实战演练
根据要点提示，以“My neighbourhood”为主题写一篇短文介绍你的社区，词数70左右，可适当发挥。
【要点】1. What is your neighbourhood like?
2. What are people in your neighbourhood like?
3. What do people often do to help each other?
4. Do you often do any voluntary work for your neighbours?
5. Do you like your neighbourhood? Why or why not?
My neighbourhood
根据要点提示，以“My neighbourhood”为主题写一篇短文介绍你的社区，词数70左右，可适当发挥。
【要点】1. What is your neighbourhood like?
2. What are people in your neighbourhood like?
3. What do people often do to help each other?
4. Do you often do any voluntary work for your neighbours?
5. Do you like your neighbourhood? Why or why not?
My neighbourhood
I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful area with some tall buildings.
My neighbours are very kind and friendly.
They are always ready to help others.
They help others by taking care of their pets and offering umbrellas on rainy days.
There is also a community centre in my neighbourhood.
Many people are volunteers there.
And I'm one of them.
I always help clean the parks at the weekend.
I like my neighbourhood because I feel happy to live in my neighbourhood.
答案：实战演练
One possible version
My neighbourhood
I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful area with some tall buildings.
My neighbours are very kind and friendly. They are always ready to help others. They help others by taking care of their pets and offering umbrellas on rainy days. There is also a community centre in my neighbourhood. Many people are volunteers there. And I'm one of them. I always help clean the parks at the weekend.
I like my neighbourhood because I feel happy to live in my neighbourhood.
One possible version
My neighbourhood
I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful area with some tall buildings.
My neighbours are very kind and friendly. They are always ready to help others. They help others by taking care of their pets and offering umbrellas on rainy days. There is also a community centre in my neighbourhood. Many people are volunteers there. And I'm one of them. I always help clean the parks at the weekend.
I like my neighbourhood because I feel happy to live in my neighbourhood.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确题干给出的全部5个写作要点，不能出现要点遗漏。第一步先开篇回应第一个问题，直接点明自己居住的社区名称，简单描述社区的整体样貌；第二步依次回应第二、第三个问题，先点明邻居的性格特点，再列举邻里之间互帮互助的生活化具体事例，让内容更真实；第三步回应第四个问题，说明自己参与的社区志愿工作的具体内容；最后回应第五个问题，明确表达自己对社区的态度并说明原因，整体控制词数在70左右，保证语句通顺无语法错误即可。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成：
1. 开篇点题：直接说明自己居住在花园社区，描述社区是带有很多高楼的美丽区域，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 主体展开：先介绍邻居都十分友善热心，对应第二个要点；接着列举大家日常互相帮忙的行为，比如帮忙照看宠物、雨天出借雨伞，对应第三个要点；之后说明社区有社区中心，很多人是志愿者，自己也是其中一员，周末经常帮忙打扫公园，对应第四个要点。
3. 结尾收束：直接表明自己很喜欢这个社区，住在里面很开心，对应第五个要点。
全程注意使用简单常用的句式，避免语法错误，所有要点全部覆盖，篇幅符合要求。
【答案】
My neighbourhood
I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful area with some tall buildings.
My neighbours are very kind and friendly. They are always ready to help others. They help others by taking care of their pets and offering umbrellas on rainy days. There is also a community centre in my neighbourhood. Many people are volunteers there. And I'm one of them. I always help clean the parks at the weekend.
I like my neighbourhood because I feel happy to live in my neighbourhood.
【知识点】
话题类英语写作；要点作文谋篇布局；情景表达运用
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部5个写作要点，内容贴合日常社区生活，用词平实准确，没有语法错误，逻辑连贯自然，篇幅符合70词左右的要求，是一篇符合初中低年级要求的合格话题作文，学生可以借此积累社区类话题的常用表达，掌握要点类作文不丢点的写作技巧。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先要明确题干给出的全部5个写作要点，不能出现要点遗漏。第一步先开篇回应第一个问题，直接点明自己居住的社区名称，简单描述社区的整体样貌；第二步依次回应第二、第三个问题，先点明邻居的性格特点，再列举邻里之间互帮互助的生活化具体事例，让内容更真实；第三步回应第四个问题，说明自己参与的社区志愿工作的具体内容；最后回应第五个问题，明确表达自己对社区的态度并说明原因，整体控制词数在70左右，保证语句通顺无语法错误即可。
【解析】
写作按照三步完成：
1. 开篇点题：直接说明自己居住在花园社区，描述社区是带有很多高楼的美丽区域，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 主体展开：先介绍邻居都十分友善热心，对应第二个要点；接着列举大家日常互相帮忙的行为，比如帮忙照看宠物、雨天出借雨伞，对应第三个要点；之后说明社区有社区中心，很多人是志愿者，自己也是其中一员，周末经常帮忙打扫公园，对应第四个要点。
3. 结尾收束：直接表明自己很喜欢这个社区，住在里面很开心，对应第五个要点。
全程注意使用简单常用的句式，避免语法错误，所有要点全部覆盖，篇幅符合要求。
【答案】
My neighbourhood
I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is a beautiful area with some tall buildings.
My neighbours are very kind and friendly. They are always ready to help others. They help others by taking care of their pets and offering umbrellas on rainy days. There is also a community centre in my neighbourhood. Many people are volunteers there. And I'm one of them. I always help clean the parks at the weekend.
I like my neighbourhood because I feel happy to live in my neighbourhood.
【知识点】
话题类英语写作；要点作文谋篇布局；情景表达运用
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部5个写作要点，内容贴合日常社区生活，用词平实准确，没有语法错误，逻辑连贯自然，篇幅符合70词左右的要求，是一篇符合初中低年级要求的合格话题作文，学生可以借此积累社区类话题的常用表达，掌握要点类作文不丢点的写作技巧。
【难度系数】
0.7