Ⅵ. 书面表达
近年来,"China Travel"成为全球网络上的热门话题。越来越多的海外游客来到中国,体验中国的风土人情。假如你是罗阳,你的朋友Jack即将从澳大利亚来中国,他希望你推荐一个最值得一游的城市。请根据思维导图,给Jack写一封电子邮件。
注意:1. 词数80左右。开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。2. 根据思维导图内容展开,请适当发挥,补充细节。3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
I'm so excited you're coming to China! I think you should visit my favourite city.
I hope you have a great time in China!
Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best regards,
Luo Yang
近年来,"China Travel"成为全球网络上的热门话题。越来越多的海外游客来到中国,体验中国的风土人情。假如你是罗阳,你的朋友Jack即将从澳大利亚来中国,他希望你推荐一个最值得一游的城市。请根据思维导图,给Jack写一封电子邮件。
注意:1. 词数80左右。开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。2. 根据思维导图内容展开,请适当发挥,补充细节。3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
I'm so excited you're coming to China! I think you should visit my favourite city.
It's a place filled with special food, interesting places, and friendly people.
The food here is amazing. You must try the local noodles. They are delicious and come with different toppings like meat, vegetables, and even eggs. There's also a famous dumpling shop that serves dumplings with a unique filling. It's a must-try!
For interesting places, you can visit the ancient temple that has a long history. There are beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes around it. You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.
The people here are very friendly. They love to chat and help tourists. You won't feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming.
The food here is amazing. You must try the local noodles. They are delicious and come with different toppings like meat, vegetables, and even eggs. There's also a famous dumpling shop that serves dumplings with a unique filling. It's a must-try!
For interesting places, you can visit the ancient temple that has a long history. There are beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes around it. You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.
The people here are very friendly. They love to chat and help tourists. You won't feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming.
I hope you have a great time in China!
Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best regards,
Luo Yang
答案：Ⅵ. One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I'm so excited you're coming to China! I think you should visit my favourite city. It's a place filled with special food, interesting places, and friendly people.
The food here is amazing. You must try the local noodles. They are delicious and come with different toppings like meat, vegetables, and even eggs. There's also a famous dumpling shop that serves dumplings with a unique filling. It's a must-try!
For interesting places, you can visit the ancient temple that has a long history. There are beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes around it. You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.
The people here are very friendly. They love to chat and help tourists. You won't feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming.
I hope you have a great time in China!
Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best regards,
Luo Yang
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本题要求学生写一封电子邮件推荐一个旅游城市,应是一篇说明文。
②时态:以一般现在时为主,描述推荐城市和感受。③提示:根据思维导图内容展开,注意介绍特别的美食、有趣的地方和友好的人们三个方面,适当添加细节,突出城市的特色和吸引力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。首先表达对Jack即将来中国的欢迎和喜悦,并直接引出想要推荐的城市。第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别从特别的美食、有趣的地方和友好的人们三个方面详细介绍这座城市的魅力。第三步,书写结语。再次表达对Jack来访的期待,并询问是否需要更多建议,以示友好和关心。
[亮点词汇]
①filled with充满 ②amazing令人惊叹的 ③different toppings不同的配料 ④a long history悠久的历史
⑤bustling繁忙的 ⑥welcoming好客的
[高分句型]
①You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.(定语从句修饰先行词market,描述其特点)
③You won't feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming. (because引导原因状语从句)
Dear Jack,
I'm so excited you're coming to China! I think you should visit my favourite city. It's a place filled with special food, interesting places, and friendly people.
The food here is amazing. You must try the local noodles. They are delicious and come with different toppings like meat, vegetables, and even eggs. There's also a famous dumpling shop that serves dumplings with a unique filling. It's a must-try!
For interesting places, you can visit the ancient temple that has a long history. There are beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes around it. You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.
The people here are very friendly. They love to chat and help tourists. You won't feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming.
I hope you have a great time in China!
Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best regards,
Luo Yang
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本题要求学生写一封电子邮件推荐一个旅游城市,应是一篇说明文。
②时态:以一般现在时为主,描述推荐城市和感受。③提示:根据思维导图内容展开,注意介绍特别的美食、有趣的地方和友好的人们三个方面,适当添加细节,突出城市的特色和吸引力。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。首先表达对Jack即将来中国的欢迎和喜悦,并直接引出想要推荐的城市。第二步,具体阐述写作内容。分别从特别的美食、有趣的地方和友好的人们三个方面详细介绍这座城市的魅力。第三步,书写结语。再次表达对Jack来访的期待,并询问是否需要更多建议,以示友好和关心。
[亮点词汇]
①filled with充满 ②amazing令人惊叹的 ③different toppings不同的配料 ④a long history悠久的历史
⑤bustling繁忙的 ⑥welcoming好客的
[高分句型]
①You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.(定语从句修饰先行词market,描述其特点)
③You won't feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming. (because引导原因状语从句)
解析：
【分析】
首先，明确本题是一封推荐类电子邮件，属于说明文范畴。解题思路如下：
1. 审清题目：需向Jack推荐中国城市，围绕思维导图的特色美食、有趣景点、友好市民三个核心点展开，补充细节，词数符合要求，开头结尾已给定。
2. 确定时态：介绍城市的常态特征，主要使用一般现在时。
3. 搭建框架：开篇表达兴奋并引出推荐城市；中间分模块详细介绍美食、景点、市民，添加具体细节增强吸引力；最后用给定结尾收尾，保持友好语气。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先表达对Jack来中国的兴奋，点明推荐的城市，总述城市的三个核心吸引力，让读者快速抓住内容重点。
2. 分点阐述：
美食部分：列举当地面条、特色馅饺子等具体食物，描述食物配料、馅料的特点，突出美食的独特性与吸引力。
景点部分：选取古老寺庙、热闹集市这类代表性景点，补充寺庙周边的花园湖泊、集市里的纪念品和小吃等细节，让景点介绍更生动具体。
市民部分：描述市民乐于聊天、帮助游客的友好表现，说明游客不会孤单，体现城市的人文关怀。
3. 结尾收尾：使用题目给定的结尾，再次表达对Jack旅途的期待，询问是否需要更多建议，契合电子邮件的友好氛围。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm so excited you're coming to China! I think you should visit my favourite city. It's a place filled with special food, interesting places, and friendly people.
The food here is amazing. You must try the local noodles. They are delicious and come with different toppings like meat, vegetables, and even eggs. There's also a famous dumpling shop that serves dumplings with a unique filling. It's a must-try!
For interesting places, you can visit the ancient temple that has a long history. There are beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes around it. You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.
The people here are very friendly. They love to chat and help tourists. You won't feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming.
I hope you have a great time in China!
Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best regards,
Luo Yang
【知识点】
电子邮件写作、说明文写作、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕思维导图的三个核心点展开，每个部分都补充了具体细节，内容充实生动。运用了丰富的亮点词汇和高分句型，语言地道自然，符合电子邮件的友好语气，能很好地展现推荐城市的魅力，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，明确本题是一封推荐类电子邮件，属于说明文范畴。解题思路如下：
1. 审清题目：需向Jack推荐中国城市，围绕思维导图的特色美食、有趣景点、友好市民三个核心点展开，补充细节，词数符合要求，开头结尾已给定。
2. 确定时态：介绍城市的常态特征，主要使用一般现在时。
3. 搭建框架：开篇表达兴奋并引出推荐城市；中间分模块详细介绍美食、景点、市民，添加具体细节增强吸引力；最后用给定结尾收尾，保持友好语气。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先表达对Jack来中国的兴奋，点明推荐的城市，总述城市的三个核心吸引力，让读者快速抓住内容重点。
2. 分点阐述：
美食部分：列举当地面条、特色馅饺子等具体食物，描述食物配料、馅料的特点，突出美食的独特性与吸引力。
景点部分：选取古老寺庙、热闹集市这类代表性景点，补充寺庙周边的花园湖泊、集市里的纪念品和小吃等细节，让景点介绍更生动具体。
市民部分：描述市民乐于聊天、帮助游客的友好表现，说明游客不会孤单，体现城市的人文关怀。
3. 结尾收尾：使用题目给定的结尾，再次表达对Jack旅途的期待，询问是否需要更多建议，契合电子邮件的友好氛围。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm so excited you're coming to China! I think you should visit my favourite city. It's a place filled with special food, interesting places, and friendly people.
