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看图,根据提示,以“A tiger, a frog and a tortoise”为题,用一般过去时写一个小故事。
提示:rush at the frog, bite the tiger's tail, jump into water, throw(扔)... to the sky, throw... into the river

A tiger, a frog and a tortoise
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A tiger, a frog and a tortoise
One day, a tiger was very hungry. He was looking for food. He saw a frog in front of him. "A frog! My dinner!" He rushed at the frog quickly. Behind the tiger, there was a tortoise. The little tortoise saw it. He bit the tiger's tail hard. "Ouch!" cried the tiger loudly. He looked back. The frog heard the sound and jumped into water. "Thank you, little tortoise," said the frog. But the tiger was very angry. "I'll throw you to the sky!" "Thank you. I like flying in the sky," said the tortoise loudly. The tiger stopped and said, "I will throw you into the river." "Oh, no! I can't swim," said the tortoise sadly. The tiger threw the tortoise into the river. "Thank you, Mr Tiger. Bye bye." The tortoise and the frog swam away happily together.
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答案:主题写作提优
A tiger, a frog and a tortoise
One day, a tiger was very hungry. He was looking for food. He saw a frog in front of him. "A frog! My dinner!" He rushed at the frog quickly. Behind the tiger, there was a tortoise. The little tortoise saw it. He bit the tiger's tail hard. "Ouch!" cried the tiger loudly. He looked back. The frog heard the sound and jumped into water. "Thank you, little tortoise," said the frog. But the tiger was very angry. "I'll throw you to the sky!" "Thank you. I like flying in the sky," said the tortoise loudly. The tiger stopped and said, "I will throw you into the river." "Oh, no! I can't swim," said the tortoise sadly. The tiger threw the tortoise into the river. "Thank you, Mr Tiger. Bye bye." The tortoise and the frog swam away happily together.
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解析:
【分析】
首先我们需要观察四幅图片的内容,梳理出故事的发展脉络:老虎饿了寻找食物,发现青蛙后扑向它;乌龟咬老虎尾巴帮助青蛙逃脱;老虎生气想要惩罚乌龟,被乌龟的话术引导,最后把乌龟扔进河里,乌龟和青蛙一起游走。然后结合题目给出的提示短语,用一般过去时来串联情节,要注意情节连贯,加入合适的对话让故事更生动,同时确保所有提示短语都合理融入故事中。
【解析】
1. 开篇交代背景:用“One day, a tiger was very hungry. He was looking for food.”引出故事场景,说明老虎的状态。
2. 引入冲突:老虎发现青蛙,用“He rushed at the frog quickly.”对应提示“rush at the frog”,推动情节发展。
3. 转折情节:乌龟出现,用“He bit the tiger's tail hard.”对应提示“bite the tiger's tail”,这一行为让青蛙有机会逃脱,接着用“The frog heard the sound and jumped into water.”对应提示“jump into water”。
4. 后续发展:老虎生气,先后说出"I'll throw you to the sky!"和"I will throw you into the river."对应提示“throw... to the sky, throw... into the river”,通过乌龟的巧妙回应,让故事出现反转,最后乌龟和青蛙一起游走,完成故事收尾。
5. 全程使用一般过去时,确保动词形式正确,同时加入对话增强故事的趣味性和合理性。
【答案】
A tiger, a frog and a tortoise
One day, a tiger was very hungry. He was looking for food. He saw a frog in front of him. "A frog! My dinner!" He rushed at the frog quickly. Behind the tiger, there was a tortoise. The little tortoise saw it. He bit the tiger's tail hard. "Ouch!" cried the tiger loudly. He looked back. The frog heard the sound and jumped into water. "Thank you, little tortoise," said the frog. But the tiger was very angry. "I'll throw you to the sky!" "Thank you. I like flying in the sky," said the tortoise loudly. The tiger stopped and said, "I will throw you into the river." "Oh, no! I can't swim," said the tortoise sadly. The tiger threw the tortoise into the river. "Thank you, Mr Tiger. Bye bye." The tortoise and the frog swam away happily together.
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【知识点】
一般过去时运用,看图写话技巧,故事情节构建
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣图片内容和提示短语,情节连贯合理,通过对话丰富了故事的趣味性,准确运用一般过去时来叙述事件,既完成了写作任务,又展现了清晰的逻辑思维,是一篇符合要求的优秀小故事。
【难度系数】
0.6
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