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请根据表格中的内容,以“A girl's life was changed by WWF”为题写一篇短文,不少于90词。

A girl's life was changed by WWF
请根据表格中的内容,以“A girl's life was changed by WWF”为题写一篇短文,不少于90词。
A girl's life was changed by WWF
One possible version
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals.
答案:One possible version
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals.
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals.
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道写作题,首先明确任务要求:结合表格给出的全部信息,以"A girl's life was changed by WWF"为题完成一篇不少于90词的短文。第一步先提取表格里的所有关键要素:核心人物是来自巴西的Lila,过去她全家依靠森林为生,却眼睁睁看着森林一点点消失;之后WWF的工作人员到访成为转折点,后续Lila加入了环境教育项目,最后需要自拟符合主题的未来规划。接下来按照时间发展的顺序搭建行文逻辑:先介绍人物和过去的背景,再讲WWF工作人员到来的契机,接着写Lila参与项目后的转变,最后补充贴合主题的未来理想,这样所有要点都能覆盖,逻辑通顺,也很容易达到字数要求。
【解析】
写作可按照四步完成:
1. 开篇引入:点明主人公身份,整合表格中"来自巴西的Lila、全家依赖森林、森林逐渐消失"的信息,交代故事背景,引出后续的转变。
2. 情节转折:对应表格"One day"的部分,补充WWF工作人员到访后向当地居民宣讲森林保护重要性的合理细节,自然引出后续Lila的选择。
3. 转变过程:对应表格"Later"的部分,介绍Lila加入环境教育项目之后的日常收获,体现她从对森林消失无措到主动学习环保知识的变化。
4. 结尾升华:对应表格"Future"的自拟要求,贴合环保主题,写出Lila未来想要成为自然保护者、守护森林和野生动物的理想,呼应标题中"被WWF改变人生"的核心。
全程注意时态切换:描述过去的经历用一般过去时,描述现在的状态和未来的打算分别用一般现在时和一般将来时,保证语法准确,行文连贯,满足字数要求。
【答案】
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作,时态正确运用,环保话题表达
【点评】
本题是表格提示类的叙事作文,所有核心要点都已经通过表格清晰给出,学生只需要按照时间先后顺序梳理叙事逻辑,补充少量符合场景的细节让行文流畅,注意不同时间对应的时态切换,最后补充的未来规划贴合人物经历和环保主题即可,既考察学生整合信息的能力,也引导学生建立生态保护的意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题,首先明确任务要求:结合表格给出的全部信息,以"A girl's life was changed by WWF"为题完成一篇不少于90词的短文。第一步先提取表格里的所有关键要素:核心人物是来自巴西的Lila,过去她全家依靠森林为生,却眼睁睁看着森林一点点消失;之后WWF的工作人员到访成为转折点,后续Lila加入了环境教育项目,最后需要自拟符合主题的未来规划。接下来按照时间发展的顺序搭建行文逻辑:先介绍人物和过去的背景,再讲WWF工作人员到来的契机,接着写Lila参与项目后的转变,最后补充贴合主题的未来理想,这样所有要点都能覆盖,逻辑通顺,也很容易达到字数要求。
【解析】
写作可按照四步完成:
1. 开篇引入:点明主人公身份,整合表格中"来自巴西的Lila、全家依赖森林、森林逐渐消失"的信息,交代故事背景,引出后续的转变。
2. 情节转折:对应表格"One day"的部分,补充WWF工作人员到访后向当地居民宣讲森林保护重要性的合理细节,自然引出后续Lila的选择。
3. 转变过程:对应表格"Later"的部分,介绍Lila加入环境教育项目之后的日常收获,体现她从对森林消失无措到主动学习环保知识的变化。
4. 结尾升华:对应表格"Future"的自拟要求,贴合环保主题,写出Lila未来想要成为自然保护者、守护森林和野生动物的理想,呼应标题中"被WWF改变人生"的核心。
全程注意时态切换:描述过去的经历用一般过去时,描述现在的状态和未来的打算分别用一般现在时和一般将来时,保证语法准确,行文连贯,满足字数要求。
【答案】
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作,时态正确运用,环保话题表达
【点评】
本题是表格提示类的叙事作文,所有核心要点都已经通过表格清晰给出,学生只需要按照时间先后顺序梳理叙事逻辑,补充少量符合场景的细节让行文流畅,注意不同时间对应的时态切换,最后补充的未来规划贴合人物经历和环保主题即可,既考察学生整合信息的能力,也引导学生建立生态保护的意识。
【难度系数】
0.6