实战演练
端午节是中国重要的传统节日之一。为加深学生们对中华文化的理解，激发学生们的爱国主义情怀，某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举办以“The Duanwu Festival—a celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
【提示】1. What is the Duanwu Festival?
2. Why is the Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism?
3. As teenagers, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism?
【要求】1. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
2. 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Duanwu Festival—a celebration of patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival.
端午节是中国重要的传统节日之一。为加深学生们对中华文化的理解，激发学生们的爱国主义情怀，某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举办以“The Duanwu Festival—a celebration of patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
【提示】1. What is the Duanwu Festival?
2. Why is the Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism?
3. As teenagers, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism?
【要求】1. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
2. 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Duanwu Festival—a celebration of patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival.
It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat race are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
答案：实战演练
One possible version
The Duanwu Festival—a celebration of patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat race are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
One possible version
The Duanwu Festival—a celebration of patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat race are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇主题明确的英语征文写作题，解题时我们可以顺着题干给出的三个提示问题依次搭建内容框架：首先先回答第一个问题，在给定开头的基础上补充端午节的基本属性、农历时间、特色传统习俗，完成节日基础介绍；接着回答第二个问题，关联端午节纪念爱国诗人屈原的核心起源，点明屈原的爱国事迹和节日承载的精神内核，解释节日被视作爱国主义庆祝活动的原因；最后回答第三个问题，结合青少年的日常学习生活场景，列举我们践行爱国精神的可行做法，最后调整语句衔接的流畅度，把总词数控制在100词左右，符合投稿要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，补充端午节的基础信息：说明它是中国最重要的传统节日之一，时间为农历五月初五，国人会通过吃粽子、举办龙舟赛的方式纪念古代伟大爱国诗人屈原，完成第一个提示问题的作答。
2. 接着阐释节日的精神内核：点明屈原为家国献身的事迹、龙舟赛承载的集体奋进精神都和爱国主义高度绑定，清晰回应第二个提示问题，说明端午节作为爱国主题庆祝活动的缘由。
3. 最后落脚到青少年的身份：说明我们可以通过努力学习、提升自我，从小事做起为祖国发展贡献力量，完成第三个提示问题的作答。
4. 通读全文调整语句连贯性，删去冗余表述，将总词数控制在要求范围内，符合征文投稿正式得体的语气。
【答案】
The Duanwu Festival—a celebration of patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat race are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作；传统节日英文表达；主题征文谋篇
【点评】
本题将英语写作考察和中华优秀传统文化、爱国主义教育结合，命题导向很有意义，写作时只要严格对应题干给出的三个提示要点，按照“介绍节日-阐释精神-落地做法”的逻辑顺次展开，就能写出符合要求的短文，注意不要遗漏要点，适当用简单的衔接词让行文更流畅即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇主题明确的英语征文写作题，解题时我们可以顺着题干给出的三个提示问题依次搭建内容框架：首先先回答第一个问题，在给定开头的基础上补充端午节的基本属性、农历时间、特色传统习俗，完成节日基础介绍；接着回答第二个问题，关联端午节纪念爱国诗人屈原的核心起源，点明屈原的爱国事迹和节日承载的精神内核，解释节日被视作爱国主义庆祝活动的原因；最后回答第三个问题，结合青少年的日常学习生活场景，列举我们践行爱国精神的可行做法，最后调整语句衔接的流畅度，把总词数控制在100词左右，符合投稿要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，补充端午节的基础信息：说明它是中国最重要的传统节日之一，时间为农历五月初五，国人会通过吃粽子、举办龙舟赛的方式纪念古代伟大爱国诗人屈原，完成第一个提示问题的作答。
2. 接着阐释节日的精神内核：点明屈原为家国献身的事迹、龙舟赛承载的集体奋进精神都和爱国主义高度绑定，清晰回应第二个提示问题，说明端午节作为爱国主题庆祝活动的缘由。
3. 最后落脚到青少年的身份：说明我们可以通过努力学习、提升自我，从小事做起为祖国发展贡献力量，完成第三个提示问题的作答。
4. 通读全文调整语句连贯性，删去冗余表述，将总词数控制在要求范围内，符合征文投稿正式得体的语气。
【答案】
The Duanwu Festival—a celebration of patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat race are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作；传统节日英文表达；主题征文谋篇
【点评】
本题将英语写作考察和中华优秀传统文化、爱国主义教育结合，命题导向很有意义，写作时只要严格对应题干给出的三个提示要点，按照“介绍节日-阐释精神-落地做法”的逻辑顺次展开，就能写出符合要求的短文，注意不要遗漏要点，适当用简单的衔接词让行文更流畅即可。
【难度系数】
0.6