(2025·江苏无锡江南中学期中)"月是故乡明,心安是归途",家乡总让人魂牵梦绕。无锡担任2025年春晚的分会场,获得了高度关注和广泛赞誉。假设你是 Liu Fang,五一假期你的英国友人 Jenny 要来你家乡无锡游玩,请你用英语给她发一封电子邮件介绍你的家乡,要点如下。
【注意】1.80 词左右(文章开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写整洁。
3.包含所提供的所有表格信息,并作适当发挥。
4.省略号处可适当拓展 1—2 个句子。
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to Wuxi for the Labour Day holiday.
I am so excited that I can't wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Liu Fang
【注意】1.80 词左右(文章开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写整洁。
3.包含所提供的所有表格信息,并作适当发挥。
4.省略号处可适当拓展 1—2 个句子。
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to Wuxi for the Labour Day holiday.
I am so excited that I can't wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Liu Fang
答案：One possible version
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to Wuxi for the Labour Day holiday. Let me tell you something about my hometown.
Wuxi has a history of over 2,000 years and is located in Jiangsu Province. It's only two hours away from Shanghai by car, so transportation is convenient.
Wuxi is famous for Taihu Lake. The city is clean and beautiful. There are many places of interest, like Lingshan Grand Buddha. You can visit parks, explore museums like Wuxi Museum, and try local food.
I love Wuxi because it's both modern and peaceful. I'm sure you'll enjoy its culture and natural beauty.
I am so excited that I can't wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Liu Fang
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to Wuxi for the Labour Day holiday. Let me tell you something about my hometown.
Wuxi has a history of over 2,000 years and is located in Jiangsu Province. It's only two hours away from Shanghai by car, so transportation is convenient.
Wuxi is famous for Taihu Lake. The city is clean and beautiful. There are many places of interest, like Lingshan Grand Buddha. You can visit parks, explore museums like Wuxi Museum, and try local food.
I love Wuxi because it's both modern and peaceful. I'm sure you'll enjoy its culture and natural beauty.
I am so excited that I can't wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Liu Fang
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类英语邮件写作题，解题时首先要明确写作目标是给英国好友介绍家乡无锡，首先第一步先衔接题目给出的开头，自然引出对家乡的介绍；第二步按照表格的逻辑顺序，依次整合历史区位、城市环境、游玩活动三个模块的所有给定要点，不要遗漏任何表格信息；第三步在最后的感受部分补充1-2句贴合语境的内容，说明自己对家乡的喜爱，以及对好友游玩体验的期待，最后控制总词数在要求范围内，保证语句通顺，语气符合给好友写信的轻松感，不要生硬堆砌要点。
【解析】
1. 衔接给定开头：用"Let me tell you something about my hometown."自然引出下文介绍；
2. 介绍基础信息：将历史、区位的要点整合，写出对应内容，覆盖所有历史位置相关要点；
3. 介绍城市环境：围绕太湖、干净优美、名胜三个要点展开，补充小细节让内容更真实；
4. 介绍游玩活动：整合逛公园、参观博物馆、品尝美食的要点，补充具体例子让内容更生动；
5. 补充感受内容：按照要求拓展1-2句，自然衔接题目给出的结尾句，完成全文，同时检查所有要点是否全部覆盖，词数是否符合80词左右的要求，修正语法错误保证行文流畅。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to Wuxi for the Labour Day holiday. Let me tell you something about my hometown.
Wuxi has a history of over 2,000 years and is located in Jiangsu Province. It's only two hours away from Shanghai by car, so transportation is convenient.
Wuxi is famous for Taihu Lake. The city is clean and beautiful. There are many places of interest, like Lingshan Grand Buddha. You can visit parks, explore museums like Wuxi Museum, and try local food.
I love Wuxi because it's both modern and peaceful. I'm sure you'll enjoy its culture and natural beauty.
I am so excited that I can't wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Liu Fang
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，提纲作文要点整合，家乡主题表达
【点评】
本题属于初中常见的应用文写作题型，难度适中，核心要求是完整覆盖所有给定表格要点，同时不能生硬罗列信息，需要学生按照合理的逻辑顺序串联内容，适当补充符合生活常识的细节，让行文流畅自然，贴合邀请好友出游的轻松语境，同时满足词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提纲类英语邮件写作题，解题时首先要明确写作目标是给英国好友介绍家乡无锡，首先第一步先衔接题目给出的开头，自然引出对家乡的介绍；第二步按照表格的逻辑顺序，依次整合历史区位、城市环境、游玩活动三个模块的所有给定要点，不要遗漏任何表格信息；第三步在最后的感受部分补充1-2句贴合语境的内容，说明自己对家乡的喜爱，以及对好友游玩体验的期待，最后控制总词数在要求范围内，保证语句通顺，语气符合给好友写信的轻松感，不要生硬堆砌要点。
【解析】
1. 衔接给定开头：用"Let me tell you something about my hometown."自然引出下文介绍；
2. 介绍基础信息：将历史、区位的要点整合，写出对应内容，覆盖所有历史位置相关要点；
3. 介绍城市环境：围绕太湖、干净优美、名胜三个要点展开，补充小细节让内容更真实；
4. 介绍游玩活动：整合逛公园、参观博物馆、品尝美食的要点，补充具体例子让内容更生动；
5. 补充感受内容：按照要求拓展1-2句，自然衔接题目给出的结尾句，完成全文，同时检查所有要点是否全部覆盖，词数是否符合80词左右的要求，修正语法错误保证行文流畅。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Jenny,
I'm so glad you're coming to Wuxi for the Labour Day holiday. Let me tell you something about my hometown.
Wuxi has a history of over 2,000 years and is located in Jiangsu Province. It's only two hours away from Shanghai by car, so transportation is convenient.
Wuxi is famous for Taihu Lake. The city is clean and beautiful. There are many places of interest, like Lingshan Grand Buddha. You can visit parks, explore museums like Wuxi Museum, and try local food.
I love Wuxi because it's both modern and peaceful. I'm sure you'll enjoy its culture and natural beauty.
I am so excited that I can't wait to see you.
Best wishes,
Liu Fang
【知识点】
英文邮件写作，提纲作文要点整合，家乡主题表达
【点评】
本题属于初中常见的应用文写作题型，难度适中，核心要求是完整覆盖所有给定表格要点，同时不能生硬罗列信息，需要学生按照合理的逻辑顺序串联内容，适当补充符合生活常识的细节，让行文流畅自然，贴合邀请好友出游的轻松语境，同时满足词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.7