经典例题
请根据以下提示，以“My favourite outdoor activity”为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。
1. 我最喜欢的户外活动是野营。
2. 原因：省钱；对健康有益；待在户外可以欣赏美丽的湖光山色。
3. 曾经(once)有一次我在海边野营……
4. 本周末如果有空，我打算邀请我的好朋友一起去野营。
My favourite outdoor activity
写作指导
1. 用第一人称来写。
2. 时态以一般现在时与一般过去时为主。
3. 写作时应注意包含所有提示内容并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
写作模板
请根据以下提示，以“My favourite outdoor activity”为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。
1. 我最喜欢的户外活动是野营。
2. 原因：省钱；对健康有益；待在户外可以欣赏美丽的湖光山色。
3. 曾经(once)有一次我在海边野营……
4. 本周末如果有空，我打算邀请我的好朋友一起去野营。
My favourite outdoor activity
写作指导
1. 用第一人称来写。
2. 时态以一般现在时与一般过去时为主。
3. 写作时应注意包含所有提示内容并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
写作模板
答案：My favourite outdoor activity
We all know outdoor activities can make us healthy and relaxed. My favourite outdoor activity is camping.
It doesn't cost much money. It's good for my health, and I can enjoy the beautiful lakes and mountains when staying outdoors. Once, I went camping by the sea with my parents. We put up a tent, breathed the fresh sea wind, and watched the amazing sunset together. We also caught small crabs on the soft beach and shared delicious snacks around the campfire. It was such a wonderful and unforgettable experience.
If I am free this weekend, I plan to invite my good friends to go camping in the nearby forest. I believe we will get close to nature and have a fantastic time there.
We all know outdoor activities can make us healthy and relaxed. My favourite outdoor activity is camping.
It doesn't cost much money. It's good for my health, and I can enjoy the beautiful lakes and mountains when staying outdoors. Once, I went camping by the sea with my parents. We put up a tent, breathed the fresh sea wind, and watched the amazing sunset together. We also caught small crabs on the soft beach and shared delicious snacks around the campfire. It was such a wonderful and unforgettable experience.
If I am free this weekend, I plan to invite my good friends to go camping in the nearby forest. I believe we will get close to nature and have a fantastic time there.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇命题英语话题作文，我们可以按照题目给出的三段式写作逻辑梳理思路：
1. 首先完成开篇点题部分：先总述户外活动对人的益处，直接点明自己最喜欢的户外活动是野营，开门见山贴合主题。
2. 接着完成详细介绍部分：先把题干给出的三个喜爱野营的原因（花费少、有益健康、身处户外可欣赏湖光山色）逐一落实，再用一般过去时叙述自己曾经在海边野营的经历，补充合理的活动细节让内容更充实生动，避免内容空洞。
3. 最后完成收篇结尾部分：按照题干要求写明本周末如果有空，打算邀请好朋友一同去野营的计划，表达对活动的期待，自然收尾。写作全程使用第一人称，注意区分一般现在时和一般过去时的使用场景，确保所有提示要点都覆盖到，满足不少于60词的字数要求即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
步骤1：开篇段，先铺垫户外活动能让人健康放松的普遍优势，直接点出自己最爱的户外活动是野营，完成点题。
步骤2：主体段，先依次说明野营花费不高、有益健康、可以在户外欣赏湖光山色的三个优势，再用一般过去时讲述曾经和父母去海边野营的经历，补充搭帐篷、吹海风、看日落、抓小螃蟹、围篝火分享零食的细节，让经历真实可感。
步骤3：结尾段，说明如果本周末有空，计划邀请好朋友去附近森林野营，表达亲近自然、享受时光的期待，完成收尾。
【答案】
My favourite outdoor activity
We all know outdoor activities can make us healthy and relaxed. My favourite outdoor activity is camping.
It doesn't cost much money. It's good for my health, and I can enjoy the beautiful lakes and mountains when staying outdoors. Once, I went camping by the sea with my parents. We put up a tent, breathed the fresh sea wind, and watched the amazing sunset together. We also caught small crabs on the soft beach and shared delicious snacks around the campfire. It was such a wonderful and unforgettable experience.
If I am free this weekend, I plan to invite my good friends to go camping in the nearby forest. I believe we will get close to nature and have a fantastic time there.
【知识点】
英语话题写作，一般过去时，作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题干给出的所有写作要点，采用清晰的三段式结构逻辑通顺，时态切换准确自然，补充的野营相关细节让文章内容生动饱满，语句流畅没有语法错误，符合初中英语写作的评分标准，字数远超60词的要求，是一篇合格的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇命题英语话题作文，我们可以按照题目给出的三段式写作逻辑梳理思路：
1. 首先完成开篇点题部分：先总述户外活动对人的益处，直接点明自己最喜欢的户外活动是野营，开门见山贴合主题。
2. 接着完成详细介绍部分：先把题干给出的三个喜爱野营的原因（花费少、有益健康、身处户外可欣赏湖光山色）逐一落实，再用一般过去时叙述自己曾经在海边野营的经历，补充合理的活动细节让内容更充实生动，避免内容空洞。
3. 最后完成收篇结尾部分：按照题干要求写明本周末如果有空，打算邀请好朋友一同去野营的计划，表达对活动的期待，自然收尾。写作全程使用第一人称，注意区分一般现在时和一般过去时的使用场景，确保所有提示要点都覆盖到，满足不少于60词的字数要求即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
步骤1：开篇段，先铺垫户外活动能让人健康放松的普遍优势，直接点出自己最爱的户外活动是野营，完成点题。
步骤2：主体段，先依次说明野营花费不高、有益健康、可以在户外欣赏湖光山色的三个优势，再用一般过去时讲述曾经和父母去海边野营的经历，补充搭帐篷、吹海风、看日落、抓小螃蟹、围篝火分享零食的细节，让经历真实可感。
步骤3：结尾段，说明如果本周末有空，计划邀请好朋友去附近森林野营，表达亲近自然、享受时光的期待，完成收尾。
【答案】
My favourite outdoor activity
We all know outdoor activities can make us healthy and relaxed. My favourite outdoor activity is camping.
It doesn't cost much money. It's good for my health, and I can enjoy the beautiful lakes and mountains when staying outdoors. Once, I went camping by the sea with my parents. We put up a tent, breathed the fresh sea wind, and watched the amazing sunset together. We also caught small crabs on the soft beach and shared delicious snacks around the campfire. It was such a wonderful and unforgettable experience.
If I am free this weekend, I plan to invite my good friends to go camping in the nearby forest. I believe we will get close to nature and have a fantastic time there.
【知识点】
英语话题写作，一般过去时，作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题干给出的所有写作要点，采用清晰的三段式结构逻辑通顺，时态切换准确自然，补充的野营相关细节让文章内容生动饱满，语句流畅没有语法错误，符合初中英语写作的评分标准，字数远超60词的要求，是一篇合格的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7