典型例题
假如某英文网站正在开展"亲爱的家乡,我为你代言"的主题征文活动,你打算参加。请你写一篇不少于70词的英语短文介绍你的家乡并投稿。
思路点拨
内容:介绍自己的家乡(可从其面积、位置、人口、气候、历史、景点和美食方面进行介绍)。
1. 体裁:说明文。2. 人称:以第三人称为主。
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主。
范文欣赏
Dear friends,
Did you go to Kunming before? It's my hometown. Now let me tell you something about it.
It covers an area of over 21,000 square kilometres and is located in the southwest of China. The population of my hometown is about 8.7 million. People from different ethnic groups live together and get along very well. The weather in Kunming is warm all year round just like spring, so it's called "Spring City". As a result, you can choose to visit my hometown
whenever you like-spring, summer, autumn or winter. My hometown has a lot of places of interest such as the Stone Forest, the Dian Lake and Dongchuan Red Land. Kunming is famous for its delicious food. One popular dish is called "Crossing the Bridge Rice Noodles". There are also many fresh fruits like mangoes.
Why not come and visit my hometown?
I'm sure you'll have a good time here.
Hope to see you soon!
假如某英文网站正在开展"亲爱的家乡,我为你代言"的主题征文活动,你打算参加。请你写一篇不少于70词的英语短文介绍你的家乡并投稿。
思路点拨
内容:介绍自己的家乡(可从其面积、位置、人口、气候、历史、景点和美食方面进行介绍)。
1. 体裁:说明文。2. 人称:以第三人称为主。
3. 时态:以一般现在时为主。
范文欣赏
Dear friends,
Did you go to Kunming before? It's my hometown. Now let me tell you something about it.
It covers an area of over 21,000 square kilometres and is located in the southwest of China. The population of my hometown is about 8.7 million. People from different ethnic groups live together and get along very well. The weather in Kunming is warm all year round just like spring, so it's called "Spring City". As a result, you can choose to visit my hometown
whenever you like-spring, summer, autumn or winter. My hometown has a lot of places of interest such as the Stone Forest, the Dian Lake and Dongchuan Red Land. Kunming is famous for its delicious food. One popular dish is called "Crossing the Bridge Rice Noodles". There are also many fresh fruits like mangoes.
Why not come and visit my hometown?
I'm sure you'll have a good time here.
Hope to see you soon!
答案：Dear friends,
Did you go to Kunming before? It's my hometown. Now let me tell you something about it.
It covers an area of over 21,000 square kilometres and is located in the southwest of China. The population of my hometown is about 8.7 million. People from different ethnic groups live together and get along very well. The weather in Kunming is warm all year round just like spring, so it's called "Spring City". As a result, you can choose to visit my hometown whenever you like-spring, summer, autumn or winter. My hometown has a lot of places of interest such as the Stone Forest, the Dian Lake and Dongchuan Red Land. Kunming is famous for its delicious food. One popular dish is called "Crossing the Bridge Rice Noodles". There are also many fresh fruits like mangoes.
Why not come and visit my hometown?
I'm sure you'll have a good time here.
Hope to see you soon!
Did you go to Kunming before? It's my hometown. Now let me tell you something about it.
It covers an area of over 21,000 square kilometres and is located in the southwest of China. The population of my hometown is about 8.7 million. People from different ethnic groups live together and get along very well. The weather in Kunming is warm all year round just like spring, so it's called "Spring City". As a result, you can choose to visit my hometown whenever you like-spring, summer, autumn or winter. My hometown has a lot of places of interest such as the Stone Forest, the Dian Lake and Dongchuan Red Land. Kunming is famous for its delicious food. One popular dish is called "Crossing the Bridge Rice Noodles". There are also many fresh fruits like mangoes.
Why not come and visit my hometown?
I'm sure you'll have a good time here.
Hope to see you soon!
解析：
本题要求写一篇介绍家乡的说明文，写作时需注意：体裁为说明文，可采用“引入家乡-介绍家乡各方面情况-发出邀请”的结构；人称以第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主；内容需涵盖家乡的面积与位置、人口、气候、景点、美食等要点，字数不少于70词，语言要通顺自然，突出家乡特色。
走进江苏,游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加"Go Jiangsu"旅游活动。假如你是李辉,请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以"Welcome to Nanjing"为题写一篇英语短文,邀请他们走进南京,感受历史文化名城的魅力。
注意:1. 词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Nanjing
I'm Li Hui from Nanjing, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
注意:1. 词数70左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Nanjing
I'm Li Hui from Nanjing, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
答案：写作能力突破
One possible version:
Welcome to Nanjing
I'm Li Hui from Nanjing, Jiangsu. I'd like to
recommend my hometown to you.
Nanjing lies on the lower reaches of the Yangtze River.
In summer, it's pretty hot, but there's lots of rain.
There are many cool places to visit. Confucius Temple is
really fun. You can see traditional Chinese buildings and try
delicious local snacks. Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum is huge and
amazing. The old-time buildings there are so great. Sun Yat-
sen Mausoleum is also very famous. Many people come to
pay respect here.
Nanjing has a long history. The Jinling culture is super
rich and special. And the people in Nanjing are so friendly. If
you need help, they'll be glad to give you a hand.
Come and have a great time in Nanjing!
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇说明文。②时态:一般现在时。③提
示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥,
使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明南京的地理位置以及著名的景点;第二
步,介绍南京丰富的文化和当地人的性格特征;第三步,最后
邀请大家来南京做客。
[亮点短语]
① lies on 位于 ② huge and amazing 巨大且令人惊叹的
③pay respect 表达敬意,瞻仰
[高分句型]
If you need help, they'll be glad to give you a hand.(含有
if引导的条件状语从句)
One possible version:
Welcome to Nanjing
I'm Li Hui from Nanjing, Jiangsu. I'd like to
recommend my hometown to you.