The food here is amazing. You must try the local noodles. They are delicious and come with different toppings like meat, vegetables, and even eggs. There's also a famous dumpling shop that serves dumplings with a unique filling. It's a must-try!
For interesting places, you can visit the ancient temple that has a long history. There are beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes around it. You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.
The people here are very friendly. They love to chat and help tourists. You won't feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming.
I hope you have a great time in China!
Let me know if you need more ideas.
Best regards,
Luo Yang
【知识点】
电子邮件写作、说明文写作、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，围绕思维导图的三个核心点展开，每个部分都补充了具体细节，内容充实生动。运用了丰富的亮点词汇和高分句型，语言地道自然，符合电子邮件的友好语气，能很好地展现推荐城市的魅力，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
Ⅶ. 新语篇 日常对话 (2024·盐城中考)补全对话
根据对话内容,从所给的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项,每个选项限用一次。
(Li Hua is introducing Yancheng Nature Reserve to his friend Amy on WeChat.)
A. Good idea!
B. Wow, that's cool!
C. Have a good time!
D. But I have never been there.
E. Red-crowned cranes must get good protection there.
1.
4.
根据对话内容,从所给的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项,每个选项限用一次。
(Li Hua is introducing Yancheng Nature Reserve to his friend Amy on WeChat.)
A. Good idea!
B. Wow, that's cool!
C. Have a good time!
D. But I have never been there.
E. Red-crowned cranes must get good protection there.
1.
D
2. B
3. E
4.
A
5. C
答案：Ⅶ. [文章大意]这是围绕盐城自然保护区展开的一则对话。
1. D [解析]根据“Yes... Could you tell me something about it?”可知,此处应是指艾米听说过这个地方但是没有去过。选项D(但我从未去过那里)符合语境。故选D。
2. B [解析]根据“It's famous for the red-crowned cranes there.”可知,那里以丹顶鹤出名,空处应是对此作出评价。选项B(哇,那太酷了!)符合语境。故选B。
3. E [解析]根据“It also helps us learn about how to protect wildlife.”可知,这个地方有助于我们了解如何保护野生动物。选项E(丹顶鹤一定会在那里得到很好的保护。)符合语境。故选E。
4. A [解析]根据“Why not come and see for yourself?”可知,此处是对对方的建议作出评价;结合“I plan to visit Yancheng this summer holiday.”可知,艾米觉得李华的建议不错。选项A(好主意!)符合语境。故选A。
5. C [解析]根据“I plan to visit Yancheng this summer holiday.”可知,艾米计划参观盐城,故此处李华应祝对方玩得开心。选项C(玩得开心!)符合语境。故选C。
1. D [解析]根据“Yes... Could you tell me something about it?”可知,此处应是指艾米听说过这个地方但是没有去过。选项D(但我从未去过那里)符合语境。故选D。
2. B [解析]根据“It's famous for the red-crowned cranes there.”可知,那里以丹顶鹤出名,空处应是对此作出评价。选项B(哇,那太酷了!)符合语境。故选B。
3. E [解析]根据“It also helps us learn about how to protect wildlife.”可知,这个地方有助于我们了解如何保护野生动物。选项E(丹顶鹤一定会在那里得到很好的保护。)符合语境。故选E。
