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看图,用英语编写一个小故事。不少于50词。

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要点点拨
· 参考词汇:in the forest、catch the mouse、get out、become friends。
· 参考句型:1. Long long ago, there was/were ... 2. One day, ...
· 时态:一般过去时
实战整篇
Long long ago, there was a lion in the forest.
All the animals were afraid of him. One day, a
mouse woke him up. He was angry and caught
the mouse. The mouse said quietly to him, "I can
help you some day." The lion laughed at the
weak mouse. Then he let the mouse go.

The next
day, two men caught the lion with a large net.

The lion couldn't get out from the net. The mouse
bit the net and helped the lion.

From then on,
they became good friends.

答案:范文:
Long long ago, there was a lion in the forest.
All the animals were afraid of him. One day, a
mouse woke him up. He was angry and caught
the mouse. The mouse said quietly to him, "I can
help you some day." The lion laughed at the
weak mouse. Then he let the mouse go. The next
day, two men caught the lion with a large net.
The lion couldn't get out from the net. The mouse
bit the net and helped the lion. From then on,
they became good friends.
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题,第一步先明确题目给出的所有限定要求:要使用指定的参考词汇、参考句型,全程用一般过去时,故事字数不少于50词。接下来我们可以顺着提示的元素梳理故事逻辑:先用指定开头句型交代背景,引出住在森林里的狮子;再用One day引出二者的初次相遇,安排狮子抓老鼠的情节;之后设计狮子被困无法脱身的情节,对应get out的提示词;最后写老鼠帮忙救了狮子,二者成为朋友,对应become friends的提示,整个故事逻辑通顺,所有给定元素都自然融入,就能完成符合要求的小故事。
【解析】
1. 开篇使用题目给出的参考句型Long long ago, there was/were...交代故事背景:点明森林里有一头狮子,铺垫其他动物都害怕它的基础设定;
2. 接着使用参考句型One day...推进情节:写老鼠不小心吵醒狮子,狮子发怒抓住老鼠,老鼠承诺日后会帮忙,狮子不以为然放走了老鼠;
3. 后续推进情节:狮子不慎被猎人的大网困住,完全没法从网里脱身,此时老鼠赶来,用牙齿咬开网救了狮子;
4. 最后收尾,点明二者从此成为了好朋友,全程统一使用一般过去时,所有参考词汇都自然嵌入故事中,情节连贯,字数远超50词的要求。
【答案】
Long long ago, there was a lion in the forest.
All the animals were afraid of him. One day, a
mouse woke him up. He was angry and caught
the mouse. The mouse said quietly to him, "I can
help you some day." The lion laughed at the
weak mouse. Then he let the mouse go. The next
day, two men caught the lion with a large net.
The lion couldn't get out from the net. The mouse
bit the net and helped the lion. From then on,
they became good friends.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用;英语故事写作;提示词活用
【点评】
本题是低阶英语叙事写作题,题目给出了充足的参考词汇、参考句型和时态提示,学生只需要顺着经典的狮鼠互助的故事逻辑串联内容,注意保持时态一致,覆盖所有提示要素即可完成合格的作文,不容易出现跑题问题。
【难度系数】
0.7
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