Ⅶ. 书面表达(满分19分)
时光荏苒，不知不觉中八年级的学习生活接近尾声。回首过去，一年来自己学习和生活上的成长与变化良多。你校八年级同学将以“My growth and changes”为题举行演讲比赛，请根据征稿内容写一篇短文，具体内容如下：
My growth and changes
Study
in the past ...；now ...
Going green
protect the environment 1. ...；2. ...
Good manners
queue for my turn；give my seat to ...
Kindness to
donate ... to the children in poor areas
Your hope
...
要求：1. 所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My growth and changes
Hello，everyone! I'm Daniel from Class 1，Grade 8. Looking back on last year，I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
Thanks for your listening!
时光荏苒，不知不觉中八年级的学习生活接近尾声。回首过去，一年来自己学习和生活上的成长与变化良多。你校八年级同学将以“My growth and changes”为题举行演讲比赛，请根据征稿内容写一篇短文，具体内容如下：
My growth and changes
Study
in the past ...；now ...
Going green
protect the environment 1. ...；2. ...
Good manners
queue for my turn；give my seat to ...
Kindness to
donate ... to the children in poor areas
Your hope
...
要求：1. 所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My growth and changes
Hello，everyone! I'm Daniel from Class 1，Grade 8. Looking back on last year，I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
Thanks for your listening!
答案：Ⅶ. One possible version:
My growth and changes
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Looking back on last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
In study, I was lazy and didn't like doing homework in the past. Now, I study hard and finish my homework carefully every day. For going green, I try to protect the environment. I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. And I use my own cloth bags when I go shopping. I also have good manners. I queue for my turn patiently in the dining hall. And I give my seat to old people on the bus. To be kind, I donate books and clothes to the children in poor areas. For Grade 9, there are chances and challenges. I hope I can study better and help more people. I want to be a better person.
Thanks for your listening!
思路梳理 总体分析①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态:以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；③提示:写作要点包含过去和现在的学习变化，如何践行绿色生活，良好的行为举止，对他人的善意，以及自己对未来的展望，注意要点齐全且详略得当。
写作步骤:第一步，开篇点题；第二步，用具体事例阐述成长变化与未来展望；第三步，书写结语。
My growth and changes
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Looking back on last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
In study, I was lazy and didn't like doing homework in the past. Now, I study hard and finish my homework carefully every day. For going green, I try to protect the environment. I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. And I use my own cloth bags when I go shopping. I also have good manners. I queue for my turn patiently in the dining hall. And I give my seat to old people on the bus. To be kind, I donate books and clothes to the children in poor areas. For Grade 9, there are chances and challenges. I hope I can study better and help more people. I want to be a better person.
Thanks for your listening!
思路梳理 总体分析①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态:以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；③提示:写作要点包含过去和现在的学习变化，如何践行绿色生活，良好的行为举止，对他人的善意，以及自己对未来的展望，注意要点齐全且详略得当。
写作步骤:第一步，开篇点题；第二步，用具体事例阐述成长变化与未来展望；第三步，书写结语。
解析：
【分析】
首先，明确这是一篇主题为“My growth and changes”的演讲稿写作，需覆盖题目给出的所有要点：学习的今昔对比、两种环保行为、良好礼仪的具体表现、对贫困地区孩子的善意行为以及未来的希望。
思考步骤：
1. 确定时态：描述过去的学习状态用一般过去时，现在的日常行为、变化用一般现在时，未来的期许用一般将来时。
2. 逐个展开要点：
学习部分：先写过去的不足，比如懒惰、不爱完成作业，再对应写现在的进步，比如努力学习、认真完成作业。
环保部分：列举两个具体可操作的环保行为，比如随手关灯、使用布袋购物。
