经典例题
你们学校的学生肖明因严重心脏病需要手术,但他家庭困难,无力承担昂贵的手术费。校学生会(The Students' Union)计划发起公益活动帮助他。请你根据以下要求,写一封呼吁全校师生伸出援手的公开信。
【要求】1. 说明其面临的困境。
2. 设计一项校园公益活动(如义卖、才艺表演、旧物捐赠等),明确活动的时间、地点,用于筹集医疗费用。
3. 用词准确、语句通顺,词数不少于 90。
你们学校的学生肖明因严重心脏病需要手术,但他家庭困难,无力承担昂贵的手术费。校学生会(The Students' Union)计划发起公益活动帮助他。请你根据以下要求,写一封呼吁全校师生伸出援手的公开信。
【要求】1. 说明其面临的困境。
2. 设计一项校园公益活动(如义卖、才艺表演、旧物捐赠等),明确活动的时间、地点,用于筹集医疗费用。
3. 用词准确、语句通顺,词数不少于 90。
答案:Dear teachers and schoolmates,
I'm writing to call on all of you to give a helping hand to our schoolmate Xiao Ming.
Xiao Ming is facing a terrible situation now. He has a serious heart disease and needs an immediate operation to save his life. But his family is very poor and can't afford the expensive medical fees. The high cost has become a huge barrier between him and recovery.
To help Xiao Ming get the treatment he needs, the Students' Union will hold a charity sale on the school playground this Saturday morning from 9:00 to 11:30. We will sell different kinds of things, including handmade cards, second-hand storybooks and beautiful handicrafts made by students. All the money we raise will be used to pay for Xiao Ming's operation.
Your kindness can make a big difference to Xiao Ming's life. No matter how much you contribute, every bit of help counts. Please come and join us to support Xiao Ming!
The Students' Union
May 20th
I'm writing to call on all of you to give a helping hand to our schoolmate Xiao Ming.
Xiao Ming is facing a terrible situation now. He has a serious heart disease and needs an immediate operation to save his life. But his family is very poor and can't afford the expensive medical fees. The high cost has become a huge barrier between him and recovery.
To help Xiao Ming get the treatment he needs, the Students' Union will hold a charity sale on the school playground this Saturday morning from 9:00 to 11:30. We will sell different kinds of things, including handmade cards, second-hand storybooks and beautiful handicrafts made by students. All the money we raise will be used to pay for Xiao Ming's operation.
Your kindness can make a big difference to Xiao Ming's life. No matter how much you contribute, every bit of help counts. Please come and join us to support Xiao Ming!
The Students' Union
May 20th
解析:
这是一篇呼吁类公开信,写作需采用“共情引入-困境说明-活动介绍-发出呼吁”的逻辑结构。开头点明写信初衷,用简洁语言介绍肖明的病情与家庭经济困境,引发读者共情;接着明确设计的公益活动(如义卖)的时间、地点与用途;最后用真诚的语言号召全校师生参与,确保内容完整、语句通顺,符合八年级英语写作的词汇与句式要求。