Ⅶ. 书面表达(满分19分)
热心公益，争当志愿者，积极为文明实践、阳光助残、环境保护、为老弱服务等志愿项目作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你按以下要点，用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备作为志愿者参加的一次服务活动的计划。
要点：1. What type of volunteer do you want to be?
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer like that?
3. How will you work as a volunteer?
要求：1. 短文必须包含所有要求并适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility，I plan to
热心公益，争当志愿者，积极为文明实践、阳光助残、环境保护、为老弱服务等志愿项目作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你按以下要点，用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备作为志愿者参加的一次服务活动的计划。
要点：1. What type of volunteer do you want to be?
2. Why do you want to be a volunteer like that?
3. How will you work as a volunteer?
要求：1. 短文必须包含所有要求并适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility，I plan to
答案：One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. I'm going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People's Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Second, I will sing for the old people to cheer them up. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or tidying up clothes for the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. Isn't it meaningful?
思路梳理 总体分析：①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为一般将来时；③提示：写作要点已给出，应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
写作步骤：第一步，学生需要在文章中点明主题，介绍做什么志愿者（志愿者活动），为何做；第二步，介绍怎么做；第三步，再次点明活动的益处，暗含这么做的原因。
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. I'm going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People's Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Second, I will sing for the old people to cheer them up. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or tidying up clothes for the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. Isn't it meaningful?
思路梳理 总体分析：①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为一般将来时；③提示：写作要点已给出，应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
写作步骤：第一步，学生需要在文章中点明主题，介绍做什么志愿者（志愿者活动），为何做；第二步，介绍怎么做；第三步，再次点明活动的益处，暗含这么做的原因。
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇关于暑假志愿活动计划的英语书面表达，需覆盖“志愿活动类型、参与原因、具体做法”三个核心要点。第一步，选择贴近生活、易展开的主题，比如敬老院志愿者，这类主题素材丰富且符合初中生的能力范围；第二步，思考参与原因，可从老人的需求（孤独缺少陪伴）和自身成长（培养责任感、学会关爱他人）两方面切入；第三步，规划具体做法，用逻辑连接词分点列举，让内容条理清晰；最后结尾总结活动意义，呼应开头培养责任感的目的。写作时要注意使用一般将来时，契合“计划”的语境，同时适当发挥让内容更充实。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：承接给定开头，明确暑假计划参与敬老院志愿活动，点明活动目的是培养责任感，直接回应“想成为哪类志愿者”的要点。
2. 详述志愿行动：用First、Second、Then、Finally等逻辑连接词，分点说明具体服务内容，包括陪老人聊天散步、唱歌助兴、表演节目、帮忙打扫整理等，清晰回应“如何开展志愿工作”的要点。
3. 总结活动意义：结尾点明活动既能给老人带来快乐，也能让自身有所收获，侧面呼应“参与志愿活动的原因”，增强文章的完整性和感染力。
4. 时态运用：全程使用一般将来时（be going to、will等），准确契合“计划”的语境，语法规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. I'm going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People's Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Second, I will sing for the old people to cheer them up. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or tidying up clothes for the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. Isn't it meaningful?
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时用法
2. 记叙文写作技巧
3. 志愿主题英语表达
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，且有合理发挥。逻辑连接词的使用让内容条理分明，语言流畅自然，时态运用准确。结尾既总结了活动对老人的价值，也点明了自身的成长，呼应开头的写作目的，是一篇符合初中生要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要明确这是一篇关于暑假志愿活动计划的英语书面表达，需覆盖“志愿活动类型、参与原因、具体做法”三个核心要点。第一步，选择贴近生活、易展开的主题，比如敬老院志愿者，这类主题素材丰富且符合初中生的能力范围；第二步，思考参与原因，可从老人的需求（孤独缺少陪伴）和自身成长（培养责任感、学会关爱他人）两方面切入；第三步，规划具体做法，用逻辑连接词分点列举，让内容条理清晰；最后结尾总结活动意义，呼应开头培养责任感的目的。写作时要注意使用一般将来时，契合“计划”的语境，同时适当发挥让内容更充实。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：承接给定开头，明确暑假计划参与敬老院志愿活动，点明活动目的是培养责任感，直接回应“想成为哪类志愿者”的要点。
2. 详述志愿行动：用First、Second、Then、Finally等逻辑连接词，分点说明具体服务内容，包括陪老人聊天散步、唱歌助兴、表演节目、帮忙打扫整理等，清晰回应“如何开展志愿工作”的要点。
3. 总结活动意义：结尾点明活动既能给老人带来快乐，也能让自身有所收获，侧面呼应“参与志愿活动的原因”，增强文章的完整性和感染力。
4. 时态运用：全程使用一般将来时（be going to、will等），准确契合“计划”的语境，语法规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. I'm going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People's Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Second, I will sing for the old people to cheer them up. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or tidying up clothes for the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. Isn't it meaningful?
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时用法
2. 记叙文写作技巧
3. 志愿主题英语表达
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，且有合理发挥。逻辑连接词的使用让内容条理分明，语言流畅自然，时态运用准确。结尾既总结了活动对老人的价值，也点明了自身的成长，呼应开头的写作目的，是一篇符合初中生要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6