经典例题
根据所给提示以“My dream house”为题写一篇短文。80词左右。
【要点】1. 房子很大，是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋……
2. 一楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅……
3. 二楼有电脑房和一个大客厅……
4. 我有自己的卧室，又大又干净。
My dream house
写作指导
1. 用第一人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 要写出理想的房子的布局，可适当发挥。
写作模板
根据所给提示以“My dream house”为题写一篇短文。80词左右。
【要点】1. 房子很大，是一个有花园和游泳池的三层房屋……
2. 一楼有一个大的厨房和餐厅……
3. 二楼有电脑房和一个大客厅……
4. 我有自己的卧室，又大又干净。
My dream house
写作指导
1. 用第一人称来写。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 要写出理想的房子的布局，可适当发挥。
写作模板
答案：My dream house
My dream house is very big. It's a three-floor house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool.
On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can cook delicious food and share meals with my family here.
On the first floor, there is a computer room and a large living room. I also have my own big and clean bedroom, where I can read and rest comfortably.
I hope I can live in such a wonderful house with my family one day.
My dream house is very big. It's a three-floor house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool.
On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can cook delicious food and share meals with my family here.
On the first floor, there is a computer room and a large living room. I also have my own big and clean bedroom, where I can read and rest comfortably.
I hope I can live in such a wonderful house with my family one day.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：以"My dream house"为主题，80词左右，使用第一人称、一般现在时，覆盖所有给定要点。我们可以按照题目给出的三段式结构逐步构思：第一步开篇点题，直接点明我的梦想之家很大，补充要点里“三层、带花园和游泳池”的整体特征，开门见山切入主题。第二步做详细介绍，按照从下到上的楼层顺序依次描述：先介绍一楼的大厨房和餐厅，补充少量生活化细节让内容更饱满，再介绍二楼的电脑房、大客厅，最后引出自己又大又干净的专属卧室，把所有要点全部覆盖。最后收尾部分用I hope引出美好期许，表达希望未来和家人住进这样的房子的愿望，同时控制总字数在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
我们按照给定的写作模板分步完成写作：
1. 开篇点题：整合要点1的信息，直接点明梦想之家的整体外观，开门见山：My dream house is very big. It's a three-floor house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool.
2. 详细介绍：按照楼层顺序依次展开描述，先覆盖要点2介绍一楼布局：On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can cook delicious food and share meals with my family here. 再覆盖要点3和要点4介绍二楼布局：On the first floor, there is a computer room and a large living room. I also have my own big and clean bedroom, where I can read and rest comfortably.
3. 收篇结尾：表达个人的美好愿望，收束全文：I hope I can live in such a wonderful house with my family one day.
全文时态统一为一般现在时，逻辑连贯，所有要点无遗漏，总字数符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】
My dream house
My dream house is very big. It's a three-floor house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool.
On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can cook delicious food and share meals with my family here.
On the first floor, there is a computer room and a large living room. I also have my own big and clean bedroom, where I can read and rest comfortably.
I hope I can live in such a wonderful house with my family one day.
【知识点】
There be句型，方位表达，英语短文写作
【点评】
这篇习作严格贴合题目给出的三段式写作框架，所有给定要点全部完整覆盖，行文逻辑清晰，从房屋整体外观到各楼层布局再到个人期许过渡自然流畅，补充的生活化细节让内容更生动真实，语法准确、时态统一，完全符合初中英语基础写作的评分要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：以"My dream house"为主题，80词左右，使用第一人称、一般现在时，覆盖所有给定要点。我们可以按照题目给出的三段式结构逐步构思：第一步开篇点题，直接点明我的梦想之家很大，补充要点里“三层、带花园和游泳池”的整体特征，开门见山切入主题。第二步做详细介绍，按照从下到上的楼层顺序依次描述：先介绍一楼的大厨房和餐厅，补充少量生活化细节让内容更饱满，再介绍二楼的电脑房、大客厅，最后引出自己又大又干净的专属卧室，把所有要点全部覆盖。最后收尾部分用I hope引出美好期许，表达希望未来和家人住进这样的房子的愿望，同时控制总字数在要求范围内即可。
【解析】
我们按照给定的写作模板分步完成写作：
1. 开篇点题：整合要点1的信息，直接点明梦想之家的整体外观，开门见山：My dream house is very big. It's a three-floor house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool.
2. 详细介绍：按照楼层顺序依次展开描述，先覆盖要点2介绍一楼布局：On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can cook delicious food and share meals with my family here. 再覆盖要点3和要点4介绍二楼布局：On the first floor, there is a computer room and a large living room. I also have my own big and clean bedroom, where I can read and rest comfortably.
3. 收篇结尾：表达个人的美好愿望，收束全文：I hope I can live in such a wonderful house with my family one day.
全文时态统一为一般现在时，逻辑连贯，所有要点无遗漏，总字数符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】
My dream house
My dream house is very big. It's a three-floor house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool.
On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen and a dining room. I can cook delicious food and share meals with my family here.
On the first floor, there is a computer room and a large living room. I also have my own big and clean bedroom, where I can read and rest comfortably.
I hope I can live in such a wonderful house with my family one day.
【知识点】
There be句型，方位表达，英语短文写作
【点评】
这篇习作严格贴合题目给出的三段式写作框架，所有给定要点全部完整覆盖，行文逻辑清晰，从房屋整体外观到各楼层布局再到个人期许过渡自然流畅，补充的生活化细节让内容更生动真实，语法准确、时态统一，完全符合初中英语基础写作的评分要求。
【难度系数】
0.7