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小朋友们,你们知道自己的节日是什么吗? 它在什么时候? 你是不是最喜欢这个节日呢?马上要到"六一"了,让我们结合现实中的"儿童节",以"My favourite festival"为题来写一写吧。
要求:1. 语句通顺,书写规范。2. 不少于40个单词,所给出部分不计入总数。
信息解读

要点点拨
·参考词汇: my favourite festival、buy presents、take ... to ...。
·参考句型: 1. Children's Day is my favourite festival.
2. It's on ...
3. I usually ...
实战整篇
My favourite festival
小朋友们,你们知道自己的节日是什么吗? 它在什么时候? 你是不是最喜欢这个节日呢?马上要到"六一"了,让我们结合现实中的"儿童节",以"My favourite festival"为题来写一写吧。
要求:1. 语句通顺,书写规范。2. 不少于40个单词,所给出部分不计入总数。
信息解读
要点点拨
·参考词汇: my favourite festival、buy presents、take ... to ...。
·参考句型: 1. Children's Day is my favourite festival.
2. It's on ...
3. I usually ...
实战整篇
My favourite festival
Children's Day
is my favourite festival. It's on the first of June.
On that day, I usually wear a beautiful dress. My mother buys me a nice present.
My father takes me to the zoo. I like pandas very much. They're lovely.
My parents also take me to the restaurant for lunch. So I like Children's Day best.
答案:范文:
My favourite festival
Children's Day is my favourite festival. It's
on the first of June. On that day, I usually wear a
beautiful dress. My mother buys me a nice
present. My father takes me to the zoo. I like
pandas very much. They're lovely. My parents
also take me to the restaurant for lunch. So I like
Children's Day best.
My favourite festival
Children's Day is my favourite festival. It's
on the first of June. On that day, I usually wear a
beautiful dress. My mother buys me a nice
present. My father takes me to the zoo. I like
pandas very much. They're lovely. My parents
also take me to the restaurant for lunch. So I like
Children's Day best.
解析:
【分析】
这道题是小学阶段的命题英语小写作,我们可以顺着思维导图给出的4个问题的逻辑来搭建文章:第一步先明确要写的节日是儿童节,填出开头的空缺;第二步说明儿童节的具体日期;第三步详细描述儿童节当天你和家人会做的各类活动,用上题目给出的buy presents、take...to...等参考词汇;最后说明你喜欢儿童节的原因,保证语句连贯,单词拼写正确,字数达到40词以上就可以完成写作,顺着提示点写就非常顺畅。
【解析】
我们按照题目给出的参考句型和提示逐步完成写作:
1. 第一空开篇点题,直接填入核心主题Children's Day,对应第一个问题"What is this festival?"。
2. 接下来用参考句型"It's on..."回答第二个问题"When is this festival?",写出儿童节的标准日期:It's on the first of June.
3. 之后回答第三个问题"What do you do on this day?",依次描述当天的活动,自然融入题目给出的参考词汇:On that day, I usually wear a beautiful dress. My mother buys me a nice present. My father takes me to the zoo. I like pandas very much. They're lovely. My parents also take me to the restaurant for lunch.
4. 最后回答第四个问题"Why do you like this festival?",收尾点出自己对儿童节的喜爱,完成全文。
【答案】
My favourite festival
Children's Day is my favourite festival. It's
on the first of June. On that day, I usually wear a
beautiful dress. My mother buys me a nice
present. My father takes me to the zoo. I like
pandas very much. They're lovely. My parents
also take me to the restaurant for lunch. So I like
Children's Day best.
【知识点】
英语节日写作,日期表达,一般现在时
【点评】
本题借助思维导图给出了清晰的写作逻辑指引,把原本开放的写作拆解成四个明确的问题维度,大幅降低了小学生的写作难度,同时考察了学生对基础日期表达、一般现在时描述日常活动的掌握,内容贴近学生的真实生活,不容易出现跑题的情况。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是小学阶段的命题英语小写作,我们可以顺着思维导图给出的4个问题的逻辑来搭建文章:第一步先明确要写的节日是儿童节,填出开头的空缺;第二步说明儿童节的具体日期;第三步详细描述儿童节当天你和家人会做的各类活动,用上题目给出的buy presents、take...to...等参考词汇;最后说明你喜欢儿童节的原因,保证语句连贯,单词拼写正确,字数达到40词以上就可以完成写作,顺着提示点写就非常顺畅。
【解析】
我们按照题目给出的参考句型和提示逐步完成写作:
1. 第一空开篇点题,直接填入核心主题Children's Day,对应第一个问题"What is this festival?"。
2. 接下来用参考句型"It's on..."回答第二个问题"When is this festival?",写出儿童节的标准日期:It's on the first of June.
3. 之后回答第三个问题"What do you do on this day?",依次描述当天的活动,自然融入题目给出的参考词汇:On that day, I usually wear a beautiful dress. My mother buys me a nice present. My father takes me to the zoo. I like pandas very much. They're lovely. My parents also take me to the restaurant for lunch.
4. 最后回答第四个问题"Why do you like this festival?",收尾点出自己对儿童节的喜爱,完成全文。
【答案】
My favourite festival
Children's Day is my favourite festival. It's
on the first of June. On that day, I usually wear a
beautiful dress. My mother buys me a nice
present. My father takes me to the zoo. I like
pandas very much. They're lovely. My parents
also take me to the restaurant for lunch. So I like
Children's Day best.
【知识点】
英语节日写作,日期表达,一般现在时
【点评】
本题借助思维导图给出了清晰的写作逻辑指引,把原本开放的写作拆解成四个明确的问题维度,大幅降低了小学生的写作难度,同时考察了学生对基础日期表达、一般现在时描述日常活动的掌握,内容贴近学生的真实生活,不容易出现跑题的情况。
【难度系数】
0.7