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我弟弟的生日快到了,他想邀请一些朋友来参加他的聚会。请以“Plans for the party”为题，
为聚会的准备写一篇短文。要求:不少于50词。
信息解读
要点点拨
·参考词汇:party、be coming、be going to、buy。
·参考句型:1. He is going to ... 2. We are going to ...
·时态:一般将来时。
实战整篇
Plans for the party
我弟弟的生日快到了,他想邀请一些朋友来参加他的聚会。请以“Plans for the party”为题，
为聚会的准备写一篇短文。要求:不少于50词。
信息解读
要点点拨
·参考词汇:party、be coming、be going to、buy。
·参考句型:1. He is going to ... 2. We are going to ...
·时态:一般将来时。
实战整篇
Plans for the party
My brother's birthday is coming. We are going to have a party at our house.
He is going to invite his friends to the party. We are going to buy some balloons.
We are going to buy some snacks from the supermarket too. My mother is going to make a birthday cake for him.
We will have a lot of fun.
答案：范文：
Plans for the party
My brother's birthday is coming. We are
going to have a party at our house. He is going to
invite his friends to the party. We are going to
buy some balloons. We are going to buy some
snacks from the supermarket too. My mother is
going to make a birthday cake for him. We will
have a lot of fun.
Plans for the party
My brother's birthday is coming. We are
going to have a party at our house. He is going to
invite his friends to the party. We are going to
buy some balloons. We are going to buy some
snacks from the supermarket too. My mother is
going to make a birthday cake for him. We will
have a lot of fun.
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题，第一步先明确核心要求：主题是弟弟生日派对的筹备计划，时态要求用一般将来时，还要覆盖思维导图给出的四个核心要素：When（派对的时间背景）、Who（参与派对的相关人员）、Where（派对举办地点）、What（派对筹备的具体事项）。第二步先开篇点出背景，用参考短语be coming点明弟弟生日即将到来的时间信息；接下来依次交代派对的举办地点、受邀的人员，对应Who和Where的要素；之后用题干给出的参考句型He is going to...和We are going to...，搭配参考词汇buy，逐一罗列派对筹备的具体安排，最后收尾表达对派对的期待，保证总字数不少于50词，逻辑通顺即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：直接点明事件背景“My brother's birthday is coming.”，既呼应了题干给出的情境，也用到了指定参考短语be coming，交代了派对的时间背景。
2. 交代核心基础信息：先说明派对的举办地点“We are going to have a party at our house.”，再说明参与人员的安排“He is going to invite his friends to the party.”，覆盖Where和Who两个核心要素，同时用到了指定句型He is going to...。
3. 补充具体筹备内容：依次写出筹备的各项安排，用We are going to...的句型，搭配参考词汇buy，说明要购买气球、去超市买零食，还补充妈妈会制作生日蛋糕的细节，丰富内容，覆盖What的要素。
4. 收尾总结：最后用“We will have a lot of fun.”表达对派对的期待，让短文结构完整，总字数符合不少于50词的要求，全程时态统一为一般将来时，符合题干要求。
【答案】
Plans for the party
My brother's birthday is coming. We are going to have a party at our house. He is going to invite his friends to the party. We are going to buy some balloons. We are going to buy some snacks from the supermarket too. My mother is going to make a birthday cake for him. We will have a lot of fun.
【知识点】
一般将来时，英语短文写作，叙事要素梳理
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题干的所有要求，完整覆盖了思维导图给出的when、who、where、what全部核心要点，用到了题干提供的所有参考词汇和指定句型，时态使用准确统一，内容充实流畅，逻辑清晰自然，还补充了制作生日蛋糕的细节让内容更生动，完全满足字数要求，是一篇合格的示范习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道写作题，第一步先明确核心要求：主题是弟弟生日派对的筹备计划，时态要求用一般将来时，还要覆盖思维导图给出的四个核心要素：When（派对的时间背景）、Who（参与派对的相关人员）、Where（派对举办地点）、What（派对筹备的具体事项）。第二步先开篇点出背景，用参考短语be coming点明弟弟生日即将到来的时间信息；接下来依次交代派对的举办地点、受邀的人员，对应Who和Where的要素；之后用题干给出的参考句型He is going to...和We are going to...，搭配参考词汇buy，逐一罗列派对筹备的具体安排，最后收尾表达对派对的期待，保证总字数不少于50词，逻辑通顺即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：直接点明事件背景“My brother's birthday is coming.”，既呼应了题干给出的情境，也用到了指定参考短语be coming，交代了派对的时间背景。
2. 交代核心基础信息：先说明派对的举办地点“We are going to have a party at our house.”，再说明参与人员的安排“He is going to invite his friends to the party.”，覆盖Where和Who两个核心要素，同时用到了指定句型He is going to...。
3. 补充具体筹备内容：依次写出筹备的各项安排，用We are going to...的句型，搭配参考词汇buy，说明要购买气球、去超市买零食，还补充妈妈会制作生日蛋糕的细节，丰富内容，覆盖What的要素。
4. 收尾总结：最后用“We will have a lot of fun.”表达对派对的期待，让短文结构完整，总字数符合不少于50词的要求，全程时态统一为一般将来时，符合题干要求。
【答案】
Plans for the party
My brother's birthday is coming. We are going to have a party at our house. He is going to invite his friends to the party. We are going to buy some balloons. We are going to buy some snacks from the supermarket too. My mother is going to make a birthday cake for him. We will have a lot of fun.
【知识点】
一般将来时，英语短文写作，叙事要素梳理
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题干的所有要求，完整覆盖了思维导图给出的when、who、where、what全部核心要点，用到了题干提供的所有参考词汇和指定句型，时态使用准确统一，内容充实流畅，逻辑清晰自然，还补充了制作生日蛋糕的细节让内容更生动，完全满足字数要求，是一篇合格的示范习作。
【难度系数】
0.7