Nanjing lies on the lower reaches of the Yangtze River.
In summer, it's pretty hot, but there's lots of rain.
There are many cool places to visit. Confucius Temple is
really fun. You can see traditional Chinese buildings and try
delicious local snacks. Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum is huge and
amazing. The old-time buildings there are so great. Sun Yat-
sen Mausoleum is also very famous. Many people come to
pay respect here.
Nanjing has a long history. The Jinling culture is super
rich and special. And the people in Nanjing are so friendly. If
you need help, they'll be glad to give you a hand.
Come and have a great time in Nanjing!
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇说明文。②时态:一般现在时。③提
示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥,
使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体说明南京的地理位置以及著名的景点;第二
步,介绍南京丰富的文化和当地人的性格特征;第三步,最后
邀请大家来南京做客。
[亮点短语]
① lies on 位于 ② huge and amazing 巨大且令人惊叹的
③pay respect 表达敬意,瞻仰
[高分句型]
If you need help, they'll be glad to give you a hand.(含有
if引导的条件状语从句)
解析：
【分析】
首先明确这是一篇面向外国友人的邀请类说明文，解题思路如下：
1. 审题：确定体裁为说明文+邀请信，时态用一般现在时，需覆盖地理位置与天气、名胜古迹、当地文化、当地居民这四个核心要点，词数可在要求基础上适当发挥以保证文章连贯。
2. 构思结构：承接给定开头，先介绍南京的地理位置和夏季天气；接着列举特色景点并补充细节，增强吸引力；然后介绍南京独特的文化和友善的当地人；最后发出热情邀请收尾。
3. 语言优化：选用地道的英语短语和句型，避免出现真实信息，让文章表达自然流畅。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，自然开启对南京的介绍。
2. 地理位置与天气：用“Nanjing lies on the lower reaches of the Yangtze River.”点明位置，用“In summer, it's pretty hot, but there's lots of rain.”描述夏季天气，契合提示内容。
3. 名胜古迹：列举Confucius Temple、Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum、Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum，并分别补充“看古建筑、尝小吃”“瞻仰致敬”等细节，丰富景点介绍。
4. 文化与当地人：介绍南京丰富独特的金陵文化，用“If you need help, they'll be glad to give you a hand.”这一条件状语从句，体现当地人友善乐于助人的特点。
5. 结尾用“Come and have a great time in Nanjing!”发出邀请，呼应主题。
【答案】
Welcome to Nanjing
I'm Li Hui from Nanjing, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
Nanjing lies on the lower reaches of the Yangtze River. In summer, it's pretty hot, but there's lots of rain.
There are many cool places to visit. Confucius Temple is really fun. You can see traditional Chinese buildings and try delicious local snacks. Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum is huge and amazing. The old-time buildings there are so great. Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum is also very famous. Many people come to pay respect here.
Nanjing has a long history. The Jinling culture is super rich and special. And the people in Nanjing are so friendly. If you need help, they'll be glad to give you a hand.
Come and have a great time in Nanjing!
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、一般现在时运用、情景交际写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容连贯充实。运用了“lies on”“pay respect”等亮点短语，还使用了if引导的条件状语从句，语言表达地道自然，能很好地向外国友人展现南京的魅力，符合邀请类文章的语境。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确这是一篇面向外国友人的邀请类说明文，解题思路如下：
1. 审题：确定体裁为说明文+邀请信，时态用一般现在时，需覆盖地理位置与天气、名胜古迹、当地文化、当地居民这四个核心要点，词数可在要求基础上适当发挥以保证文章连贯。
2. 构思结构：承接给定开头，先介绍南京的地理位置和夏季天气；接着列举特色景点并补充细节，增强吸引力；然后介绍南京独特的文化和友善的当地人；最后发出热情邀请收尾。
3. 语言优化：选用地道的英语短语和句型，避免出现真实信息，让文章表达自然流畅。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，自然开启对南京的介绍。
2. 地理位置与天气：用“Nanjing lies on the lower reaches of the Yangtze River.”点明位置，用“In summer, it's pretty hot, but there's lots of rain.”描述夏季天气，契合提示内容。
3. 名胜古迹：列举Confucius Temple、Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum、Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum，并分别补充“看古建筑、尝小吃”“瞻仰致敬”等细节，丰富景点介绍。
4. 文化与当地人：介绍南京丰富独特的金陵文化，用“If you need help, they'll be glad to give you a hand.”这一条件状语从句，体现当地人友善乐于助人的特点。
5. 结尾用“Come and have a great time in Nanjing!”发出邀请，呼应主题。
【答案】
Welcome to Nanjing
I'm Li Hui from Nanjing, Jiangsu. I'd like to recommend my hometown to you.
Nanjing lies on the lower reaches of the Yangtze River. In summer, it's pretty hot, but there's lots of rain.
There are many cool places to visit. Confucius Temple is really fun. You can see traditional Chinese buildings and try delicious local snacks. Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum is huge and amazing. The old-time buildings there are so great. Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum is also very famous. Many people come to pay respect here.
Nanjing has a long history. The Jinling culture is super rich and special. And the people in Nanjing are so friendly. If you need help, they'll be glad to give you a hand.
Come and have a great time in Nanjing!
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、一般现在时运用、情景交际写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容连贯充实。运用了“lies on”“pay respect”等亮点短语，还使用了if引导的条件状语从句，语言表达地道自然，能很好地向外国友人展现南京的魅力，符合邀请类文章的语境。
【难度系数】
0.6