十三、请根据表格中的信息提示,介绍 Mike 的一家,不少于40 个单词。(6分)

Mike's family
Mike's family
This is my friend, Mike. He is a student. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He goes to school by bike.
His father Mr Brown is a doctor. He likes reading books. He goes to work by car.
Mike's mother Mrs Brown is a teacher. Her hobby is dancing. She goes to work by bus.
答案:Mike's family
This is my friend, Mike. He is a student. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He goes to school by bike. His father Mr Brown is a doctor. He likes reading books. He goes to work by car. Mike's mother Mrs Brown is a teacher. Her hobby is dancing. She goes to work by bus.
This is my friend, Mike. He is a student. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He goes to school by bike. His father Mr Brown is a doctor. He likes reading books. He goes to work by car. Mike's mother Mrs Brown is a teacher. Her hobby is dancing. She goes to work by bus.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作目标:结合表格全部信息完整介绍Mike的一家三口,首先先把表格里三个人物的对应信息逐一提取:第一部分提取Mike的身份、爱好、上学出行方式,第二部分提取Mr Brown也就是Mike爸爸的身份、爱好、上班出行方式,第三部分提取Mrs Brown也就是Mike妈妈的身份、爱好、上班出行方式。之后按照先介绍Mike本人,再介绍父亲、最后介绍母亲的逻辑顺序,把提取的信息用通顺的简单句串联起来,保证所有要点都覆盖,字数满足不少于40词的要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:先点明介绍的核心人物Mike,开启对全家的介绍。
2. 介绍Mike的相关信息:对应表格内容依次说明他的学生身份,爱好是打篮球和游泳,上学的交通方式是骑自行车,注意表达爱好使用like doing的正确结构。
3. 介绍Mike的父亲Mr Brown:说明他的医生职业,爱好是读书,日常开车上班。
4. 介绍Mike的母亲Mrs Brown:说明她的教师职业,爱好是跳舞,日常乘公交上班。
5. 把所有句子连贯组合,检查语法错误,确认所有表格信息都没有遗漏,字数达标。
【答案】
Mike's family
This is my friend, Mike. He is a student. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He goes to school by bike. His father Mr Brown is a doctor. He likes reading books. He goes to work by car. Mike's mother Mrs Brown is a teacher. Her hobby is dancing. She goes to work by bus.
【知识点】
人物介绍写作,一般现在时,交通方式表达
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类英语写作,不需要额外拓展内容,只需要准确把表格给出的所有信息用正确的简单句转述出来,注意主谓一致、like后接动名词的搭配、by加交通工具的固定用法,就可以轻松完成作答,主要考察学生基础信息整合和基础句型的运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
拿到这道题首先要明确写作目标:结合表格全部信息完整介绍Mike的一家三口,首先先把表格里三个人物的对应信息逐一提取:第一部分提取Mike的身份、爱好、上学出行方式,第二部分提取Mr Brown也就是Mike爸爸的身份、爱好、上班出行方式,第三部分提取Mrs Brown也就是Mike妈妈的身份、爱好、上班出行方式。之后按照先介绍Mike本人,再介绍父亲、最后介绍母亲的逻辑顺序,把提取的信息用通顺的简单句串联起来,保证所有要点都覆盖,字数满足不少于40词的要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:先点明介绍的核心人物Mike,开启对全家的介绍。
2. 介绍Mike的相关信息:对应表格内容依次说明他的学生身份,爱好是打篮球和游泳,上学的交通方式是骑自行车,注意表达爱好使用like doing的正确结构。
3. 介绍Mike的父亲Mr Brown:说明他的医生职业,爱好是读书,日常开车上班。
4. 介绍Mike的母亲Mrs Brown:说明她的教师职业,爱好是跳舞,日常乘公交上班。
5. 把所有句子连贯组合,检查语法错误,确认所有表格信息都没有遗漏,字数达标。
【答案】
Mike's family
This is my friend, Mike. He is a student. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He goes to school by bike. His father Mr Brown is a doctor. He likes reading books. He goes to work by car. Mike's mother Mrs Brown is a teacher. Her hobby is dancing. She goes to work by bus.
【知识点】
人物介绍写作,一般现在时,交通方式表达
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类英语写作,不需要额外拓展内容,只需要准确把表格给出的所有信息用正确的简单句转述出来,注意主谓一致、like后接动名词的搭配、by加交通工具的固定用法,就可以轻松完成作答,主要考察学生基础信息整合和基础句型的运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.8