开门见山
请以“Welcome to China”为题,写一篇介绍中国的短文。要求:不少于50词。
信息解读

要点点拨
·参考词汇:hot、cold、table tennis、will、welcome等。
·参考句型:1. It's ... 2. You will find ...
·时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。
实战整篇
Welcome to China
请以“Welcome to China”为题,写一篇介绍中国的短文。要求:不少于50词。
信息解读
要点点拨
·参考词汇:hot、cold、table tennis、will、welcome等。
·参考句型:1. It's ... 2. You will find ...
·时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。
实战整篇
Welcome to China
China is a large country. It is usually hot in
summer and cold in winter.
summer and cold in winter.
There are pandas and
monkeys in the country. They are cute. People
here love table tennis and badminton.
monkeys in the country. They are cute. People
here love table tennis and badminton.
There are
many interesting cities in the country, for
example, Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. You
will find some interesting places like the Great
Wall, the Palace Museum and the Bund.
many interesting cities in the country, for
example, Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. You
will find some interesting places like the Great
Wall, the Palace Museum and the Bund.
You will
love Chinese food. Welcome to China.
love Chinese food. Welcome to China.
答案:范文:
Welcome to China
China is a large country. It is usually hot in
summer and cold in winter. There are pandas and
monkeys in the country. They are cute. People
here love table tennis and badminton. There are
many interesting cities in the country, for
example, Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. You
will find some interesting places like the Great
Wall, the Palace Museum and the Bund. You will
love Chinese food. Welcome to China.
Welcome to China
China is a large country. It is usually hot in
summer and cold in winter. There are pandas and
monkeys in the country. They are cute. People
here love table tennis and badminton. There are
many interesting cities in the country, for
example, Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. You
will find some interesting places like the Great
Wall, the Palace Museum and the Bund. You will
love Chinese food. Welcome to China.
解析:
【分析】
首先我们先梳理这道题的写作思路:第一步先明确写作主题是向他人介绍中国,开篇先总起点明中国是一个大国;第二步对照思维导图给出的5类提示要点,按照从自然特征到人文特色的顺序依次展开介绍:先介绍中国的天气特征,用上参考词汇hot、cold,用指定句型It's...来描述气候;接下来依次介绍中国的代表性动物、国民喜爱的运动、知名城市,最后用指定句型You will find...介绍国内的著名景点,描述游客将会看到的景色,这部分用一般将来时;最后收尾再次发出欢迎,串联所有内容后检查字数不少于50词,同时确认时态使用正确,客观事实用一般现在时,描述未来的游览体验用一般将来时,保证内容通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇总起:先点明核心属性China is a large country,开门见山引出介绍对象。
2. 介绍气候:使用参考句型It's...,写出It is usually hot in summer and cold in winter,覆盖天气类的提示词汇。
3. 介绍特色动物:引出中国的代表性动物pandas和monkeys,补充简单的描述They are cute让内容更生动。
4. 介绍流行运动:说明中国民众喜爱的table tennis和badminton,符合要点提示。
5. 介绍知名城市:列举Beijing、Shanghai、Guangzhou等国内知名城市,补充说明There are many interesting cities in the country让语句衔接自然。
6. 介绍名胜景点:使用指定参考句型You will find...,引出the Great Wall、the Palace Museum、the Bund等著名景点,符合一般将来时的使用要求。
7. 收尾补充:增加You will love Chinese food丰富内容,最后再次点题发出欢迎,完成全文,整体字数远超50词,所有提示要点全部覆盖,符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
Welcome to China
China is a large country. It is usually hot in summer and cold in winter. There are pandas and monkeys in the country. They are cute. People here love table tennis and badminton. There are many interesting cities in the country, for example, Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. You will find some interesting places like the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and the Bund. You will love Chinese food. Welcome to China.
【知识点】
英语介绍类写作
一般现在时
一般将来时
【点评】
本题给出了非常清晰的思维导图要点和参考词汇、句型,降低了写作门槛,学生只需要按照逻辑顺序串联提示内容,就可以完成符合要求的短文,能够很好地锻炼初学者组织语篇、活用基础句型的能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先我们先梳理这道题的写作思路:第一步先明确写作主题是向他人介绍中国,开篇先总起点明中国是一个大国;第二步对照思维导图给出的5类提示要点,按照从自然特征到人文特色的顺序依次展开介绍:先介绍中国的天气特征,用上参考词汇hot、cold,用指定句型It's...来描述气候;接下来依次介绍中国的代表性动物、国民喜爱的运动、知名城市,最后用指定句型You will find...介绍国内的著名景点,描述游客将会看到的景色,这部分用一般将来时;最后收尾再次发出欢迎,串联所有内容后检查字数不少于50词,同时确认时态使用正确,客观事实用一般现在时,描述未来的游览体验用一般将来时,保证内容通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇总起:先点明核心属性China is a large country,开门见山引出介绍对象。
2. 介绍气候:使用参考句型It's...,写出It is usually hot in summer and cold in winter,覆盖天气类的提示词汇。
3. 介绍特色动物:引出中国的代表性动物pandas和monkeys,补充简单的描述They are cute让内容更生动。
4. 介绍流行运动:说明中国民众喜爱的table tennis和badminton,符合要点提示。
5. 介绍知名城市:列举Beijing、Shanghai、Guangzhou等国内知名城市,补充说明There are many interesting cities in the country让语句衔接自然。
6. 介绍名胜景点:使用指定参考句型You will find...,引出the Great Wall、the Palace Museum、the Bund等著名景点,符合一般将来时的使用要求。
7. 收尾补充:增加You will love Chinese food丰富内容,最后再次点题发出欢迎,完成全文,整体字数远超50词,所有提示要点全部覆盖,符合题目全部要求。
【答案】
Welcome to China
China is a large country. It is usually hot in summer and cold in winter. There are pandas and monkeys in the country. They are cute. People here love table tennis and badminton. There are many interesting cities in the country, for example, Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. You will find some interesting places like the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and the Bund. You will love Chinese food. Welcome to China.
【知识点】
英语介绍类写作
一般现在时
一般将来时
【点评】
本题给出了非常清晰的思维导图要点和参考词汇、句型,降低了写作门槛,学生只需要按照逻辑顺序串联提示内容,就可以完成符合要求的短文,能够很好地锻炼初学者组织语篇、活用基础句型的能力。
【难度系数】
0.8