礼仪部分：结合提示，补充具体场景，比如餐厅排队、公交给老人让座。
善意部分：明确捐赠的物品，比如书籍、衣物，指向贫困地区孩子。
希望部分：结合九年级的阶段特点，提出学习进步、帮助更多人的具体目标。
3. 组织语言，保证逻辑连贯，符合演讲稿的口语化风格，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：借助题目给出的开头，直接引出“成长与变化”的核心主题。
2. 分板块阐述内容：
学习板块：用“In study, I was... Now, I...”的结构完成今昔对比，清晰体现学习上的转变。
环保板块：用“For going green, I try to... I always... And I...”的句式，列举两个具体环保行为，满足题目要求。
礼仪板块：用“I also have good manners. I... And I...”的结构，呈现排队、让座的具体行为，展现良好素养。
善意板块：用“To be kind, I donate... to...”的句式，明确捐赠对象和物品，体现善意。
希望板块：结合九年级的机遇与挑战，用“I hope I can... I want to...”表达对未来的期许。
3. 收尾：使用题目给出的结语，完成演讲稿的完整结构。
【答案】
My growth and changes
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Looking back on last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
In study, I was lazy and didn't like doing homework in the past. Now, I study hard and finish my homework carefully every day. For going green, I try to protect the environment. I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. And I use my own cloth bags when I go shopping. I also have good manners. I queue for my turn patiently in the dining hall. And I give my seat to old people on the bus. To be kind, I donate books and clothes to the children in poor areas. For Grade 9, there are chances and challenges. I hope I can study better and help more people. I want to be a better person.
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】
演讲稿写作、时态综合运用、话题类作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，逻辑清晰、层次分明。通过今昔对比、具体事例展现成长变化，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的口语化特点，能很好地传达自身的成长与期许，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，明确这是一篇主题为“My growth and changes”的演讲稿写作，需覆盖题目给出的所有要点：学习的今昔对比、两种环保行为、良好礼仪的具体表现、对贫困地区孩子的善意行为以及未来的希望。
思考步骤：
1. 确定时态：描述过去的学习状态用一般过去时，现在的日常行为、变化用一般现在时，未来的期许用一般将来时。
2. 逐个展开要点：
学习部分：先写过去的不足，比如懒惰、不爱完成作业，再对应写现在的进步，比如努力学习、认真完成作业。
环保部分：列举两个具体可操作的环保行为，比如随手关灯、使用布袋购物。
礼仪部分：结合提示，补充具体场景，比如餐厅排队、公交给老人让座。
善意部分：明确捐赠的物品，比如书籍、衣物，指向贫困地区孩子。
希望部分：结合九年级的阶段特点，提出学习进步、帮助更多人的具体目标。
3. 组织语言，保证逻辑连贯，符合演讲稿的口语化风格，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：借助题目给出的开头，直接引出“成长与变化”的核心主题。
2. 分板块阐述内容：
学习板块：用“In study, I was... Now, I...”的结构完成今昔对比，清晰体现学习上的转变。
环保板块：用“For going green, I try to... I always... And I...”的句式，列举两个具体环保行为，满足题目要求。
礼仪板块：用“I also have good manners. I... And I...”的结构，呈现排队、让座的具体行为，展现良好素养。
善意板块：用“To be kind, I donate... to...”的句式，明确捐赠对象和物品，体现善意。
希望板块：结合九年级的机遇与挑战，用“I hope I can... I want to...”表达对未来的期许。
3. 收尾：使用题目给出的结语，完成演讲稿的完整结构。
【答案】
My growth and changes
Hello, everyone! I'm Daniel from Class 1, Grade 8. Looking back on last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
In study, I was lazy and didn't like doing homework in the past. Now, I study hard and finish my homework carefully every day. For going green, I try to protect the environment. I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. And I use my own cloth bags when I go shopping. I also have good manners. I queue for my turn patiently in the dining hall. And I give my seat to old people on the bus. To be kind, I donate books and clothes to the children in poor areas. For Grade 9, there are chances and challenges. I hope I can study better and help more people. I want to be a better person.
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】
演讲稿写作、时态综合运用、话题类作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，逻辑清晰、层次分明。通过今昔对比、具体事例展现成长变化，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的口语化特点，能很好地传达自身的成长与期许，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6