4. A [解析]根据“Why not come and see for yourself?”可知,此处是对对方的建议作出评价;结合“I plan to visit Yancheng this summer holiday.”可知,艾米觉得李华的建议不错。选项A(好主意!)符合语境。故选A。
5. C [解析]根据“I plan to visit Yancheng this summer holiday.”可知,艾米计划参观盐城,故此处李华应祝对方玩得开心。选项C(玩得开心!)符合语境。故选C。
解析：
【分析】
这是一道补全对话题，解题核心是结合上下文语境，分析每处空格前后的对话内容，判断说话者的意图和语气，从而匹配最合适的选项：
1. 第1空：艾米先回答“Yes”，接着询问对方能否介绍盐城自然保护区，说明她听说过这个地方但没去过，需要选表达“没去过”的选项。
2. 第2空：对方提到保护区以丹顶鹤闻名，艾米此处应是对这个信息作出赞叹类的回应，选择符合赞叹语气的选项。
3. 第3空：对方说保护区能帮助了解如何保护野生动物，艾米的回应应和“保护野生动物”相关，结合丹顶鹤的话题，选对应保护丹顶鹤的选项。
4. 第4空：对方提出“为什么不亲自来看看”的建议，艾米说计划暑假去，说明她认可这个建议，选赞同建议的选项。
5. 第5空：艾米说计划暑假去盐城，李华此处应是送上祝福，选表达祝福游玩愉快的选项。
【解析】
1. 第1空：根据前文艾米回答“Yes”，后文又询问“Could you tell me something about it?”，可知艾米听说过该保护区但从未去过，选项D（But I have never been there.）符合语境，故选D。
2. 第2空：根据对方所说“It's famous for the red-crowned cranes there.”，艾米需要对这个信息作出积极评价，选项B（Wow, that's cool!）符合赞叹的语境，故选B。
3. 第3空：根据对方提到“It also helps us learn about how to protect wildlife.”，结合保护区以丹顶鹤闻名的背景，选项E（Red-crowned cranes must get good protection there.）呼应保护野生动物的话题，符合语境，故选E。
4. 第4空：根据对方的建议“Why not come and see for yourself?”，再结合艾米说“I plan to visit Yancheng this summer holiday.”，可知艾米认可这个建议，选项A（Good idea!）符合语境，故选A。
5. 第5空：根据艾米说“I plan to visit Yancheng this summer holiday.”，李华应送上游玩的祝福，选项C（Have a good time!）符合语境，故选C。
【答案】
1. D
2. B
3. E
4. A
5. C
【知识点】
情景交际、日常对话补全
【点评】
本题围绕盐城自然保护区展开日常对话，考查学生对语境的理解和逻辑推理能力，需要结合对话上下文的语义、语气来选择合适的回应，贴近生活场景，注重语言的实用性。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一道补全对话题，解题核心是结合上下文语境，分析每处空格前后的对话内容，判断说话者的意图和语气，从而匹配最合适的选项：
1. 第1空：艾米先回答“Yes”，接着询问对方能否介绍盐城自然保护区，说明她听说过这个地方但没去过，需要选表达“没去过”的选项。
2. 第2空：对方提到保护区以丹顶鹤闻名，艾米此处应是对这个信息作出赞叹类的回应，选择符合赞叹语气的选项。
3. 第3空：对方说保护区能帮助了解如何保护野生动物，艾米的回应应和“保护野生动物”相关，结合丹顶鹤的话题，选对应保护丹顶鹤的选项。
4. 第4空：对方提出“为什么不亲自来看看”的建议，艾米说计划暑假去，说明她认可这个建议，选赞同建议的选项。
5. 第5空：艾米说计划暑假去盐城，李华此处应是送上祝福，选表达祝福游玩愉快的选项。
【解析】
1. 第1空：根据前文艾米回答“Yes”，后文又询问“Could you tell me something about it?”，可知艾米听说过该保护区但从未去过，选项D（But I have never been there.）符合语境，故选D。
2. 第2空：根据对方所说“It's famous for the red-crowned cranes there.”，艾米需要对这个信息作出积极评价，选项B（Wow, that's cool!）符合赞叹的语境，故选B。
3. 第3空：根据对方提到“It also helps us learn about how to protect wildlife.”，结合保护区以丹顶鹤闻名的背景，选项E（Red-crowned cranes must get good protection there.）呼应保护野生动物的话题，符合语境，故选E。
4. 第4空：根据对方的建议“Why not come and see for yourself?”，再结合艾米说“I plan to visit Yancheng this summer holiday.”，可知艾米认可这个建议，选项A（Good idea!）符合语境，故选A。
5. 第5空：根据艾米说“I plan to visit Yancheng this summer holiday.”，李华应送上游玩的祝福，选项C（Have a good time!）符合语境，故选C。
【答案】
1. D
2. B
3. E
4. A
5. C
【知识点】
情景交际、日常对话补全
【点评】
本题围绕盐城自然保护区展开日常对话，考查学生对语境的理解和逻辑推理能力，需要结合对话上下文的语义、语气来选择合适的回应，贴近生活场景，注重语言的实用性。
【难度系数】
0.8