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中国幅员辽阔，山河壮美。《中国国家地理》杂志评选出“一生必去的50个地方”，松花江与玉龙雪山均位列其中。请选择其中一处景观，写一篇英语短文介绍。
【要求】1. 必须包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3. 词数100左右。
中国幅员辽阔，山河壮美。《中国国家地理》杂志评选出“一生必去的50个地方”，松花江与玉龙雪山均位列其中。请选择其中一处景观，写一篇英语短文介绍。
【要求】1. 必须包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3. 词数100左右。
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometres long, lies in North-east China. It's a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before pouring it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
答案：The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometres long, lies in North-east China. It's a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before pouring it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before pouring it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道题，第一步先从两个备选景观里选自己更熟悉、更容易组织语言的对象，比如选松花江。接下来先梳理题干给出的所有必写要点，避免遗漏：①位于中国东北，全长2300公里；②沿岸有大型农场，种植玉米，景观很有趣；③写出对应的保护措施。接下来搭建行文逻辑：开篇先点明介绍的主体，紧接着介绍它的基本地理信息，之后描述沿岸的特色风光，适当补充小细节让内容连贯自然，最后说明我们可以采取的保护行动，收尾总结，全程控制词数在100左右，保证语法正确语句通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：用定语从句衔接长度信息，点明松花江的地理位置，开门见山引出介绍对象。
2. 主体风光描述：围绕“大型农场、种植玉米、景色有趣”的要点展开，补充秋季金色玉米田的合理场景，让描述更生动，符合行文连贯的要求。
3. 保护措施部分：围绕保护主题，写出2-3个具体可落地的做法，比如禁止向河道丢弃垃圾、工厂废水处理达标后再排放，贴合实际。
4. 结尾总结：升华主题，点明保护松花江的意义，让语篇结构完整。
最后通读全文，检查所有给定要点是否全部覆盖，修正语法错误，调整语句流畅度，符合词数要求。
【答案】
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometres long, lies in North-east China. It's a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before pouring it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
【知识点】
景物类英语写作，定语从句应用，环保话题表达
【点评】
本题属于提纲提示类的景物介绍写作，难度适中，核心要求是完整覆盖所有给定提示要点，学生写作时要注意不要遗漏信息点，同时可以适当补充符合逻辑的细节让行文不生硬，灵活运用复合句替代全部简单句，能有效提升文章的可读性和得分档次。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道题，第一步先从两个备选景观里选自己更熟悉、更容易组织语言的对象，比如选松花江。接下来先梳理题干给出的所有必写要点，避免遗漏：①位于中国东北，全长2300公里；②沿岸有大型农场，种植玉米，景观很有趣；③写出对应的保护措施。接下来搭建行文逻辑：开篇先点明介绍的主体，紧接着介绍它的基本地理信息，之后描述沿岸的特色风光，适当补充小细节让内容连贯自然，最后说明我们可以采取的保护行动，收尾总结，全程控制词数在100左右，保证语法正确语句通顺即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：用定语从句衔接长度信息，点明松花江的地理位置，开门见山引出介绍对象。
2. 主体风光描述：围绕“大型农场、种植玉米、景色有趣”的要点展开，补充秋季金色玉米田的合理场景，让描述更生动，符合行文连贯的要求。
3. 保护措施部分：围绕保护主题，写出2-3个具体可落地的做法，比如禁止向河道丢弃垃圾、工厂废水处理达标后再排放，贴合实际。
4. 结尾总结：升华主题，点明保护松花江的意义，让语篇结构完整。
最后通读全文，检查所有给定要点是否全部覆盖，修正语法错误，调整语句流畅度，符合词数要求。
【答案】
The Songhua River, which is 2,300 kilometres long, lies in North-east China. It's a place full of charm.
There are large farms along the river where people grow corn. The golden cornfields in autumn are a spectacular view, making the area look like a beautiful painting. It's really interesting to see such a sight.
Protecting the Songhua River is of great importance. We should stop people from littering into the river. Factories should be required to treat their waste properly before pouring it.
In a word, the Songhua River, with its unique beauty and significance, deserves our efforts to protect it so that it can remain a wonderful place for a long time.
【知识点】
景物类英语写作，定语从句应用，环保话题表达
【点评】
本题属于提纲提示类的景物介绍写作，难度适中，核心要求是完整覆盖所有给定提示要点，学生写作时要注意不要遗漏信息点，同时可以适当补充符合逻辑的细节让行文不生硬，灵活运用复合句替代全部简单句，能有效提升文章的可读性和得分档次。
【难度系数】
0.6