决定让他们走出森林。(grow up)
3. 他们注意到城里的人不是真正的快乐。(notice)
高分范文
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs. One was black and the other was white. ① They shared a happy life with their mother in the forest.
↖用 share... with 升格
When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city. ② So they set off from home, taking some food with them.
↖用 set off 和现在分词作状语升格
③ Once they arrived at the city, they noticed the people in the city weren't really happy.
↖用 once 和 arrive at 升格
本单元的话题是“奇幻文学”，重点学习了《爱丽丝漫游奇境记》中的部分故事。它叙述了一个名叫爱丽丝的女孩从兔子洞进入一处神奇国度，遇到许多会讲话的生物以及像人一样活动的纸牌，最后发现原来是一场梦的故事。学生应会运用所学的知识发挥想象编写一则小寓言故事。
素材积累
◆开头句
1. Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
2. One day, a hare and a tortoise decided to have a race.
◆中间句
1. They lived happily with their mother in the forest.
2. They left home with some food.
3. They returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
◆结尾句
1. We should value our life and enjoy everything around us.
2. The story also tells me I shouldn't look down upon anyone else.
谚语积累
1. A good beginning makes a good ending.
善始才有善终。
2. Good things come to those who wait.
苍天不负有心人。
经典例题
请根据下面的故事梗概，发挥想象力，以“Two little pigs”为题写一则小故事。
【提示】1. How did the story begin?
2. What happened to the two little pigs?
3. What happened next?
4. How about the end of the story?
【要求】1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当拓展。
2. 词数 80 左右。要求表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
Two little pigs
写作指导
1. 用第三人称来写。
2. 时态为一般过去时。
3. 故事梗概已给出，写作时应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
开篇点题→Once upon a time...
详细介绍→They lived happily with their mother in the forest. When they got to the city...
收篇结尾→So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
遣词造句
1. 从前，有两只小猪。(there be)
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
2. 当他们长大的时候，他们的妈妈决定让他们走出森林。(grow up)
When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest.
3. 他们注意到城里的人不是真正的快乐。(notice)
They noticed the people in the city were not really happy.
高分范文
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs. One was black and the other was white. ① They shared a happy life with their mother in the forest.
↖用 share... with 升格
When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city. ② So they set off from home, taking some food with them.
↖用 set off 和现在分词作状语升格
③ Once they arrived at the city, they noticed the people in the city weren't really happy.
↖用 once 和 arrive at 升格
答案：1. Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
2. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest.
3. They noticed the people in the city were not really happy.
2. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest.
3. They noticed the people in the city were not really happy.
解析：
【分析】
这是英语写作板块的基础遣词造句题型，解题思路非常清晰：首先明确每道小题指定的核心语法/短语要求，同时结合本单元故事写作统一使用的一般过去时时态，逐句匹配中文含义和指定结构，不需要额外拓展内容，保证句子语法正确、语义和中文提示完全对应即可。第一题指定用there be句型，对应中文“从前”的固定表达Once upon a time，主语是复数的两只小猪，be动词用过去式were；第二题指定用grow up短语，grow要变为过去式grew，搭配decide to do的结构翻译“决定让他们走出森林”；第三题指定用notice动词，notice变为过去式noticed，后面接宾语从句引出注意到的内容即可。
【解析】
1. 第一题要求使用there be结构：“从前”的固定英文表达为Once upon a time，主语two little pigs为复数，故事类叙事用一般过去时，be动词选用were，组合得到正确句子。
2. 第二题要求使用grow up短语：叙事时态为一般过去时，grow变为过去式grew，“决定做某事”用固定搭配decide to do，decide变为过去式decided，对应内容翻译后组合得到正确句子。
3. 第三题要求使用notice动词：叙事时态为一般过去时，notice变为过去式noticed，后接省略引导词that的宾语从句，表述“城里的人不是真正的快乐”的含义，组合得到正确句子。
【答案】
1. Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
2. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest.
3. They noticed the people in the city were not really happy.
【知识点】
there be句型；一般过去时；宾语从句
【点评】
这三道造句题是完整寓言故事写作的前置基础训练，紧扣单元奇幻文学写作的时态、核心句型要求，针对性帮学生巩固写作必备的基础表达，规避写作中常见的时态误用、句型搭配错误问题，为后续完成完整的语篇写作搭建清晰的内容框架。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是英语写作板块的基础遣词造句题型，解题思路非常清晰：首先明确每道小题指定的核心语法/短语要求，同时结合本单元故事写作统一使用的一般过去时时态，逐句匹配中文含义和指定结构，不需要额外拓展内容，保证句子语法正确、语义和中文提示完全对应即可。第一题指定用there be句型，对应中文“从前”的固定表达Once upon a time，主语是复数的两只小猪，be动词用过去式were；第二题指定用grow up短语，grow要变为过去式grew，搭配decide to do的结构翻译“决定让他们走出森林”；第三题指定用notice动词，notice变为过去式noticed，后面接宾语从句引出注意到的内容即可。
【解析】
1. 第一题要求使用there be结构：“从前”的固定英文表达为Once upon a time，主语two little pigs为复数，故事类叙事用一般过去时，be动词选用were，组合得到正确句子。
2. 第二题要求使用grow up短语：叙事时态为一般过去时，grow变为过去式grew，“决定做某事”用固定搭配decide to do，decide变为过去式decided，对应内容翻译后组合得到正确句子。
3. 第三题要求使用notice动词：叙事时态为一般过去时，notice变为过去式noticed，后接省略引导词that的宾语从句，表述“城里的人不是真正的快乐”的含义，组合得到正确句子。
【答案】
1. Once upon a time, there were two little pigs.
2. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest.
3. They noticed the people in the city were not really happy.
【知识点】
there be句型；一般过去时；宾语从句
【点评】
这三道造句题是完整寓言故事写作的前置基础训练，紧扣单元奇幻文学写作的时态、核心句型要求，针对性帮学生巩固写作必备的基础表达，规避写作中常见的时态误用、句型搭配错误问题，为后续完成完整的语篇写作搭建清晰的内容框架。
【难度系数】
0.7