八、书面表达。(满分10分)(2025·江苏无锡锡山高级中学期中)
2025年无锡登上央视春晚舞台后,吸引了各地游客纷纷来无锡旅游。作为一名中学生,你打算拍摄一段短视频向中外游客宣传无锡。请根据以下流程图,写一写你心中的无锡。
【注意】1. 内容自拟,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意。
2. 括号内所给内容为非限定性表达,可自主合理发挥。
3. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 不得出现真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Welcome to Wuxi! Let me show you around my hometown. It is a beautiful and modern city with a history of more than 3,000 years.
It's really a wonderful city, isn't it? Come and see it with your own eyes!
2025年无锡登上央视春晚舞台后,吸引了各地游客纷纷来无锡旅游。作为一名中学生,你打算拍摄一段短视频向中外游客宣传无锡。请根据以下流程图,写一写你心中的无锡。
【注意】1. 内容自拟,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意。
2. 括号内所给内容为非限定性表达,可自主合理发挥。
3. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 不得出现真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Welcome to Wuxi! Let me show you around my hometown. It is a beautiful and modern city with a history of more than 3,000 years.
It's really a wonderful city, isn't it? Come and see it with your own eyes!
答案：One possible version
Welcome to Wuxi! Let me show you around my hometown. It is a beautiful and modern city with a history of more than 3,000 years.
Wuxi has many attractions, such as Turtle Head Park where you can admire the magnificent scenery of Tai Lake. The water is so clear that it reflects the blue sky and white clouds.
The traditional folk art here is also remarkable. Huishan clay figures, which are small but full of details, are very popular among tourists.
The local people are kind-hearted and always ready to help. They will make your visit here unforgettable.
It's really a wonderful city, isn't it? Come and see it with your own eyes!
Welcome to Wuxi! Let me show you around my hometown. It is a beautiful and modern city with a history of more than 3,000 years.
Wuxi has many attractions, such as Turtle Head Park where you can admire the magnificent scenery of Tai Lake. The water is so clear that it reflects the blue sky and white clouds.
The traditional folk art here is also remarkable. Huishan clay figures, which are small but full of details, are very popular among tourists.
The local people are kind-hearted and always ready to help. They will make your visit here unforgettable.
It's really a wonderful city, isn't it? Come and see it with your own eyes!
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：写一篇适配短视频宣传的无锡推介短文，核心要覆盖流程图给出的三个维度：名胜景点、传统民间艺术、当地居民。第一步先梳理写作逻辑：承接题目给出的开头，先介绍无锡的知名景点，把提示的鼋头渚、太湖的特色自然融入，补充少量景色细节让内容不空洞；接下来过渡到无锡的传统民间艺术，介绍惠山泥人等特色非遗的特点，体现地方文化魅力；最后介绍当地人民的性格特点，突出友善好客的特质。全程注意语句通顺连贯，控制补充内容的词数，符合80词左右的要求，也不要出现真实个人、学校信息，最后衔接题目给出的结尾即可。
【解析】
1. 搭建清晰的写作结构，三个段落分别对应三个提示模块，逻辑递进符合宣传内容的表达习惯：
① 第一部分写名胜：点出无锡有大量知名景点，举例鼋头渚，说明在这里可以欣赏太湖的绝美风光，补充湖水澄澈映着蓝天白云的小细节，让内容更生动。
② 第二部分写传统民间艺术：用过渡句引出无锡的传统民间艺术十分出色，介绍惠山泥人体型小巧细节丰富，深受游客喜爱，体现地方文化特色。
③ 第三部分写当地人民：点明本地居民都很热心友善，随时愿意为游客提供帮助，会让所有人的无锡之旅留下难忘的回忆。
2. 适当使用简单的复合句比如定语从句提升语句流畅度，避免全部用简单句堆砌，同时严格控制词数，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Wuxi has many attractions, such as Turtle Head Park where you can admire the magnificent scenery of Tai Lake. The water is so clear that it reflects the blue sky and white clouds.
The traditional folk art here is also remarkable. Huishan clay figures, which are small but full of details, are very popular among tourists.
The local people are kind-hearted and always ready to help. They will make your visit here unforgettable.
【知识点】
要点整合写作，介绍类应用文，定语从句运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类半开放作文，给出的核心写作方向非常明确，学生只需要按照三个提示模块依次填充内容，适当补充少量合理细节让内容更生动，注意语句衔接自然，不要遗漏要点，很容易拿到高分，写作时要注意贴合宣传的友好语气，不要生硬罗列提示词汇。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：写一篇适配短视频宣传的无锡推介短文，核心要覆盖流程图给出的三个维度：名胜景点、传统民间艺术、当地居民。第一步先梳理写作逻辑：承接题目给出的开头，先介绍无锡的知名景点，把提示的鼋头渚、太湖的特色自然融入，补充少量景色细节让内容不空洞；接下来过渡到无锡的传统民间艺术，介绍惠山泥人等特色非遗的特点，体现地方文化魅力；最后介绍当地人民的性格特点，突出友善好客的特质。全程注意语句通顺连贯，控制补充内容的词数，符合80词左右的要求，也不要出现真实个人、学校信息，最后衔接题目给出的结尾即可。
【解析】
1. 搭建清晰的写作结构，三个段落分别对应三个提示模块，逻辑递进符合宣传内容的表达习惯：
① 第一部分写名胜：点出无锡有大量知名景点，举例鼋头渚，说明在这里可以欣赏太湖的绝美风光，补充湖水澄澈映着蓝天白云的小细节，让内容更生动。
② 第二部分写传统民间艺术：用过渡句引出无锡的传统民间艺术十分出色，介绍惠山泥人体型小巧细节丰富，深受游客喜爱，体现地方文化特色。
③ 第三部分写当地人民：点明本地居民都很热心友善，随时愿意为游客提供帮助，会让所有人的无锡之旅留下难忘的回忆。
2. 适当使用简单的复合句比如定语从句提升语句流畅度，避免全部用简单句堆砌，同时严格控制词数，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Wuxi has many attractions, such as Turtle Head Park where you can admire the magnificent scenery of Tai Lake. The water is so clear that it reflects the blue sky and white clouds.
The traditional folk art here is also remarkable. Huishan clay figures, which are small but full of details, are very popular among tourists.
The local people are kind-hearted and always ready to help. They will make your visit here unforgettable.
【知识点】
要点整合写作，介绍类应用文，定语从句运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类半开放作文，给出的核心写作方向非常明确，学生只需要按照三个提示模块依次填充内容，适当补充少量合理细节让内容更生动，注意语句衔接自然，不要遗漏要点，很容易拿到高分，写作时要注意贴合宣传的友好语气，不要生硬罗列提示词汇。
【难度系数】
0.7