八、书面表达。(满分15分)(2025·江苏淮安调研)
为了激发中学生创意灵感,提高学生学习英语的热情,学校举办了"My dream home"的演讲比赛。请你根据下面所提供的信息,完成演讲稿。
1. 房子大,有两层,可以和家人住在一起,后面有花园。
2. 房间多,至少有8个房间;一层有厨房、卧室等;二层有浴室、书房等。
3. 很舒适,放学后在书房做作业;早上在花园读书;可以和朋友在家聚会。
4. 其他。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
为了激发中学生创意灵感,提高学生学习英语的热情,学校举办了"My dream home"的演讲比赛。请你根据下面所提供的信息,完成演讲稿。
1. 房子大,有两层,可以和家人住在一起,后面有花园。
2. 房间多,至少有8个房间;一层有厨房、卧室等;二层有浴室、书房等。
3. 很舒适,放学后在书房做作业;早上在花园读书;可以和朋友在家聚会。
4. 其他。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
答案：One possible version
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
My dream home is a big house with two floors. It is perfect for living with my family. Behind the house, there is a beautiful garden where I can relax and enjoy nature. The house has at least eight rooms. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a living room, and some bedrooms. On the first floor, there are bathrooms and a study. The study is my favourite place because I can do my homework there after school.
My dream home is very comfortable. In the morning, I like to read books in the garden. It is peaceful and quiet. I also enjoy inviting my friends to my home for parties. We can have fun together.
In a word, my dream home is not just a house, but a place where I can live happily with my family and friends. It is a place full of love, comfort, and joy.
Thank you!
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
My dream home is a big house with two floors. It is perfect for living with my family. Behind the house, there is a beautiful garden where I can relax and enjoy nature. The house has at least eight rooms. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a living room, and some bedrooms. On the first floor, there are bathrooms and a study. The study is my favourite place because I can do my homework there after school.
My dream home is very comfortable. In the morning, I like to read books in the garden. It is peaceful and quiet. I also enjoy inviting my friends to my home for parties. We can have fun together.
In a word, my dream home is not just a house, but a place where I can live happily with my family and friends. It is a place full of love, comfort, and joy.
Thank you!
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇介绍理想家园的演讲稿类书面表达，解题时首先明确写作要求：使用第一人称、以一般现在时为主要时态，先梳理题干给出的全部4类要点，按照从整体到局部、从客观布局到主观感受的逻辑排布内容：第一步先总述理想家园的整体特征，点明是两层的大房子，适合和家人同住，屋后配有花园；第二步介绍房屋的房间布局，说明总房间数不少于8个，分别介绍一楼、二楼的功能房间；第三步描述居住的舒适体验，对应题干给出的写作业、晨读、和朋友聚会的场景；最后补充升华主题，说明这个家承载的情感意义，加上演讲稿常规的致谢结尾，保证所有要点无遗漏，行文流畅自然即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接题干给出的开头句，先介绍理想家园的整体外观：用with复合结构点明房屋是两层的大房子，说明适合和家人共同居住，再用there be句型介绍屋后的花园，补充花园可以放松亲近自然的小细节，丰富内容。
2. 接着介绍房屋的房间布局：先总述房屋至少有8个房间，分别说明一楼（ground floor）配置厨房、客厅、卧室，二楼配置浴室、书房，点明书房是自己最喜欢的区域，自然引出后续的日常活动描述。
3. 然后描述舒适的居住体验：依次对应题干要点，说明放学后在书房完成作业，清晨在花园读书，还可以邀请朋友来家中聚会，补充细节让场景更生动。
4. 最后收尾升华，点明理想家园不只是建筑，更是和家人朋友快乐生活、充满爱意的地方，最后加上演讲的致谢语，完成整篇演讲稿，确保所有题干给出的信息点全部覆盖，没有遗漏。
【答案】
One possible version
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
My dream home is a big house with two floors. It is perfect for living with my family. Behind the house, there is a beautiful garden where I can relax and enjoy nature. The house has at least eight rooms. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a living room, and some bedrooms. On the first floor, there are bathrooms and a study. The study is my favourite place because I can do my homework there after school.
My dream home is very comfortable. In the morning, I like to read books in the garden. It is peaceful and quiet. I also enjoy inviting my friends to my home for parties. We can have fun together.
In a word, my dream home is not just a house, but a place where I can live happily with my family and friends. It is a place full of love, comfort, and joy.
Thank you!
【知识点】
演讲稿写作规范
there be句型应用
话题作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文体写作，题干给出的信息点非常明确，学生写作时只需要按照从整体到局部的逻辑串联所有要点，避免逐字生硬翻译，适当加入少量衔接词和简单的定语从句提升文采，保证时态统一、没有基础语法错误，就能拿到较高的分数，同时要注意演讲稿的格式完整性，不要遗漏结尾的致谢部分。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇介绍理想家园的演讲稿类书面表达，解题时首先明确写作要求：使用第一人称、以一般现在时为主要时态，先梳理题干给出的全部4类要点，按照从整体到局部、从客观布局到主观感受的逻辑排布内容：第一步先总述理想家园的整体特征，点明是两层的大房子，适合和家人同住，屋后配有花园；第二步介绍房屋的房间布局，说明总房间数不少于8个，分别介绍一楼、二楼的功能房间；第三步描述居住的舒适体验，对应题干给出的写作业、晨读、和朋友聚会的场景；最后补充升华主题，说明这个家承载的情感意义，加上演讲稿常规的致谢结尾，保证所有要点无遗漏，行文流畅自然即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接题干给出的开头句，先介绍理想家园的整体外观：用with复合结构点明房屋是两层的大房子，说明适合和家人共同居住，再用there be句型介绍屋后的花园，补充花园可以放松亲近自然的小细节，丰富内容。
2. 接着介绍房屋的房间布局：先总述房屋至少有8个房间，分别说明一楼（ground floor）配置厨房、客厅、卧室，二楼配置浴室、书房，点明书房是自己最喜欢的区域，自然引出后续的日常活动描述。
3. 然后描述舒适的居住体验：依次对应题干要点，说明放学后在书房完成作业，清晨在花园读书，还可以邀请朋友来家中聚会，补充细节让场景更生动。
4. 最后收尾升华，点明理想家园不只是建筑，更是和家人朋友快乐生活、充满爱意的地方，最后加上演讲的致谢语，完成整篇演讲稿，确保所有题干给出的信息点全部覆盖，没有遗漏。
【答案】
One possible version
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'd like to tell you about my dream home.
My dream home is a big house with two floors. It is perfect for living with my family. Behind the house, there is a beautiful garden where I can relax and enjoy nature. The house has at least eight rooms. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a living room, and some bedrooms. On the first floor, there are bathrooms and a study. The study is my favourite place because I can do my homework there after school.
My dream home is very comfortable. In the morning, I like to read books in the garden. It is peaceful and quiet. I also enjoy inviting my friends to my home for parties. We can have fun together.
In a word, my dream home is not just a house, but a place where I can live happily with my family and friends. It is a place full of love, comfort, and joy.
Thank you!
【知识点】
演讲稿写作规范
there be句型应用
话题作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文体写作，题干给出的信息点非常明确，学生写作时只需要按照从整体到局部的逻辑串联所有要点，避免逐字生硬翻译，适当加入少量衔接词和简单的定语从句提升文采，保证时态统一、没有基础语法错误，就能拿到较高的分数，同时要注意演讲稿的格式完整性，不要遗漏结尾的致谢部分。
【难度系数】
0.7